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Sunday, November 12, 2006


CHA!

Your love is... by ChibiMarronchan
Your name is...
Your kiss is...delicious
Your hugs are...gentle
Your eyes...light up a day
Your touch is...irresistable
Your smell is...amazing
Your smile is...entrancing
Your love is...unique



DAMMIT! i love my dad. i kno i told a lot of u about how i hate is guts and all. but we're kind of patching things up. he respects my beliefs while i respect his. and he says he wont fight with my mom when i'm around. like last week when they practically yelled outside my door at midnight. sheesh! i had skl the next day and i actually like more than 5 hours of sleep before going to boring classes with a headache. makes it worse right? well. he bought me the naruto uncute edition box set that came with a wristband with a metal plate thta had the hidden leaf symbol on it and the ninja headband as well. speaking of naruto..... how many of ya'll seen the naruto epi last night! awesome, ne? i have this thing for gaara. i'm sure u can tell. i mean check the background. hes got that emo thing goin on! my panda-chan. my poor, wittle, emotionally wounded panda-chan. i wuv him so. *snuggles with gaara plushie* how much u want to bet he'd use his sand coffin if i snuggled him for real. ^_^' eheh.

hey. if u want more to that story i posted a few days ago. ur not getting part 3 until i get more than 2 comments. around 5 will be good enough. cuz just 2 ppl dont get me motivated to write. makes me feel sad anyway. it makes me feel like i'm a horrible writer and i should quit while i'm ahead. *sniff* so if u read it, comment. if u like it comment. if u hate it comment. if u dont even bother reading more than a sentence comment. plz!! *puppy eyes* if not for me do it for panda-chan!! for every comment u post i'll tell panda-chan that hes loved by otaku! ^_^

pm me if ya'lls want. i'll be on as of ..... now!! WAHAHAHA!! ok randomness over. tearless out! peace!

How would your anime family look like? (pics) by Princess Sakura
Name/ Usersname:
B-Day:
Favorite Color:
You:
Father:
Mother:
Brother:
Sister:


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Saturday, November 11, 2006


   Whassup ppls!

Hey ya'll. Yesterday I was out late so I didn't get to update. Anyhoo. If you guys didn't catch part 2 to my story scroll down to my last post. Thats all I got so far and I haven't been able to add anything so far so plz enjoy part 2 cuz i'm not posting any more today. I may get some new additions by tomorrow but fat chance of that happening. probably sometime next week.

ANIME NIGHT!!! WOOOOO!!!! I can't wait. Can I get a HEYA for anime night... *cricket chirps* wow. i see the enthusiasm.

i'll be on most of the day.... i hope.. if my mom doesn't force me to clean the house more. WHEN WILL THE CLEANING END!!! we usually do a full top to bottom scrub down of the house once a month and this is my once a month! GRRR! o well. pm me if ya'lls want. ^_^

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Thursday, November 9, 2006


Hey ya'll. Here's the newest addition to Fire and Ice! and here's some notes on it.
Talin: jet black hair, fiery red eyes (i forgot to put it in there last time), and seem to be emotionless.
Riven: black hair with fiery red streaks, onyx eyes, seems to be drawn to Talin.
note: they may seem close to each other for their first day but remember this. both of them never had friends before so of course they're gonna latch onto the first person they find. and u'll get the title later on in the story. any questions plz ask. i absolutely don't mind. and it may be hard to understand who said what cuz i kind of flip flopped them but its how i like to write things. they both think a certain way and they both see things different. and i repeat the scenarios cuz they both have different or alike views on the same things. so questions aske me, comments plz and happy reading!

