Sunday, May 28, 2006

   AEGFF, Chapter 34!!!!
Well, here's AEGFF!! Sorry it's late by a day; I actually got around to this at 9:30... so yeah. Curse the MyO day change thingy when it becomes 10!! >.< Anyways, here it is. Enjoi.

Chapter 34

The day of the play rolled around, and the entire campus was buzzing about it; not only was it being held on school grounds, but there were rumors that a scout was going to be there as well. Max grinned; he’d gotten free tickets for him and Roxanne, thanks to Tera. However, when he came around to Roxanne’s dorm, she was coughing up a storm. She looked terrible, and told Max to go without her. He nodded and left, feeling a little bummed that he’d have to get rid of the extra ticket. Then, Joyce popped up out of nowhere and ripped it out of his hand.

“Thanks for inviting me, Max!” Joyce smiled at him, apparently not noticing his gaping expression, “I couldn’t get a ticket, so I decided to borrow your extra. You don’t mind, do you?” He shook his head no, a little peeved that she’d stolen it and was eavesdropping. They headed off for the show, not noticing Roxanne peeping out of her door. She pulled out a washcloth and wiped her face, most of her ill appearance going with it. It was a good thing she’d done the stage make-up; otherwise, she’d never have figured out a way to weasel out of the date with Max.

***

The play looked very interesting; it was starting by the time Max had gotten there with Joyce. They’d found their seats by Bobby and P.J. just as the curtain came up. Tera was on stage, dressed like a girly girl at a pajama party, it seemed. They were talking about her missing dad or something, and how she was going to track him down. The idea of Tera dressed up as a girly girl made him have to stifle a laugh, but it seemed to be a good premise thus far. After a few moments, however, she’d reappeared on set in a boy’s school uniform, among several other students.

“What’s up, homeslice?” Tera said in a mock deep voice, her character trying to be cool it seemed. However, whether it was scripted or not, she bowled over a guy who was walking in her direction, ending up straddling his waist when they’d stopped rolling. After a brief argument, they’d swapped names and stormed away from one another. The play was interesting to say the least; it was packed full of innuendo and strange twists.

Max’s favorite part was the scene where Tera’s character “Phil” ended up becoming the science partner of the boy she’d bumped into at the start of the play. They were arguing over what to do for a project; the actual guy’s physical fitness project and “Phil’s” solar system project. Eventually, the other guy (Who was apparently called James) caved in, saying that Phil was too soft for anything physical like that.

“You don’t even have a firm chest; you’re all soft like a girl.” James said, grabbing Phil’s chest without a thought. Everyone laughed at that, and Max could tell Tera was still surprised. However, whether instinctual or not, she punched him in the face, knocking him over and almost clear across the stage.

“I have a sensitive chest, you idiot!” Phil yelled, grabbing “his” chest, “that’s why I wear bandages there, you chowder head!” Then, Tera stormed off the stage again, bumping into the mysterious new teacher her character had been assuming might have been her real father because of his description. She apologized and left, leaving the scene for the teacher and James to talk out.

Later on in the play, James managed to eavesdrop of one of Phil’s phone calls, realizing “he” was really a girl in disguise. However, Phil had managed to figure out that the man “he’d” thought was his father was just a man who had looked like him. James confronted Phil in the hallway, revealing that he was in fact Lilly, who the mysterious teacher had now recognized. After being exposed, the teacher seemed to actually be Lilly’s father after all. However, instead of the Technicolor kiss they’d been expecting between James and Lilly, there was a fist in the face, and Tera’s character and the teacher left the stage, as the final curtain was drawn.

The audience cheered as the actors and actresses took a final bow, the guy who played James looking a little swollen; Tera hadn’t been letting up on his at all when she’d been hitting him. Then, the curtain closed again, and people went backstage to meet with the actors. Tera was swarmed by her family and friends, who were congratulating her. When she saw Max was alone, she looked surprised.

“I thought you came with Roxanne!” Tera shouted over the clamor, noise filling the backstage area. Max shook his head and had explained that she was sick; he didn’t notice Tera’s brief expression of joy when she’d made it. Then, he said he’d be going on another date with her to the House of Mouse; it would be easy to get there.

“Who’d be filling in for you as the valet though?” Tera asked. However, that problem was remedied quickly; Max suckered her in to fill in for him. Then, he was gone, along with the others. However, a strange looking man in a yellow tuxedo and matching sunglasses came up to her, smiling widely at her.

