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Monday, September 19, 2005


   Naruto Review!
Yesh, I shall be reviewing the Naruto premiere... and I'm aware that happened like three days ago. Shut up, lol.

Naruto was a bit odd; the voices will take some getting used to... and the way their names are said is weird. Everyone's name has three syllables that are all said in the same way. NA-RU-TO, SA-SU-KE, I-RU-KA, MI-ZU-KI... it's annoying when they fag up their japanese names...

Oh well, at least it stayed true to the manga!!

Speaking of manga, I found the perfect one for Roiben!! It's called "DEATH-NOTE" and it's about this dude that gets a book that can kill people if you write their name in it!! Sound appealing, Roiben?

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Saturday, September 17, 2005


AEGFF Chapter 4
Tee hee, I'm on a roll! I hope you like this chapter!

Chapter 4

Max, P.J. and Bobby got to the skate park before Tera did. She walked in with a trick bike, watching as they did their tricks. Max was by far the best, or at least on skateboard. Bobby was able to do some very interesting moves while grinding on the rails, and P.J. got some good bike rounds in.

“Hey Tera, aren’t you gonna join in?” Max asked Tera, who simply grinned. She brought her bike up to the ramp, gulping slightly from the steepness. She’d never gone DOWN a ramp before; only up and away. However, she put on a brave face, and hopped on, steadying herself. The guys got off the ramp, and she started her ride.

“I don’t think I can do this!” Tera shouted as she started down, pulling the bike into a catwalk. She screamed at the top of her lungs, accidentally doing most of the tricks that P.J. had to practice desperately to perform. She got to the other side, and almost wiped out. However, before her face got planted, she grasped the trick bars on the back wheel, and lifted herself up on them. It was a very interesting stall move; definitely not something that had been done before.

“Am I doing okay?” Tera asked, lifting a hand off the handle to hold up the front of her shirt. Max, P.J. and Bobby only nodded, mouths gaping wide. She chuckled, gaining confidence. She flipped the bike out from under her, and landed on the seat, grinning. She did a few more interesting freestyle tricks, before riding off the ramp and landing next to the guys.

“Um… I’m sorry if I one upped you, P.J.… it’s just I’m good with bikes; the idea of doing that with a skateboard or roller skates freaks me out.” Tera said apologetically, sighing with relief when P.J. assured her it was okay. She smiled, then began doing a few more tricks with the guys.

“Say Tera… our X Games team is kinda small, and we could use another person on the team. So… would you like to…?” Max began, not needing to finish the question. Tera smiled at him and nodded, looking down at his hand when he offered it for a shake. She grinned, then walked over, leaning forward to shake his hand. Before he knew what was happening, she leaned up and kissed him on the cheek.

“I’d love to join the team. Now c’mon, I’m starved. Let’s go get some lunch.” Tera grinned, leaving a blushing and bewildered Max behind her. Bobby and P.J. followed,, leaving Max alone. He took that brief moment where he laughed “a-hyuck!” like his father did. Then, he ran after the group, smiling.

“Hey, wait for me!!” Max called, chasing after his three friends and teammates.

***

“So, we’re going to Club Rave now?” Tera asked, tying her hair up in a scrunchie, grinning as Max nodded, “alright! I’ve wanted to get some dancing in. Maybe you’d like to join me?” She joked about the last part poking Max. He chuckled, and they walked over to her motorcycle. Tera got on the front, leaving the bitch seat for Max. He took it grudgingly; Tera had informed him of what it was called.

“Hold me tight.” Tera said, leaving Max bewildered for a moment. This wasn’t a request for a hug, however; it was a command to hold on for dear life. She took off on the bike, wind whipping past them. Max almost fell off, but he was able to get a good grip on her before he did. Before he knew it, they were at Club Rave; a little club that was all public. That meant no scary bouncers and no lists to worry about.

“You know, you can left go now.” Tera said, walking up to the door. Max hadn’t noticed that he’d wrapped his legs and arms around Tera’s torso, and was still holding on tight. He laughed uneasily and slipped off, blushing slightly.