Fire and Ice (part 2)

Halfway down the hall, I heard him say my name. I figured it was insults he wanted to say. I thought he might be just like everyone else. I kept walking, ignoring his calls. I felt a strong hand grip my shoulder. Instinct took over, and I swatted his hand away roughly. It was only afterwards did U realize what I just did.
“S-s-sorry,” I stuttered. “Reflex.”
“It’s okay. I just wanted to ask you something,” he replied.
“Before you do, tell me your name.”
“Riven,” he said coolly.
“How do you know mine?”
“I saw it on your notebook in science,” he said. “Can I ask my question now?”
“Yeah. Shoot,” I replied.
“You were drawing in class. I thought you were good by the way. I just wondered if you were in art class.”
Inwardly I was happy that someone was actually talking to me and asking which classes I had, but on the outside, I remained emotionless while replying, “Yeah. That’s my next class. I was heading to it just before you stopped me. If you have that class now, you can walk with me.”
His onyx eyes brightened up as he said, “Sure.”
We walked to art class and sat next to each other.
Art was basically the only class I listened to. The art teacher gave us a class assignment for the next hour. We had top draw what our childhood memories mostly composed of.
I instantly flash backed to my brother. He was seven years older than me. I remembered that whenever our parents fought, which happened a lot when I was little, he would take me out of the house and play with me at the park which was just down the street. My memories then flashed forward to when I was ten and he was seventeen, and when he was killed. He was hit by a car, which afterwards drove off. The impact broke most of his ribs which pierced his heart and lungs. His last words to me was, “Be a good girl, okay?”
“You okay?” I heard Riven say, breaking my train of thought.
“Uh, yeah. Just spaced out for a bit,” I said.
I saw him glance towards the sheet of paper in front of me. I looked at the paper and was surprised. Subconsciously, I drew my brother. It was a collage of different things. I drew a picture of him holding me after my mother yelled at me. One was of him playing with me at the park,. The next was of the last moment I shared with him. He was lying on the ground smiling at me, blood seeping out of the corners of his mouth. The last picture showed a coffin being lowered into the ground. At the top of the paper were big bold letter that spelled out “Vincent,” my brother’s name.
Riven looked at me questioningly. “My brother,” I explained. My voice lowered, “He died seven years ago.”
“I’m sorry for bringing it up,” Riven said.
I sighed, “It’s not your fault fate hates me. So don’t be sorry.”
~***~
I quickly walked out of the science room and walked after the girl.
“Talin!” I called.
She didn’t look back. I grabbed her shoulder, but almost instantly she slapped it away.
“S-s-sorry,” she stuttered. “Reflex.”
“It’s okay. I just wanted to ask you something,” I said.
Those fiery red eyes looked up at my onyx eyes, “Before you do, tell me your name.”
“Riven.”
“How do you know mine?” Her eyebrow raised in question. That was the most expression I saw on her face so far.
“I saw it on your notebook in science. Can I ask my question now?”
“Yeah. Shoot.”
“You were drawing in class. I thought you were good by the way. I just wondered if you were in art class.”
Emotionless yet again, she replied, “Yeah, that’s my next class. I was heading to it just before you stopped me. If you have that class now, you can walk with me.”
I brightened up at this, “Sure.”
I walked with her to art class, and we sat next to each other.
Art class began shortly and the teacher was already giving us instructions to a class assignment. We were all supposed to draw a picture of what our childhood memories were composed of. I immediately pictured my brother sprawled out on the floor drunk. I also remembered my parents dying in a car crash when I was five. I looked around and saw other people drawing happier things like birthdays, vacations, and holidays. I looked at what Talin was drawing. Her eyed were in a daze, but her hand was swiftly moving across the page as if she were copying down her thoughts.
I became concerned as I saw the images she drew, “You okay?” I spoke.
Her eyes went back to normal. “Uh.... yeah. Just spaced out a bit.”
She saw me glance at her paper. The first two images were of a small child and a young teen together. The last two showed the teen dying and then inside a coffin. In big bold letters at the top spelled out “Vincent.”
“My brother,” she said quietly. “He died seven years ago.”
I felt guilty when I heard that, “I’m sorry for bringing it up.”
Her fiery eyes began to dull as she spoke, “It’s not your fault fate hates me. So don’t be sorry.”
I felt like saying something comforting to make her feel better, but I didn’t know what. I turned back to my paper and began drawing. I decided on what to draw and took to imaging it out on the paper. It was of my brother. Talin glanced over to my paper. She raised an eyebrow in question when she saw the man in my drawing.
“This is my brother. His name’s Drei. Hobbies are drinking, getting stoned, and passing out on the floor,” I told her.
“I can tell,” she said, a faint smile on her lips.
“Wow. That’s the first smile I’ve seen all day.”
“I guess it is,” she said, her smile vanishing.
Class ended and I walked back to my locker. Talin walked with me saying she forgot a book in it.
We parted ways as we went to our own classes, mine being history and hers math. It made me a little sad to see her go. She was an interesting girl. Her fire red eyes made chills run up and down my spine when I look in them. Her jet black hair made them seem brighter. Her eyes were like a candle’s flame trapped inside thick layers of ice. It worried me when the fire in her eyes dulled. Like no one else, she made me feel different. I wanted to make that fire burn brighter and melt the ice that surrounds her.
~***~