“Babe, you’re just what we need for our comedy troop!” The man grinned, patting her on the back, “you’re tough and you’re hilarious! Plus, our troop needs another girl. So, Tera, whaddaya say? You wanna be in our troop? We aren’t all that famous, so you won’t have to worry about being hassled.” The man was talking so fast she had barely been able to catch what he was saying. She was glad to hear she was being considered, but had really wanted to finish college.

“Um… I’ll get back to you on that…” Tera said to the man, moving his arm away from over her shoulder, “I wanna finish college… I’ll call you if I change my mind though, okay?” No sooner had she said it than he had produced a calling card, handed it to her and left. She stared at the card for a moment, then nodded, pocketing it and heading to her dorm room.

“So… I’m filling in for Max tomorrow…” Tera muttered to herself as she lay on her bed, “maybe if their date goes badly enough, I can scoop Max for myself as the rebound!” She grinned for a moment, before scolding herself for how selfish that was. If he was the kind of guy who’d go for her, she wanted him to do it on his own terms, instead of as a rebound relationship. Besides, rebounds didn’t last very long, as far as she knew.

Roxanne is a sneaky devil... but it's all for a good reason! She may seem a little out of character, but I'll reveal why when part 2 is done... anywayz... read and review!
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Saturday, May 27, 2006

   Bizarre Love Triangle, Chapter 16!!!
Well, here it is, on time! AEGFF probably won't be but whatever... anyways, here's Chapter 16, the day of the circus! w00t!

Chapter 16

The day of the circus had come, and it seemed Naruto’s potential date with Hinata had become a little group; Kiba and Hihana had tagged along as well. It was certainly interesting to watch; the strong man barely looked 14, yet he carried the cart everyone else was in on his shoulders. The members of the circus hopped out of the cart, surprisingly few in number for the amount of acts advertised. However, that was explained easily when they began the performance.

“Hey, that girl’s there!” Kiba pointed at a girl with long purple hair, the one who’d given them the flyer to the tournament and smelled of cats. She was apparently their acrobat; she was able to jump over the caravan by barely tensing her legs. All the members of the troop were fairly gifted, and looked as though they may have had shinobi training; the puppeteer was using chakra strings. Another was creating little illusions in the sky, and playing music as she did.

The only member of the group who didn’t seem to look very happy at the show was the ringmaster, who looked sternly out into the crowd. However, he did eventually get to do an act of his own, manipulating the water in the town fountain into hoops, which the acrobat jumped through easily. He also was able to make odd shapes, and create little copies of people within the town. Then, it seemed the final act was in order; the acrobat tossed two needles attached by wire in opposite directions, one landing on the wall of the ramen shop, the other on the Hokage’s office windowsill.

“Wow, look at her go!” Naruto shouted, marveling at how quickly she went up it; she wasn’t even using her arms for balance. It looked like she was about to fall off, but instead ended up rotating around the wire, and was now running up it upside-down. There were many cheers, and it was obvious she was enjoying herself. With everyone’s eyes on her, no one noticed the caravan vanish. Then, she entered the Hokage’s office and kicked out the wires, the needles plummeting into the ground.

“That was great!” Hihana shouted, clapping loudly before she noticed something, “hey… the caravan’s gone… oh shit!” She ran up to the Hokage’s office, followed by the other shinobi; they’d sensed a massive chakra in use, most likely belonging to Tsunade. Either that, or the acrobat was incredibly gifted for her age.

***

Tsunade had been fighting with Moroi as soon as she’d broken into her office and killed the ANBU who were guarding her. The girl, despite her young age was dangerous, and was parrying and taking Tsunade’s blows as though they were nothing. However, she wasn’t about to let the girl take her life; she’d realized Moroi was a member of the Kage no Jinchu.

“Who do you work for?” Tsunade yelled, retreating from Moroi for a moment to ask the question. However, Moroi had popped up behind her and kicked her out of the office through the window. Then, she was attacking the older kunoichi in the air, claws slashing and blows being dealt as they fell. However, Tsunade landed hard on her back and looked up at Moroi, blood leaking from her mouth

“I work for my sensei to liberate the nations…” Moroi whispered to Tsunade, her eyes looking guilty as she stared into the Hokage’s, “it’s a pity a strong shinobi like you has to die to realize that dream…” She smiled weakly, then grew out her claws and gouged Tsunade’s stomach, leaving a sizeable wound. However, she couldn’t finish the job and left early; the scent of blood was overwhelming her. In a flash, she was gone, leaving Tsunade to die in the street.