“Sorry…” Max managed to say, Tera smiling at him good-naturedly. The two walked into the dance club, light shining from the roof and the floor. They were able to find P.J. and Bobby quickly, as they looked bored and were waiting by a plate full of cheese covered nachos.

“Hey, you two are finally here!!” Bobby chuckled, gesturing for them to come over, “hurry, the nachos are getting cold! OW OW OW OW!!” He howled, Tera and Max laughing quietly to themselves. They walked over to their friends, and sat down. Tera ignored Bobby’s plight to sit next to him, and nestled herself in between Max and P.J..

“So, we’re going to beat the Gammas again this year, right?” Max said, talking motivationally to his friends. He picked a cheese covered nacho off the top of the pile as he said it, holding it up like he was expecting a toast.

“They didn’t beat us last year, did they?” Bobby added, plucking another nacho and raising it near Max’s. Tera caught on, waiting for her turn to grab a nacho.

“Even if they cheat, we’ll be ready!” P.J. grinned, raising the third nacho. Tera leaned forward, grabbing a forth and raising it next to the others’.

“The look on good ol’ Chadwick’s face when we win is going in my mental scrapbook!” Tera chuckled, raising her nacho. The group nodded, pulling their nachos back for a few seconds.

“LET’S DO IT TO IT!!” They shouted in unison, knocking the chips together. After they did that, they proceeded to shovel handfuls of nachos into their mouths, getting covered in cheese around their faces. One of the girl’s from the college walked over, looking disgusted at them.

“Who let the pigs out of the barn?” She commented, smiling wickedly. Tera, not one to take something like this lying down, swallowed her nachos and wiped the cheese off of her face. “Whoa, watch out! The amazon’s angry!” The girl cooed in sing-song, grinning at the angry twitch under Tera’s eye.

“Alright. It’s one to insult my friends, and it’s another to insult me, but insulting our eating habits? Why not go have an after-dinner barf, Queen Bulimia?” Tera shouted, angrily looking over at the woman. She grinned at her expression, which was one of disbelief.

“Oh, it’s on. I challenge you to a dance off!” The girl said, pointing at Tera, who chuckled. Quietly, she took off her scrunchie, palming it. She slid past Max, standing next to the girl.

“Max, hold my scrunchie.” Tera said, handing the elastic to Max, “I have to go teach someone how to dance.”

Sorry for the evil cliffies!! I just wanna give a reason for reading next week!! T_T Don't spear me!

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   Fake Wings, Chapter 4
Surprisingly, I was able to get the time to post this update!! My update about Naruto will come tomorrow, so if you're actually reading this, I actually WILL have an update in between the story.

Chapter 4

When Ian returned to meet Minoru, he was sporting a pair of shuko; claw-like weapons worn on the fists. Minoru was carrying his scythe, a weapon which is self explanatory. The two nodded grimly, and set off to the barrier, where they would begin their trek through the forest and desert to fight the hunters. Ian cut his palm with his claws and traced a door upon the dome, which opened quickly.

“I can heal myself faster than others.” Ian said, the wound glowing as the flesh sewed itself back together. Minoru nodded, and the headed for the forest. Fortunately for them, their search for Terra was short lived. A soldier stepped forth from the brush, carrying her under his arm. The soldier looked panicked, and took out a semi-automatic, clicking off the safety.

However, before the man even had a chance to fire, his head was separated from his shoulders. Minoru thanked his lucky stars for being able to teleport; if he hadn’t had the ability, he probably would’ve been killed. The man slumped on the ground, blood gushing from the aorta and jugular in his neck. Ian retched at the sight, the foul stank of blood overwhelming him.

“I suppose that’s Terra, then?” Ian asked, gesturing to the girl with sandy blonde hair, who was slowly being splashed with blood. Minoru nodded and moved her out of the pooling crimson, brushing her hair out of her eyes. It was evident that there had been needles inserted all over her body; there were minute scars along her forehead and down her arms and legs.