An awkward silence came after I told him of my brother. I looked at his paper that he just started drawing on. I saw a young adult sprawled out on the floor. There were beer bottles surrounding him. I gave Riven a questioning look.
“This is my brother,”he said, “His name’s Drei. His hobbies are drinking, getting stoned, and passing out on the floor.”
“I can tell.”
“Wow. That’s the first smile I’ve seen today,” he said.
I was shocked. I didn’t even notice myself smiling.
“I guess it is,” I said, returning my face to its emotionless state.
Class ended shortly after and we both headed to our locker. My next class was math and I had forgotten my notebook in the locker.
We parted ways as I went to my own class and he to his history class. I felt sad. He was the first person to talk to me like a human being. He looked concerned every time I masked my emotions. It felt strange that he cared enough to even worry.
My next few classes went slowly. Finally it was sixth period, the last hour of the day. I reached the classroom and saw Riven sitting in the back. I took the seat beside him.
“Long time no see, Talin,” he said.
“Hey. Guess we have three classes together.”
“Hey! Freak Girl is back this year,” taunted a girl.
“Hello to you, too, Loraine,” I said monotonously.
The girl glanced over to Riven and smirked, “I guess Freak Girl found a mate. Freak Boy!”
I sighed, “What the hell do you want?”
Loraine leaned in closer. She was a few inches from my face. I could feel her breath as she spoke in a whisper, “Just to wish you good luck for this year. I look forward to humiliating you again, you friend as well.” She backed away ans returned to her friends.
I clenched my fist in anger. Pain shot through my hand as I realized I held a pencil in my hand. Clenching my fist caused the pencil to break, sending splinters in my hand.
“You okay?” I heard Riven say.
I stayed silent, grimacing at my hand.
He reached over and grabbed my hand.
“Let me see it,” he said softly. He looked at my hand. The splintered wood of the pencil scraped part of my hand and it was beginning to bleed. He reached into his bag and pulled out a roll of bandages. He gently pulled out all of the splinters and wrapped the bandage around my hand. When he finished, he looked up at me. I wore a confused look.
“What’s wrong?” he asked.
“Nothing. It just surprised me.”
“Really?” he looked shocked. “Why?”
“No one’s ever done that before.”
“Couldn’t imagine why,” he smiled.
I looked down, “People are afraid of me. They think I’m strange and too different. What you just did just shocked me a bit.”
“I can’t imagine why they would think that. You’re cool.”
Class ended, and school was over for the day. We walked to our locker and packed the books in our bags. We exited the building.
“Hey. Riven, you busy tonight?”
“No why?”
“I just wanted to ask if you wanted to hang out.”
“Sure. What do you want to do?”
I smiled slightly, “I want to show you something.” I grabbed his arm and quickly walked down the street.
We arrived in front of my house.
“Wait here. I need to get something,” I told him.
He waited outside while I entered my home. I quickly made my way to my room and laid my bag on my bed. I emptied the books out of the bag. I grabbed a small wooden box. I placed it into my bag and returned to Riven.
~***~
After we parted , the rest of the day was a drag. The end of the day was near since I was now heading towards my last class. I sat down in my usual seat in the back. Talin came in shortly after. She sat next to me and looked at me with her fire red eyes.
“Long time no see, Talin,” I said.
“Hey. Guess we have three classes together.”
Soon enough, we were interrupted by some snobby girl who obviously knew Talin. “Hey! Freak Girl’s back this year,”she taunted. I heard Talin’s monotonous voice speak next, “Hello to you, too, Loraine.:
The girl glanced over to me, “I guess Freak Girl found a mate. Freak Boy!”
“What the hell do you want,” Talin spoke up.
Loraine leaned in closer to Talin, mere inches from her face. I couldn’t hear what she said, but the angry expression on Talin’s normally emotionless face told me that she hated Loraine and what she was saying. The girl left soon after and returned to her friends.
I stared after that girl until I heard a faint grunt from Talin. I glanced over to her and saw her hand. She had broken her pencil and splinters had lodged themselves in her skin. Part of the pencil scraped her hand.
“You okay?” I asked.
She stayed quiet as she stared at the blood seeping out of her hand.
“Let me see it,” I said as I gently grabbed her hand. I carefully pulled out all of the splinters and took a roll of bandages out of my bag. I gently wrapped it around her hand. I looked up at her when I finished. She looked confused.
“What’s wrong?” I asked.
“Nothing. It just surprised me.”
“Really? Why?”
“No one’s ever done that before.”
“Couldn’t imagine why,” I truthfully said.
She looked down as she see quietly spoke, “People are afraid of me. They think I’m strange and too different. What you just did just shocked me a bit.”
“I can’t imagine why they would think that. You’re cool,” I said with a smile.
Class ended, and we both walked to our locker. After grabbing our books, we exited the school.
“Hey, Riven, you busy tonight?” she asked me.
“No. Why?”
“I just wanted to ask you if you wanted to hang out.”
“Sure. What do you want to do?”
A faint smile appeared on her lips, “I want to show you something.”
She grabbed my arm and began leading me down the street. We stopped in front of a house.
“Wait here. I need to get something,” she said, while disappearing into the building. I leaned against the side of the house and waited for her to come back.
A few moments later, she reappeared.
“Okay. Let’s go,” she said almost happily.
“Okay,” I pushed myself off the side of the house and followed her further down the street.
I looked at her eyes and the fire I saw behind them looked happy. I felt glad she was. For some reason, I felt something coming from her. Like a child calling out. I wanted to make her happy, and to make that fire shine brighter.