***

Tsunade awoke in the hospital, her apprentices Shizune and Sakura surrounding her, as well as the team she’d appointed to finding the Kage no Jinchu and Hihana. After yelling at them for not catching the assassin, she quieted down, thanking them for saving her… and for giving her some alcohol. They were mostly relieved, but then remembered the tournament… it was supposed to be held the next day.

“The Kage no Jinchu must’ve organized the tournament…” Tsunade said, “Naruto, Hinata, Kiba and Hihana… I want you to infiltrate it and kill the Kage no Jinchu. Prepare yourselves to fight the enemy.” She sighed and laid back on her bed, falling into sleep. However, another shinobi was listening in; Akuihebi Uragirimono grinned, sending a message to his special group of the black ops.

“Tomorrow we’re going to begin our operation…” Akuihebi hissed, “we’ll kill the Kage no Jinchu after the brats die and then Tsunade. Then I can be the hokage.” He chuckled to himself, vanishing from the hospital room before anyone had figured out he was there.

Well, hope you enjoyed! Read and review, please.
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Friday, May 19, 2006

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As you may have noticed, I am at the PARTAY asnd therefore am unable to put up the ficcies for you to read. Sides, you're all here too, so blehz. Anyway, I shall have them next week! ^____^
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Saturday, May 13, 2006

   Bizarre Love Triangle, Chapter 15!!!
Last chapter was a bit HinaKiba, and this chapter's a bit NaruHina, so yeah... nothing too advancy, but showing that there IS a love triangle going on. Anyways... enjoi. OH!! BTWE I'm doing alot of planning for the next chapter of AEGFF (The Play), so it's not up this week. Sorry!

Chapter 15

Naruto had been constantly training with Hihana for the last few weeks, and she was starting to bother him. He couldn’t even enjoy his ramen without having to race her while eating it. Not only that, but he was also tired of her kicking his butt every day when they sparred. He could barely keep up with her, and she was always just getting started. Fortunately for him, she had fallen asleep at their usual sparring area and he was able to escape. That’s when he bumped into his current teammate, Hinata.

“Oh, hey Hinata!” Naruto smiled at her, not noticing her starting to blush, “I managed to escape Hihana today; she fell asleep ‘cause she only sleeps once every three days, usually for a whole day. Wanna go do something fun?” The whole concept seemed interesting to Hinata; she was feeling light-headed from the idea. As much as her body wanted her to faint, she wouldn’t allow herself; not this time.

“Um… sure N-Naruto…” Hinata said, her hands instinctively going up in front of her, “wanna g-go get ice cream?” She stuttered, and got angry with herself; she hadn’t stuttered in years. Naruto didn’t seem to care though; he just nodded, took her hand and headed off to the ice cream shop. Unfortunately, he had to revive Hinata prior to going; she’d fainted from holding his hand.

After a while, they’d finally arrived at the ice cream parlor and ordered their treat. Hinata had herself a bubblegum flavored ice cream, while Naruto got a simple vanilla one. She was surprised he had gotten such a bland flavor; the ice cream vendor had recently come up with a new flavor called “Sea salt Ice Cream” that was supposed to be very popular. However, she didn’t want to ask; the way he was eating the ice cream was adorable. Somehow, Naruto had managed to get his face covered in ice cream.

“Here, let me help you with that.” Hinata said, wiping his face off with a napkin. Then, she dropped it, as though mortified; she’d actually touched Naruto without getting nervous. After doing a happy dance on the inside, she began to eat her own ice cream again when a loose piece of paper slapped her in the face and got stuck to her.

“Hey, what’s this thing?” Naruto asked, prying it off, “hey the circus is coming to town tomorrow!!! Wanna go, Hinata?” He smiled like a kid in a candy store; Hinata just nodded numbly at him, not comprehending that he’d just asked her out. Then, the silence was broken by a loud yell, sounding like “WHY THE HELL DID YOU ABANDON ME, YOU JERK?!” Then, Hihana was there, popping up out of the blue. Hinata dropped her ice cream in surprise, the short jounin now stomping on Naruto, as she’d knocked him off the bench.