“M-Minoru…?” Terra spoke softly, opening her eyes briefly. He looked more upset than she did. That was, of course, until she began to weep ceaselessly. Loudly, she began recounting the terrible things that she’d gone through over the span of, apparently, a day. A female hunter had taken pity upon her, and ordered her free, unfortunately not before she’d been exposed to a set of grueling and grotesque experiments.

“Terra… I’m going to make them pay for what they did… please, wait here…” Minoru said, standing his sore sister upon her feet. She shook her head slowly, frowning. Two things were evident in her expression. One, she would not allow him to go seeking revenge for her. Two, she wasn’t going to stay left behind in their destroyed city.

“I’m going with you…. both of you.” Terra said, her expression sealing the deal. Minoru didn’t have the heart to turn her down. Ian kicked the body into the forest, retching again upon the bleeding carcass. Minoru ushered Ian over, who wiped his mouth clean of vomit and returned to their little group.

“Okay, so here’s the plan…”

***
“Izayoi!!” A friendly voice shouted, approaching at a high speed. The hunter perked her head, leaning up from her vehicle. She was used to working maintenance upon it, as she usually did. It gave her something to distract her from the terrible things that Otomaru was doing to the prisoners.

“What do you want, Tenji?” Izayoi asked, looking up at her friend, wiping oil smears away from under her bad eye. Tenji, as Izayoi called her, was a bioengineered being; half human, half fox. Specifically, Tenji was meant to be a weapon; she was an Alter with incredible abilities, which was why Hadden had abducted her.

“Oh nothing,” Tenji chuckled, rubbing the two black stripes under each of her eyes, “I just wanted to talk.” She smiled, her furry, red tail waggling behind her. Tenji’s physical appearance was fairly simple; she had shoulder-length red hair, red fur all over her body, bright green eyes, and two distinct, black stripes under her eyes. For some reason, she dressed like a Japanese priestess; baggy red pants that looked like a skirt, and a short-sleeved white shirt.

“Well, out with it then.” Izayoi chuckled, walking over to her friend and prodding her stomach. They both laughed loudly, Tenji from being tickled, and Izayoi from just pleasure. The two had been best friends for about 4 years now, which was how long Tenji had been physically alive. Eventually, the tickling stopped, and Tenji took a deep breath.

“I wanted to see if you wanted to go out and play in the desert? There’s a real lovely storm cloud, and we might finally get some beautiful rain!” Tenji squealed, taking her black colored parasol off of her back. It was adorned with red flowers and a picture of the moon, which were hand painted by Tenji herself. Izayoi chuckled, and accompanied her friend towards the exit. That was, of course, until a voice boomed over the loud speaker.

“Izayoi Aruka and Tenji Oshiruko!!” Otomaru’s voice boomed, once again in sing-song, “report to the training arena at once! Hadden and I have some important information for you. NOW!!” The box crackled as the transmission ended, leaving a grim looking Tenji. Izayoi sensed something was wrong; there was never a time when Tenji stopped smiling.

“What did you do now?” Izayoi asked, to which Tenji simply shook her head. The two of them ran for the arena, not speaking on the way. Little did they know, one of them would not be returning back to the engine room.

Here ya go. Hope you like it!

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Friday, September 16, 2005


FW and AEGFF news!
Unfortunately, I may be unable to post the updates for my story tomorrow. Those of you who actually like them may be upset... 'course, I think you'll live.

If I can, they'll be up on Sunday, kayz? Thank you for reading.

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Thursday, September 15, 2005


   Naruto airs this Friday!!!
Any Canadian Naruto fans will know that Naruto debuts on Friday night! HUZZAH!! It took long enough; I've been waiting for forever...

Anyway, I wanna find out who does Hinata's voice! I hope it suits her.... lots odf dubs are crappy 'cause of the voice actors they get.