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Wednesday, November 8, 2006


   WOOOOO!!! SUGAR!!! and a story...... ^_^''

I AM SUGAR HYPED!!! WOOOOO!!! The past 2 days I have consumed butterfingers, twix, snickers, hersheys, hersheys kisses, lots of coke, lots of mountain dew, ice cream, ice cream shakes, and lots of hot chocolate!!! This morning we didn't really have any food at home except candy so I grabbed about 2 mini butterfingers, half a king size butterfinger, a butterfinger stix, and a mountain dew. Some breakfast huh? I ate them during class. I mean, wut else r ya gonna do in geometry..... math? lol. anyhoo. I told ya'll I'd post part of my story today cuz I'm just that nice and u guys seem to like them a lot. (the comments yesterday reminded me of my baby cousin saying "story! story! read me a story!" she's so cute! ^_^) anyway, the title is Fire and Ice (u'll get it later on in the story) this one is gonna be a bit longer than the first one (flashback..... so sad *sniff*.... end flashback) if ur interested in that one or didn't get to see the ending or sum other stuff in between, i still have it posted on my site ..... sumwhere.... its in my archives. so happy reading!! (important note: the story is in different point of views. one is a girl, the next is the guy. its in that order. girl, guy, girl, guy, etc. its a little confusing but the characters almost always refer to the other in their thoughts so u kno which person is which. any question plz ask and any suggestions for names plz tell me. these just popped in my head as i wrote. ^_^)

Fire and Ice (part 1)