“I could’ve been raped in that park while all alone and asleep!” Hihana yelled, still hopping on the shinobi, “you’re lucky! I’m gonna kick your ass twice as hard tomorrow when we train… wait, there’s gonna be a circus?” After a few moments of begging, Hihana “convinced” Naruto to take her to the circus with him and Hinata. When she noticed that Hinata had dropped her ice cream, she apologized and handed her some money, before vanishing again.

Hinata just sighed; it looked like it wouldn’t be a date after all. She pocketed the money and left, going back to the Hyuuga manor, leaving a battered and bruised Naruto lying in front of the ice cream cart. After he registered he was going to the circus with two girls, he grinned airily and walked home, secretly wishing he could’ve gone with just Hinata; it’d be much quieter that way.

Well, hope you enjoyed it; the rad stuff is coming up soon... some sad bits too. >__<;; Anyway, read and review.
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Sunday, May 7, 2006

   AEGFF, Chapter 33!!!!
Here's AEGFF! Writing the song was hard, and it prolly sucks, but you guys are the judges... so yeah. The chapter may look a bit longer... but it's just 'cause of the song.... anyway, enjoi!

Chapter 33

Tera had stayed up late editing her song; it just seemed lame every time she’d reread it. However, she had settled on a song after several changes, and finally went to bed. The next day, she woke up early and headed off to the House of Mouse, asking some of her classmates to dump the stuff she would miss off at her dorm. Fortunately, Huey, Dewey and Louie would be there as well; they needed to practice the song as well, since they’d be playing it with her.

“Thanks for coming, you guys,” Tera said when she arrived, tossing her coat onto a chair as she rushed in with her guitar and a piece of paper, “I owe you so much for deciding to help me out.” The ducks didn’t say much, so she just decided to start off. She played her guitar slowly and softly, her voice seeming to match. For a moment, they’d been expecting a soft ballad. However, she slammed on the guitar, getting as loud as she could, yet still maintaining sad softness in her (loud) voice.

Once she’d finished the song, the ducks told her how good she’d done… or at least, that’s what she thought they’d said; like their uncle Donald, they seemed to speak in an incomprehensible way that only they could understand. It seemed they’d liked it –she’d understood that part. So, they began practicing, playing the song until it seemed to fit with her vocals and guitar.

***

“Thanks so much, you guys!” Tera smiled, now that they’d practiced for the last few hours, “you guys were a big help… I hope we do good on-stage tonight!” She smiled and ran off, almost forgetting her coat on the way out. The ducks smiled, high-fiving each other; it seemed they’d found themselves a lead singer.

***

Max had been invited to see Tera perform; he’d managed to suck P.J. into being a replacement valet for the time being. He was sitting at a table by himself; Roxanne hadn’t been able to come to the show that night. However, he knew she’d be able to come to Tera’s play that Sunday. After all, they were going together. Mickey Mouse popped up on-stage, introducing the musical guest that night; Tera Aoki, playing with Quack Sabbath.

“Thank you all!” Tera shouted, wearing a formal looking suit up on the stage, “I was playing violin outside, and I guess I’m supposed to play and sing inside for you guys tonight. I hope you like the song; I wrote it myself as an epitaph for my brother and father. Hope you guys like it!” She looked a little nervous, but it seemed to ebb away when she began strumming the guitar. After a few moments of interlude, she opened her mouth, and began to sing.

“I need someone to talk to; I know that you’d listen to me. We were close, but now, you’re gone; your face is what I see…” Tera sang, the song beginning slowly, before drumsticks were clicked together and the band began to play at a much more upbeat tempo, “I wish I could’ve saved you… I guess I was too late. I couldn’t help our dad either; we’re all victims of fate.

“But I’ll stay strong,” Tera sang, the song slowing down momentarily for the chorus, “and I’ll carry on, ‘cause I know you wouldn’t want to see me in pain. In my heart, you’ll stay, now and every day, ‘cause I know that’s where it’s all okay… in my heart.” The song resumed it’s upbeat tempo again, and there was another moment of interlude. Tera winked at Max and continued on, rocking out with Quack Sabbath.

“Without you two, I stumbled, I couldn’t bear to fight
The sorrow that I felt for you; I cried every night.
But now I know you’re safe, ‘cause you’re now with me.
And maybe we can all wake up, and this’ll be a dream!” Tera said the song happily, the chorus partaking in the fast tempo as she sang it twice.