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Wednesday, September 14, 2005


   OMG!!
Minesweeper Flags on MSN is rigged!! Somehow, it's een magically modified to allow kittykatangel the ultimate winning streak!!

Rally against the glitch!

YARRGH!!

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Monday, September 12, 2005


   Much Video On Trial
LMAO!! This show is so funny! It's great to see them tear apart the music videos... I like hearing their verdicts at the end. This one lady was all, 2, untouched, white Christian vaginas.

LMAO!!

This show roxorz! I'm going to watch it every day now... =D

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Saturday, September 10, 2005


   AEGFF Chapter 3!!!
Wel, here's the third chapter of AEGFF, as I promised. Both stories are going to be done on the weekends; more time!

Chapter 3

“Are we gonna go see P.J. first, or go hang out at the skate park?” Bobby asked, roller skating next to Max, who was on his skateboard. He chuckled, doing a kickflip down the street. New students were arriving now, as the school year was starting again. These last few days of summer were important; there wouldn’t be classes to worry about waking up for.

“Skate park first. Let’s give P.J and his Java Bean Jeanne some time together.” Max chuckled, Bobby laughing next to him. Suddenly, the sound of a revving engine was heard. Curious, Max and Bobby went around the corner to see a leather clad motorcyclist preparing to go off a ramp. The biker waved at them, then started the vehicle, its tires squealing.

“Wow, look at him go!” Bobby shouted over the noise as the motorcycle peeled toward the ramp. It started off doing a catwalk, but it collected more speed on both wheels, and went off the ramp. The cyclist did a 360 front flip, and landed flat on its tires. Max and Bobby applauded, the biker bowing slightly. Then, before Max or Bobby could run up and greet him, he drove away heading for the Bean Scene.

“Looks like we’ll be visiting P.J. and Jeanne first!” Max said, skateboarding down the street with Bobby at his heels. Unfortunately for them, they weren’t the only ones to notice the biker. The members of the Gamma Frat we outside, and watched the whole thing. Tank chuckled, watching as the biker left.

“Hey, there’s some new talent here. C’mon guys, let’s roll!” Tank called, but he was silenced by a tall, skinnier young man. He looked very stuck up in his fancy clothes, and with his cropped hairdo. He pulled on his own helmet and pads, then hopped onto a skateboard.

“Don’t forget who leads the frat, Brother Tank! Now c’mon, Gammas, let’s go!” The young man called, the rest of the Gammas following close behind. Max looked over his shoulder to make sure Bobby was still behind him, and spotted the Gammas. He ushered Bobby over, while they continued their chase down the street.

“Looks like the Gammas have their eye on this guy too. Let’s try to get there first.” Max said, Bobby nodding in response. They turned the corner, looking ahead to see where the biker had gone. Bean Scene was about a block away from where they were currently, and the Gammas were no where in sight. Thinking they had lost them, they continued toward the coffee shop. When they arrived at the shop, they noticed a familiar motorcycle.

“Looks like we beat the Gammas.” Max grinned, taking off his helmet and picking up his skateboard. Bobby followed suit, carefully descending the stairs in his roller skates. The two got into the coffee shop, and were greeted by P.J. basically right away.

“Max, the Gammas are hounding this motorcyclist; we heard him drive up. Maybe you should try to break them up.” P.J. said, ignoring the surprise in Max’s expression, “’sides, they’re distracting from the poetry readings.” Max chuckled and headed toward the Gammas, listening in on their conversation.

“Listen, man, you’re going to join the Gammas, whether you like it r not. You’re too talented to join another team.” The man with the cropped hairdo half-shouted, expecting the biker to recoil. To his surprise, the biker lifted his visor, revealing his brown eyes. The look in his eyes was stern, and definitely not happy.

“You listen to me, bub,” The biker said in response, poking the man’s chest, “I don’t take orders from spindly creeps like you. Now back off, before I get serious.” His voice didn’t sound very masculine; it sounded as though the biker was a girl. Then, the biker removed his helmet, tossing his long, black hair, red streaks going down its length.