My name is Talin. I’m seventeen, and I’m one of a kind. Some would say I’m strange. I have no friends, my parents hate me, and the only one that ever loved me was my brother, but he died when I was young. No one really talks to me, but when an occasional person comes by and talks to me, it’s usually an insult.
Today started out normally. I wore my baggy jeans, a black and red t-shirt, and my arms were decorated with wristbands and bangles. I let my long, black hair loose on my face. I left my home without a word to anyone and quickly walked to school that was a few blocks away.
Today was the first day of school. It was the typical first day. Kids were trying to get to their friends, find their classes, just the normal stuff. I had no friends, so I quickly walked past all the teens that were crowded around the entrance to the school. I had an assigned locker, and I supposedly had a locker mate as well. I found the locker and my locker mate standing in front of the locker. It was a guy. Light-skinned, dark black hair with fiery red streaks. His bangs draped over his eyes as if he were trying to hide. He wore jeans and a short-sleeved t-shirt with a silver dragon snaking around his torso. I walked up to him, unsure of what to say. I mumbled a simple “hello” and started putting books into the already open locker. A sideward glance showed he was staring at me right before he turned and headed to class.
~***~
My name is Riven. Seventeen and known to be a loner. My parents died and live with my screwed up, sorry excuse for a brother. I never had friends because I always end up freaking them out. They just don’t understand me.
Today was normal. Jeans and a black shirt with a silver dragon snaking around my middle. I left the house quickly and quietly. My brother, Drei, was lying passed out in the way of the front door, so I took the back way. He was obviously stoned and I didn’t want to mess with him.
First day of school. How I loathe this day. I ignored everyone that tried to be my friend, knowing that they would eventually get freaked out and run. I walked to my assigned locker and emptied my bag of all books except first and second period’s books. I knew I had a locker mate and I was curious to know who it was. I glanced towards the side, and I saw this girl. She was walking towards me. Is this her? I thought to myself. I looked at her for a while as she said “hello” and began emptying her bag into the locker. Her clothes looked normal. At least to me anyway, considering I wore things similar. Her hair was plain, but what awed me was how deep a black it was. It was like a night sky omitted of all the stars and moon. It hung low into her face which was void of any emotions. She caught my staring and I immediately turned around and walked to my first class.
~***~
That guy was weird. I thought for a moment, but quickly dismissed him from my mind. Arriving at my first class, I saw him again. In the back corner of the science class was where he was sitting. There were no more seats left except for the one seat located next to his. I sat myself in that seat and waited for the teacher to arrive. She did arrive sooner than I thought she would, but I didn’t exactly care. I took a sketch pad outside of my bag and began to draw while she rambled on about the school year and the various projects we’ll work on. I glanced over to that guy and saw him staring out the window, obviously not caring what the teacher said either. The lighting coming from the window shone on him wonderfully and made the red in his hair brighter and more of a flame. Without thinking, I began to draw him. The bell rang just as I finished. I put my things back into my bag and headed out the door and to my next class without so much as a glance towards him.
~***~
I sat in the back corner of the science class. Everyone avoided me as if I was the plague and there was an empty seat next to mine. That girl from before came in, and seeing there were no more seats left, she took the seat beside me. The teacher came in and talked on and on about the class and the rest of the year. I ignored it and looked out of the window. Curiosity got the better of me, and I stole a quick glance towards the girl next to me. She was ignoring the teacher as well. I glanced at one of her closed books and saw her name. Talin. I rolled the name over and over in my head. It was a strange name and very uncommon. I looked at the book she was currently working in and was briefly surprised. She was drawing me. I looked at it closely and noticed that she was incredible. It looked exactly like me. I didn’t want to ruin her drawing, so I continued staring outside the window yet again. I wanted to talk to her when class was over, but when the bell rang, she had left without a word.

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Tuesday, November 7, 2006


   KONIBANWA!!

hello all. nothing new and so bored! come and PM me today cuz I'm basically going to be on. ^_^ so sayonara until tomorrow. o yeah. tomorrow I may post a part of my new story so look forward to my new story. well if u liked the last one then u will like this new one. seeya later. ^_^

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Monday, November 6, 2006


   CHA!!!