“Okay, maybe it IS real, and you’re gone for good… But I’ll stay strong and cheerful; I know that you two would!” Tera grinned, the song still flowing nicely, “And I will stay strong, and I’ll carry on, ‘cause I know you wouldn’t want to see me in pain. In my heart you’ll stay, now and every day, ‘cause I know that’s where it’s all okay… in my heart” The song slowed down again, and it was definitely at the end now.

“Maybe someday… I’ll find a way
to see you both again… but for now…” Tera sang, smiling at the audience, “I’m glad you both reside… in my heart…” She held the last note for a moment, the group bowing to the applause of the audience. Max even cheered, and Tera’s heart swelled.

“Thank you, and have a pleasant tomorrow!” Tera smiled, waving at the audience as she left, where she was hounded by staff and visitors alike, asked to go on stage every week; it seemed they’d really liked the song, although she hadn’t thought it was very good. Max came up and congratulated her last, saying that she had to have a lot of guts to be able to get up on stage.

“I can’t imagine ever doing that.” Max smiled, “If you’re that great singing, I can’t imagine how great you’ll be acting in the play!” She blushed and said he was over-exaggerating, but took him up on the offer to ride back to the dorm in his jalopy; she’d walked to the House of Mouse… and she REALLY liked both Max and the vehicle.

Hope you liked it! Feel free to talk about the crappy song I wrote for Tera to write. Critcism is appreciated, so review, please! If you read the story to get to this part, at least.
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   Bizarre Love Triangle, Chapter 14!!!
Well, here's Bizarre Love Triangle again, just because I believe in finishing what I start, and this fic will not be left ending-less so I can work on my KH ficcies... oh shit, I spoiled it. Ah well, here's Bizarre Love Triangle... enjoy.

Chapter 14

“Morning, Hinata.” Kiba said, thrusting out a handful of flowers, “I picked these just for you…. no, that won’t work!” He was really beating himself up over this idea; he’d been working on telling her for a few weeks now. It was fairly obvious – at least he thought it was- that he had a crush on Hinata... it had been getting stronger as the years went by. Akamaru barked happily, telling Kiba Hinata would be glad anyway.

“Hmph, you’re right, Akamaru!” Kiba grinned, “she’ll like the flowers anyway! Let’s go, boy!” He grabbed his pooch and ran off, the flowers in hand as he went. Hinata had been training for the last few weeks, should the dangerous Kage no Jinchu arrive. Naturally, he assumed she’d be training that morning. Fortunately for him, he could also sniff her out easily, thanks to his advanced sense of smell.

Hinata, like he’d assumed, was training hard down by the Academy, in the Training Grounds. She was using the “Shugohakke Rokujuu Yonshou”, a clan technique translated as “Guardian of Eight Divination Seals: Sixty-Four Strikes.” It was an amazing technique; a few years back, she’s been able to defeat an enemy summon familiar using the technique; a gigantic moth.

“Oh, hello Kiba.” Hinata said, stopping when she’d noticed her friend, “are you here to train too?” He shook his head no, and handed her the flowers, blushing bright red as he did so. Unfortunately, he hadn’t noticed what had become of the flowers… until Hinata pointed it out to him.

“Um… thanks for the stems, Kiba…” Hinata joked, taking them from her friend, “don’t be upset Kiba… it’s the thought that counts.” She’d noticed his expression, and his dirty hands and the roots on the flowers told her he’d picked them himself. As much as she liked Naruto, she was glad she had a friend who would cheer her up and help her get the confidence to go and tell him.

“So yeah… let’s train, Hinata.” Kiba smiled, “I bet we’d be able to take on those freaks any day, AND one of us will win that tournament too! I won’t go easy on you just ‘cause you’re a girl either…” He brushed his thumb past his nose, not noticing Hinata moving towards him. She pushed him over, laughing at him as she did.

“You won’t make it past the first round if you can’t even pay attention.” Hinata smiled, offering him her hand. He took it readily, smiling and pulling himself up. Training would be fun that day.

***

Things weren’t so peaceful in Konoha Forest. Moroi and Tataku were sparring once again, and they were vicious. They exchanged blows in midair, occasionally using special techniques to try and thwart one another. Although Tataku’s strength was far greater, Moroi was able to land more hits, and had her friend on the ropes. They were sparring on the lake; their sensei had broken it for them so that they could work on chakra control as well.