“TERA?!” Max called out in surprise when his friend popped out of the helmet. How could someone so... well, dorky, be good at motorcycling? The man picked up on the fact that she was a girl right away, and decided to start hitting on her. He leaned on the counter, ignoring the disgust in her eyes.

“So, babe, how do you like your eggs in the morning?” He asked, smiling as Tera scoffed and rolled her eyes. She put her helmet on the table, and unzipped her leather coat, revealing a short-sleeved, green button up shirt. She smiled at him sweetly, and brought her face close to his.

“Unfertilized.” She responded to his question, looking kindly into his eyes. It looked like she’d busted a gasket in this guy’s brain. He slammed his hand on the table, and looked at Tera angrily, who simply smiled and looked innocently at him.

“No one turns down the Gammas, or me, Chad Underwood!” The young man exploded, his voice echoing around the room. Tera looked at him disgustedly, rubbing spit off of her face. She flicked the liquid onto the ground, looking up at him.

“Say it, don’t spray it, Chadwick Underfoot.” Tera retorted, looking up angrily at him. He reached out to strike her, but she was quicker. In one, swift motion, she brought her leg into the air and kicked him in the side of the face, knocking him down onto the counter.

“Bad move, sweetheart!” Tank called with his New Yorker accent, picking up the unconscious Chad, “you’re gonna regret ever turning down the Gammas!” Tera simply growled low in her throat, and sent the Gammas running. Max, Bobby and P.J. couldn’t help but stare, before they rushed over to congratulate her.

“Nice kick!” Bobby said, “I’m a yellow belt.” He chuckled, showing off a yellow belt that he’d gotten in Karate.

“It was a great way to clean up the trash!” P.J. commended her, applauding with a golf clap.

“Where’d you learn to do that?” Max asked, Tera blushing in response to all the attention she was receiving.

“Well… I was kinda trained in three different martial arts… I’m a black belt in all three…” Tera said, grinning at their reactions, “c’mon, let’s go to the skate park! I wanna see you three in action; you’re pretty famous around campus, y’know.” She grinned, and put on her helmet, preparing to leave the shop.

“See ya there!” Max called, Tera lifting her visor in response. She winked and nodded, then left the shop. The sound of her motorcycle reached their ears, and then she was gone. The three looked at each other, then headed off for the skate park.

“See ya at Club Rave tonight, Jeanne!” P.J. called, waving to his girlfriend as they left. She simply smiled and waved at the three of them, sipping her coffee. “Boys will be boys,” she muttered, “and tomboys, will be tomboys.” She took another sip of her coffee, before she headed up to the stage to perform.

There ya go. Remember, updates are SATURDAY!!

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   Fake Wings, Chapter 3
Well, here's the new, weekend story update! I will be updating the stories every Saturday, for those of you who like them, or are just reading them to get your nickels. =D

Chapter 3

Minoru awoke groggily, and with a dull pain in his back. He turned his head, and saw a young man, a few years younger than himself, healing a gaping wound in his back. Flesh sewed itself back together, the boy staring intently upon the wound. Minoru tried to speak, but he coughed instead, blood splattered out of his mouth and onto the dirty ground before him. The boy jumped in surprise, the wound still somewhat open.

“I’m sorry! You were injured and I just wanted to help…” The boy went on and on, rambling. Minoru laughed at him, even though it was painful. This boy had a very valuable power, and might even be able to save the remaining villagers.

“It’s okay… where’s everyone else?” Minoru asked, as the boy finished healing the wound. The boy merely shook his head, pointing around at all the dead bodies around them. Blood ran down the streets, into the sewage system. Minoru looked on in horror, then looked back up into the boy’s face. Hit spiked, blonde hair wasn’t able to hide his face, which was evidently sad.