Man! my weekend was kickass!! CHA! WOOOO!! My weekend is as follows:
Friday- corn maze. its like a maze in a corn field. they had signs for every part of the maze. we went into phase 2 and saw the signs in this order. 1, 2, 3, 4, 7, 6, 5, 7, 6, 5, 1. BUT! we came out of the phase 1 entrance. lol. there were also a haunted maze and a normal maze. the haunted one was the one where ppl jumped out in costumes and scared the crap out of u. b4 one of my friends punched one in the face when he jumped out. ^_^ hilarious. we didn't go in the haunted one cuz it was night and we could only go if we had an adult and ALL the adults were chicken. TT__TT no fun. HMPH! *pouts* anyhoo. i spent the night that night at me friends house.
Saturday- CHA! i luv my friends house. her grandparents cook so much good food on saturdays! man i luv them. at my house its microwavable breakfast. i just eat toast cuz its a why bother thing here. but man i could so live at her house!! CHA!! well i went home. and watched anime. cuz it was anime night! WOO! can i get a HEYA for anime night!! *cricket chirp* pathetic.........
Sunday- STATE FAIR!! i went with my friend to the fair and it was awesome!!! i rode almost every ride there! i wanted to go on this rid called the slingshot. its where 2 ppl ride on this two seater block thingy and they shoot u up in the air and the seats to flips in the air and its like AWESOME MAN!! but i couldn't go. they said my mom had to be there and her grandparents didn't want to get in trouble with me mum for letting me go on that ride. *pouts* i wanted to go on so bad. really i'm a dardevil when it comes to rides. i'll ride anything and everything..... cept kiddie rides..... except this one time i was on a it's a small world ride and i got up in the boat and me and my friend started singing the numa numa song and dancing and then all the little kids watched us and when we left we saw so many kids singing the numa numa song and dancing outside. lol. *starts singing and dancing the numa numa* ^_^

today......... i slept in 3rd period, did all me homework, and i dont want to study..... so Pm em anytime today. 80% i'm on. so sayonara. adios mi compadres. PM me if ya'll want! ^_^

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Saturday, November 4, 2006


Hola Compadres!

Hey all! Sry I didn't get to all of ur sites yesterday. I was using a friends internet to check my mail and myO stuff. I spent the night cuz I was going to this corn maze. There was a haunted one but all of the adults were scared except me and my friend and her mom wouldn't let us go without an adult. TT__TT so mean! well tomorrow I won't be on either cuz I'm going to the state fair with the same friend! T-chan! I love you so much!! Your my best friend!!! ^_^ shes the best. Well, PM me if ya want. I'm bored now without T-chan and all I have to do is housework and I do it all while I'm internet surfing so talk to me if ya'lls wish! no poems today. I didn't make any others. And I'm starting a new story so I'll probably post sum of it again later. Well, adios mi amigos. ^_^ BYES! *hugs u all* i feel so happy today i couldn't help myself! ^_^

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Thursday, November 2, 2006


Poems

As I said. I'm posting poems today. Just in case u wondered. My day was tiring. Mostly cuz my friend chewed me out on sumthin I did. ugh. She tired me out with all the yelling. whew! *wipes sweat on forehead* Anyhoo. The Return of the Poem of the day is here. But not just one! FIVE!! Well. Adios amigos!

Poems of the Day:
SHALL WEEP

You cast them aside,
Hiding your pain.
You glamour your tears,
As you walk in the rain.
Never with other,
Your reason to atone.
And you shall weep,
When you face the end alone.

SOLITUDE

Tears of solitude fall silently
End of this pain unseen.
After I watched that heartbreaking scene.
Restless my dreams became then.
Solitude my one and only friend.
(note: this one has a pattern. try and find it)

YOUR MELODY

I heard your voice,
Such an ethereal melody.
I followed it dreamily,
Thinking of your rhapsody.
An eternity I could listen,
If for an eternity t'was sweet.
Please forever sing your song,
Until the day we finally meet.