“Suitama no Jutsu! Art of the Water Spheres!” Moroi said, doing the seals and collecting the water in little droplets around her. Tataku hadn’t seen her use this technique before… let alone anyone else. Then, with a simple hand sign, Moroi was able to fire the water like bullets at her sparring partner, aiming carefully as to be sure he wouldn’t be fatally wounded. After the technique grazed him and drew blood, he cried out in surprise, and fell into the lake.

“I did it, Rei-sensei!” Moroi cheered, jumping on the water while her sensei observed, “I did the seals with only one hand! Yay!!” Reikoku just grinned, and was impressed by how far his protégé was coming; not even he could do one-handed seals. Clapping, he walked over to Moroi, patting her on the shoulder.

“Moroi-kun.” Reikoku said, smiling, “you really have progressed. That’s why I’d like to appoint you to assassinate the Hokage. Plus, you can also be my personal bodyguard.” He hadn’t added that Moroi was the only one he truly trusted among them, but it seemed inconsequential at the moment. Besides, his student probably would smother him to death in a hug if he’d said that.

“Thank you, Rei-sensei!” Moroi grinned happily, tackling her teacher into the water and hugging him, “you won’t regret it; I won’t screw up!” She smiled and ran off, cheering and jumping around like a lunatic. Tataku looked over at his teacher, a little surprised at his decision. However, he couldn’t really argue; it seemed Moroi was the strongest among them, as well as the fastest-progressing.

“Good choice, sensei.” Tataku smiled, “Moroi-kun was a good choice for the job.” He walked away from his teacher, who simply grinned; he had an elite force of fighters, and they were going to set the world free.

“I’m glad that our team has such strong members…” Reikoku said quietly, his eyes taking their cold appearance again, “I just hope we don’t have to go around freeing the countries again after we’ve finished…” He knew his plan was flawed, but by taking out the strongest, their new leader would most likely be weak… so it’d be easy picking if they had to go around again. And if any members of the team didn’t survive, he could do the assassinations personally.

Shitty ending, I know, but whatever. Hope you enjoyed it!
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Monday, May 1, 2006

   AEGFF, Chapter 32!!!!
Wel, here's AEGFF, all by it's lonesome... it'll be accompanied by Bizarre Love Triangle on Saturday. But for now, this is the only ficcie. Enjoy!

Chapter 32

The day of the auto show finally arrived, and Max was psyched to go. After persuading Tera to walk instead of take the motorcycle, they headed off to the show. It seemed like Tera knew the way off by heart, and was leading Max along while they spoke. It was mostly about the House of Mouse, and their duties to the place.

“I’m still having a hard time writing lyrics to a song…” Tera admitted sheepishly, smiling. Max just grinned, asking if she might be a regular performer at the club. Shrugging, she said that she’d just see how the first night went; after all, it wasn’t like she could expect to be the crowd favorite. She turned the corner, Max following like a lost dog, and gasped in awe when he saw the area the auto show to place in.

It was full of cars, mostly classics and some new cars that he hadn’t even seen advertised yet. Tera had already run off and was fawning over a Ferrari; he recognized the logo. After he decided that Tera would be off looking at the fancy cars for a while, he went on a search for a car he could buy. Unfortunately, everything was WAY out of his price range.

“Holy shit; is it actually legal to sell stuff for this much?” Max asked himself, seeing the price of a vehicle he’d thought he could afford, “at this rate, I’ll never get a car…” He sighed, turning around and crying out in surprise when he saw Tera there. After she helped him up, she said she could help him find a car in his range. Unfortunately for Max, there weren’t any cars in his range… maybe in 23 years, but definitely not now.

“Maybe you can get your dad to help pay? I’m sure he’d let you get a car if he could see how well you’re doing as the valet.” Tera suggested, before she took a picture of a motorcycle that had tires bigger than her actual body, “or maybe he could help you find a used car that doesn’t suck too much.” He nodded, saying he’d try to talk his dad into it when he went to work.

***

That night at work was interesting, to say the least. His dad wasn’t about to let him get a car, so with Mickey and Minnie’s help, he was going to try and prove to his dad that he was responsible enough. Unfortunately, when an automated car drove up and ended up being driven into a wall inside the House of Mouse, his dad was sure he wouldn’t be able to take care of his own vehicle.