“I had to hide and work carefully… I wasn’t able to save anyone., until I found you unconscious and with that gunshot wound.” The boy said, leaving Minoru looking shocked. The gaping hole that had once been in his back was made by a GUN? ‘The Hunters must have some powerful weaponry on their side…’ Minoru thought, standing up. His back hurt, but he popped it, and all was fine.

“My name’s Minoru, what’s yours?” Minoru asked the boy, offering his hand. The boy looked at him, but took his hand reluctantly. He was wearing a white t-shirt and grey shorts, as well as very simple sandals. The boy looked about 18, three years younger than he was.

“My name is Ian Mathers… my family came from the original America… nice to meet you Minoru.” He mumbled, letting go of the older man’s hand. HE started off down the street again, looking for survivors. Unfortunately, he found none. Minoru looked around for his sister, but couldn’t find her around either.

“Say, Ian, did you see a girl with sandy blonde hair around here?” Minoru asked Ian desperately. Ian thought for a moment, scratching his chin. Then, the memory came to him, and he realized where this girl was.

“A woman with long black hair and a nodachi took her away. They were kidnapping Alters, calling them test subjects.” Ian said, watching as Minoru’s face fell. He realized then that it might not have been a good idea to tell that to Minoru.

“No… they’re going to torture her! And if she isn’t strong enough… they’ll kill her!” Minoru said aloud, mainly to himself. Ian looked horrified; he’d heard about the hunters’ experiments with alters. There was a tale going around that they’d fused an Alter with fox DNA, and were training her to be a bio-weapon within their stronghold. Minoru walked towards some of the food stands, gathering food and putting it into a backpack he found.

“What are you doing?” Ian asked, running up behind Minoru. He glanced over his shoulder, and continued packing food, until the backpack was full. He zipped it shut, and put it on his back.

“I’m going to rescue my sister. If you don’t wanna be here alone, you’ll come too.” Minoru said, sounding harsh. Ian looked down at the ground, his hands in his pockets. Minoru wanted to apologize; he’d sounded very rude, but Ian looked up at him, serious.

“I’ll go... just let me go get a few things.” Ian said, running off down the body filled street. Minoru chuckled to himself; this kid was tough. For some reason, he felt like he admired him. It slipped his mind as he got a few more supplies, looking over at the boy as he disappeared down the streets.

Yeah... there's Fake Wings. Updated again next Saturday!

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Wednesday, September 7, 2005


   AEGFF Chapter 2
Here's the second chapter in the AEGFF series. Hope y'allz like it! WARNING: This chapter might be kinda long.... please read it all though!

Chapter 2

“So? Is she hot or what?” Bobby asked Max, spraying aerosol cheese into his mouth. He had tipped his red framed sunglasses, looking over at Max, who was still in his skating gear. P.J. was already dressed in blue pants and a blue sweater, wearing a navy colored beret. P.J. had been dressing this way since he’d met his girlfriend.

“How should I know? She was kinda cute I guess, but she’s a book nerd. She was reading The Hunchback of Notre Dame. IN FRENCH.” Max said as he took off his helmet, “there is no way that you could call her hot.” He finished taking off the rest of his gear, and stacked it next to a mountain of his clothes. The room was a disaster, but they’d become accustomed to it, since his dad never checked in anymore.

“So? Lots of book nerds are hot. They just need a little push in the right direction! OW OW OW OW!!” Bobby howled, pumping his fist in the air. Max rolled his eyes and walked over to his bed, sitting down. Some of the clothes that were on his bed fell off the edge, and he bent over to pick them up.

“Bobby, I’m not in the mood. She said she wanted to check out my skating; wanna go to the skate park right now?” Max asked, rubbing some sock fuzz off of his shirt. P.J. shook his head no, straightening his beret as he did it. Max already knew what he was going to say ‘that he was going to go see his girlfriend.

“I’m sorry Max, but I can’t. I’m going to go see--”

“Your little Java Bean?” Max interrupted, chuckling. He got a laugh out of Bobby, but P.J. didn’t look very happy. He sighed and rubbed his forehead, as though he had a headache.