FUTURE

There's nothing more that can be found.
This place is cloaked where evil wrought.
Silenced all that can utter sound.
All have fallen before those they fought.
In this plight, light cannot be seen.
All who sleep will not have dreamt.
Those who follow unworthy deem.
The future of unkempt.

WHY DON'T YOU HATE ME?

Why don't you hate me?
Why don't you scream my name in anger?
I can't believe I hurt you so,
And to all these questions I get no answers.
Why don't you hate me?
Why am I the one with tears in my eyes?
Your the one whose heart is torn,
And should be yelling that I should die.
Why don't you hate me?
Why is it so hard to look at your face?
I can still see it all,
Deep down behind your smile, there is no trace.
Why don't you hate me?
Why am I still loved by your eyes?
Am I so forgiven?
Even though I killed everything of mine?
Why don't you hate me?

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Wednesday, November 1, 2006


   HOLA!

hello compadres! i posted the ending to that story yesterday so if u didn't see it.... GO SEE IT NOW!!! ^_^ well thats about it. the return of the POEM OF THE DAY is tomorrow so look forward to at least 5 of them! i was busy in class. Math class really gives u the time to do it. ^_^

ADIOS AMIGOS! ^_^

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Tuesday, October 31, 2006


   ACK!! THE LITTLE MOUSE IN MY HEAD STOPPED RUNNING!!!

Yes. My stupid brain wasn't functioning today which could have helped cuz i had a test today. But I think I did pretty well considering I had sumthin similar to a hangover. (unfortunately I did drink once but NEVER AGAIN!!! until I'm 21.....) anyhoo. the little mouse in my head stopped running and he just laid there on the wheel he was supposed to be running on. GRR!!
Interesting note! Kiba Inuzuka from Naruto just got NEUTERED!!! AHAHAHAHAHA! kidding..... *sweatdrop* plz don't kill me Kiba fans. JK!! I suddenly became obsessed with Kiba and now I am about to change my wallpaper and avatar to Kiba.... yes I'm a dog fanantic and I just recently read a sasuxnaru fanfic where Kiba is majorly awesome *cuddles Kiba* ^_^
o right! the story. and now into more sad and sorrowful matters. *sniff* this is the last part in Never Stop Loving You. Since this is the last part I will go ahead and tell u that the ending MADE me cry so hard! Yes, I did write it and I did think of it. But it doesn't mean I can't cry about it! Plz comment and tell me wut u think of my story (since its finished) and tell me if u guessed the ending right. now introducing.....

Never Stop Loving You (part 5...... *Kiba and Me huggin each other bawling* yes its sad..... T.T)

We came across misfortune as we walked along our way. It was the same people who burned that town and killed all of those people.

“Demon! You are now in our custody!” yelled an elderly man.

Soldiers surrounded us, pointing their spears at me. Mimori, frightened of the soldiers, hid behind me.

The elderly man saw Mimori as he said, “Why is this young girl with you? What have you done to this child?”

“She is my sister,” I replied. Mimori nodded to confirm.

“Ridiculous. A demon has a human sibling?” he laughed.

He gave a signal with his hand, and the soldiers came closer. The first one grabbed Mimori, and while I was distracted, they knocked me down. Many of the soldiers immobilized me while I struggled, and they began to tie my wrists and ankles.

Mimori was screaming and hitting with her small fists at the soldier that held her back.

When they had finished, one of the soldiers slung me over his shoulder. I was completely unable to move. I was full of rage when I saw them tie Mimori’s wrists.

They brought us to an old cathedral. The outside had an eerie demeanor. High windows decorated with broken stained glass and the dark gray stone, the building was constructed of, were worn. The front door was made of thick oak that was beginning to splinter.

We entered through the door. In the center of the room was a symbol on the floor. It was marked with curves and markings I had never seen before.

They placed Mimori near a wall far off to the side where they placed a soldier to keep an eye on her.

In the center of the symbol were shackles attached to the floor with about four feet of chains. Many soldiers held me as they placed the shackles on my wrists. They untied my wrists and ankles as they did so.

“What the hell are you trying to do?” I yelled at the elderly man. “Who are you anyway?”