However, Max was able to unearth a little dirt on his dad; apparently, some people had videotaped his dad doing drag races when he was about Max’s age. Goofy saw and decided it might be a good idea to help Max with his request. Goofy’s heart was in the right place, but instead of helping Max get a car, he got him his own parking space. Now, as cool as having your own parking space is… you kind of need a car. Fortunately, that wacko Professor Von Drake drove up in a beaten down jalopy

“This won’t do... better keep it away from Mr. Toad….” Prof. Von Drake said to himself, slapping a For Sale sign on the car’s windshield. It was only for $50, which was rather fortunate for Max. After giving his dad the ol’ puppy dog eyes, he caved and they split buying the car. Max gave his dad a hug, and then took the car for a spin; fortunately, he wasn’t a terrible driver. The car was old and beaten down (the price was accurate) and the car backfired every once and a while, but it was his.

“Oh my God!! A jalopy!” Tera grinned, looking at Max’s car when he’d brought it back to campus, “these things are so cool! I can’t believe you even found one, let alone got it for $50!” She was glad he had been fortunate in finding a car; it seemed she’d finally written a song that night too. Perhaps they’d both be ready for what was to be happening the next night.

Yeah, I hope this one wasn't too bad. I don't think it came out as well as it could've, but it's not too bad. Anyway, read and review, merci beaucoup!
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Tuesday, April 25, 2006

   A year and a day!
It has come to my attention I've been on MyO for a year and a day! How MARVELOUS. Anyways... yeah, pointless update. ENJOY.
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Wednesday, April 19, 2006

AEGFF, Chapter 31!!!!
Hey there! 'Tis chapter 31 of AEGFF! HoM is a comedy club in this ficcy, pertaining to the residents of Spoonerville only... yeah, having other disney characters was cool, but it wouldn't work in this ficcy.

Chapter 31

“Wait a minute…” Max began, speaking to his father in the library, “there’s a job available for me at the club you work at?” His dad nodded, the grin on his face fading when Max said “no way.” However, Goofy eventually suckered him into trying for the job. Apparently, they needed a valet; fortunately, Max also had wanted a little driving practice.

So Max had gone to the House of Mouse, which was apparently a comedy club on the corner of Main Street. Once he got in, he noticed how hectic the club was; apparently, it had only opened a few days ago and they were working on a few minor details before allowing the guests to enter that night. Something had happened to the lighting, it seemed. Mickey Mouse was helping with the work, Donald Duck yelling at everyone like a taskmaster. To Max’s surprise, the building was full of penguins, which were helping with the repairs.

“Oh, hey Goofy!” Mickey called, his high voice carrying through the club easily, “is that Max? I haven’t seen him since he was this big!” The mouse chuckled when he held his hand just above his head. Goofy smiled and told Mickey about his son’s predicament, and the bind they were in monetarily. The mouse nodded and said they needed a maitre d’ and (as Goofy had told Max earlier) a valet. Oddly enough, Goofy became the maitre d’, despite the fact that he was hopelessly klutzy and would have to be balancing things.

Needless to say, Max took the role of the valet. Fortunately, he had a driver’s license, and wasn’t quite as clumsy as his father. When the club opened that night, he did fairly well at bringing in the cars. However, he’d never expected to see Tera there. She’d brought a case with her, and was standing outside of the door.

“What’re you doing here, Tera?” Max asked, smiling at her.

“Well, I was going to congratulate you… and make fun of your uniform.” Tera smiled, “but then I figured I could be a street performer and mooch a little money off the people who come to the club!” She opened the case and pulled out a violin and its bow, and began to play the violin. After a few moments of play, Max was able to recognize the song. He hadn’t really been expecting to hear an AC-DC song played on a violin before.

Some people passing by put money into the case, and she smiled at Max, who looked pleasantly surprised. Since all the club goers had already arrived, he was able to make requests from Tera. Eventually, she’d gotten bored and decided to play a song from a video game she liked. It was a little creepy sounding (according to her, it was called One Winged Angel.), but it did show off how well she could play the violin.

Soon, the club goers left, commenting on how much fun they’d had. Then, after listening to Tera’s songs for a while, they dumped small amounts of money into her case and left - as soon as Max had brought their cars back, that is. Then, Mickey Mouse himself came out and listened to Tera play. After a few moments of chat, they’d agreed to allow her play on-stage in the club.