“I already told you that her name was Jeanne.” P.J. said, frowning as Max and Bobby snickered at his comment, “yeah, I know that her name rhymes with Bean Scene… so what? Maybe I’ll see you at the park later, but I can’t go right now. Bye.” He sighed and walked out of the room. Max and Bobby had a private laugh at Jeanne’s expense, but went quiet soon after.

“So, what’s she look like, your little book nerd?” Bobby asked, grinning. Max opened his mouth to response, but the door opened wide behind him, and he didn’t have to describe Tera anymore. She waltzed right into his room, wearing a towel. She didn’t look embarrassed, more like she was pleased with herself.

“Can I use your shower?” Tera asked, “mine’s all dyslexic and doesn’t like to work. And I’m sorry I tailed you to your dorm, but you seemed like a nice person and all. So, can I use the shower? Oh, and if I can, where is it?” Max and Bobby nodded in unison to her first comment, then pointed at a door across the room. She nodded her thanks, and walked over to the door, opening it wide and closing it behind her.

“Wow. She was HOT!!” Bobby said quietly, trying not to attract Tera’s attention form within the bathroom. Max was still speechless, and he was blushing bright pink too. Max knew he was going to have to tell Bobby about Tera, so he began.

“Um… that WAS the book nerd…” Max said, pointing at the bathroom. Bobby made a sound of disbelief, and Max had to cover his mouth to stifle it. When he removed his hand, Bobby was wearing his usual, goofy grin.

“If you’re not gonna try to hit that, mind if I do? ‘Cause it be smoking!” Bobby said, tipping his sunglasses. For some reason or another, Max didn’t really like the idea of Bobby with Tera. He was a player rather than a serious boyfriend, and he needed someone to balance him out. Besides, the idea of Bobby having a girlfriend was just sort of weird.

“Bobby, you’ve been unsuccessful with the ladies for years now. I don’t think that this one’s gonna help you change.” Max said, Bobby frowning, but eventually nodding, “anyway, maybe you should go get some breakfast; you look kinda hungry.” Bobby chuckled and left the room, putting his can of aerosol cheese into his pocket.

“Jeez, that guy is weird.” Max said to himself, folding up his clothes. He put away the clean ones, and packed up the dirty ones in a bag. That way, he wouldn’t have to worry about a thing. He’d remembered to leave the whites in one bag, and the colored shirts in another; that way, the colors wouldn’t change.

“Max, you do your old man proud.” Max chuckled, taking the photo of him, his father and Ms. Marpole and putting it on his desk. Looking at it helped him decide what to do on that day. He’d completely forgotten that Tera had even come, and was now planning out the day.

“So, I’ll go to the skate park with Bobby, hang with P.J. and Jeanne at Bean Scene, and go to Club Rave tonight. Sounds good to me.” Max smiled to himself, putting the bags of dirty laundry into the closet. Tera walked out of the bathroom in her towel, humming as her long, wet hair dripped all over the floor. Max heard the humming, and turned around to find the source.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!” Max and Tera screamed at the same time, mainly because they’d startled each other. Tera dropped her towel in the confusion, which shut both of them up. They both stood still, blushing bright pink. Tera covered herself just as Bobby walked in the door.

“Hey Max, they didn’t have any good cream chee--WHA?” Bobby had began, before he looked over at Tera, “wowza, do you do this for guys often?” Tera blushed even darker, but picked up her towel. When she did, she grabbed a pillow and tossed it at Bobby, whacking him in the face.

“Not a good time for jokes!” Tera shouted, still blushing, “sorry about that Max… I’ll bring clothes next time…” She mumbled the last sentence, then fled the scene, leaving behind a blushing and bewildered Max.

“Wow-ee, I can’t believe you didn’t think she was hot,” Bobby said, looking over at Max, “Max? Hellooo?” Bobby tapped Max, who fell over, flat as a board.

“Ow.”

Yeah, so both stories will be updated every Saturday instead of Wednesday. Much easier on me.

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