“My name is Kraden Thomas. I was hired to dispatch the demon from these lands,” he smiled as he spoke.

I lunged forward, but the chains prevented me from getting closer to him. I glared at him angrily.

“Let my sister go!” Mimori yelled.

“Shut up you little twerp!” said the soldier standing next to her.

Tears began to fall down her face. She kept yelling, “Leave her alone! She didn’t do anything!”

Kraden’s lifted his eyebrows in inquiry, “Nothing whatsoever? Child, do you know nothing of this demon’s past?”

“She’s different. She’s trying to fight it,” Mimori claimed.

He ignored her as he began to walk closer to me. He came closer, but not close enough for me to be able to hurt him. If I could, I could probably escape. He reached into a sack attached to his belt and brought out seven needles made of metal, about the length of a grown man’s palm. He placed them in the circle surrounding me. I knew exactly what he was doing. He was going to kill Kanna and me as well. Although, the needles had no relevance to what he was doing. They were part of an old tradition.

“Any last words, demon?” he asked.

“I want you to promise me something, Kraden,” I spoke. He raised his eyebrows in question. “Promise me you’ll keep her safe. Take care of Mimori.”

“I’ll fulfill your request, demon.”

He unsheathed a long rapier from his belt. Slender and sleek, the rapier caught the sun’s rays as it shone through the openings in the stained glass and into the dark cathedral. I fell to my knees and raised my head, showing the vulnerable skin of my neck. This simple act shocked Kraden.

“Why are you so willing to die now, when you struggled to live earlier?” he asked.

“I wanted to protect my family from harm that would come to pass them. I have caused more grief than I should. And now that I know the last of my family will be safe, I die willingly and peacefully.”

I glanced over to Mimori to see her crying. I turned my head and smiled, “Mimori, I don’t want you to be sad, but I don’t want you to be killed either.

“Prepare yourself, demon,” Kraden said.

He brought his arm back and briskly walked towards me. His pace quickened and as he thrust the rapier, I closed my eyes. I waited for the fatal blow to strike but it never came. I smelled fresh blood, but it wasn’t my own. Opening my eyes, I came across a horrid sight. Mimori was in front of me. Crimson blood poured out of her small body and it began to shake. The rapier had gone through her chest and resurfaced through her back. I stared at the bloody point of the sword that was merely inches from my neck.

Kraden was in disbelief of what he had done. His voice was shaky as he spoke, “Child, why?”

He unsheathed his rapier from her chest. She fell forwards, but I reached out and grabbed her. I looked at her face, watching her tears once again cascade down her face.

I felt my own tears fall down my face as I shakily spoke, “Mimori?” I heard the clank of chains as I held her tighter.

“Sister, I said I would never stop loving you,” she said softly. She reached up and played with my cat ears one last time. She gave a small laugh before her eyes went dull and her hand fell. I held her close and cried.

Kraden had dropped his rapier and backed away. I saw that it was within my reach. I grabbed it and with all my strength, I thrust it into my stomach. I coughed up blood. I saw Kraden mouth “why?” and I said, “I lost everything I had. What’s life without those I care about.” I couldn’t hear anymore, my body went numb, and my eyes began to blur. I fell onto the ground next to my sister. My breath, I could feel, had ceased and my heart had slowed. The demon, Kanna, was dying. It would never roam the earth again, because I was about to die. I smiled faintly as I knew that in a few moments I was going to see Elliot and Mimori and my parents, too. Tears of joy fell to the floor.

Softly, in a whisper, my last words, as I took my last breath and crossed over, “I never stopped loving any of you. Never.”

Author's note: I told u! but in a way its kind of sad AND happy. I mean hey! Lousy life, disguises, family dying. Dying with them is basically the best thing. Hell, I'd do it everything I loved suddenly died. And if ur wondering wut happened to Kraden. He just left. Nothing else. Cuz it was in Yumi's point of view and when she dead that was it! end of story! no more. but I may write sum more. so plz give me sum ideas for a story as well if u enjoyed reading this one. THANX FOR READING!!

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