“I’ll play my guitar, if that’s okay…” Tera said, smiling when Mickey said it was okay. Then, the mouse left with his girlfriend, Donald, Daisy and Goofy leaving soon after.

“Looks like you don’t have a car, Maxie boy.” Tera grinned, “that means you ride in the bitch seat!” She laughed, putting the violin into its case and telling Max to hold it. After a few minutes of screaming from poor Max, they were back at the dorm, where Tera took her violin and grinned at Max, who looked a little… shall we say, nauseous. After a moment, Tera came over and looked at her friend, asking the question his friends had asked many times before.

“Why don’t you have a car?” Tera asked, “there’s an auto show coming up soon, and since I’m only going to sub in for Mrs. Mandrake’s replacement teacher, I can take you there to scout out a new ride! What do ya say, buddy?” After a few moments of thinking, he agreed, and left for his dorm.

“I’ll finally have a car! That’ll make it much easier than having to ask Bobby for his van all the time…” Max grinned, looking forward to going to the car show. And, even though he was still linked to Roxanne, he liked the idea of being able to spend time with Tera.

Hee hee, well, there it is... it'll be better at the end of the week, I promise. Anywayz... read and review, please!
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Bizarre Love Triangle, Chapter 13!!!
Well, this'll be the last we see of the Kage no Jinchu for a few chapters; I need to work up on Naruto's side of the story. Here it is!

Chapter 13

Moroi heard Tataku coming; he was clumsy sometimes, and he’d tripped over the log trap she’d set. Quickly, she submersed herself deep into the water, so that only her nose and eyes were peeking out. When he reached the lake, he was a bit surprised to see Moroi submersed as ‘he’ was. Tataku smiled and asked ‘him’ what exactly ‘he’ was doing. Moroi just said that she was swimming around, now that she was all clean.

“If you’re just swimming, I’ll join you.” Tataku grinned, stripping to his skivvies and jumping into the water. He’d missed Moroi’s horrified glance, and almost landed on her when he cannonballed into the pond. She moved out of the way and avoided getting too close, or going above chest level in the water.

“What’s wrong with you, Moroi-kun? Too cool to wrestle in the water?” Tataku grinned, tackling Moroi into the water. She cried out in surprise for two reasons; number 1: he may have just blown her secret, and number 2: she felt something on her leg. After escaping her friend’s clutches, she popped up facing away from him on the land. She was blushing bright red, but he couldn’t tell because of the mist that she’d made earlier.

“Um, yeah Tataku, that was lots of fun, but I’m a bit tired since I’m all clean now, I’m gonna go. Buh-bye!” Moroi said, pulling on her clothes and running off back to the cabin. Tataku couldn’t help but notice his friend had a very feminine body shape. It was odd, but for a moment, he thought he’d felt something a guy shouldn’t have. However, he dismissed the idea and continued swimming around, enjoying the surprising warmth of the pond. After making sure no one had “went”, he continued on his merry way.

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Moroi had forgotten about Takatobi, who tackled her as soon as she got in through the door. Rei-sensei was still talking to Haruka and Guujin, so they were off somewhere else in the woods, and probably wouldn’t be found unless they wanted to be. So, Moroi had to endure her friend’s harassment and just hope that Rei-sensei would return soon.

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“So… who’s going to do the assassination of Hokage?” Guujin asked, not bothering to reprimand Haruka for playing around with his puppets, “my puppets could do the job easily if we got them into her office easily.” Reikoku just shook his head, reminding him that he needed to be in the office as well, and wasn’t very good at sneaking up on people.

“I volunteer my prized pupil.” Reikoku said, “Tsukineko Moroi. In our “circus”, she’s doing a tightrope act, in which she could easily infiltrate the Hokage’s office and kill her. Plus, she’s agile and would be able to escape much faster than one of your blocky puppets.” Guujin frowned, but decided he agreed. Haruka shot Reikoku a glazed look before asking a familiar “what?” It was almost impossible to catch her paying attention to anything.

“Let’s get back to the cabin… I’m sure that my team is tired of hanging around each other, so I’d best go separate them.” Reikoku said, before taking off. The other two followed, although Haruka only noticed a few moments after they’d left. So, she ran off after them, falling out of a tree she’d tried to jump to and landing on the forest floor. Sighing, she decided to walk back to the cabin, figuring she’d get there when she got there.

Well, there you have it. Hope you enjoyed it! Read and review!
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