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Tuesday, October 31, 2006


   ACK!! THE LITTLE MOUSE IN MY HEAD STOPPED RUNNING!!!
Yes. My stupid brain wasn't functioning today which could have helped cuz i had a test today. But I think I did pretty well considering I had sumthin similar to a hangover. (unfortunately I did drink once but NEVER AGAIN!!! until I'm 21.....) anyhoo. the little mouse in my head stopped running and he just laid there on the wheel he was supposed to be running on. GRR!!
Interesting note! Kiba Inuzuka from Naruto just got NEUTERED!!! AHAHAHAHAHA! kidding..... *sweatdrop* plz don't kill me Kiba fans. JK!! I suddenly became obsessed with Kiba and now I am about to change my wallpaper and avatar to Kiba.... yes I'm a dog fanantic and I just recently read a sasuxnaru fanfic where Kiba is majorly awesome *cuddles Kiba* ^_^
o right! the story. and now into more sad and sorrowful matters. *sniff* this is the last part in Never Stop Loving You. Since this is the last part I will go ahead and tell u that the ending MADE me cry so hard! Yes, I did write it and I did think of it. But it doesn't mean I can't cry about it! Plz comment and tell me wut u think of my story (since its finished) and tell me if u guessed the ending right. now introducing.....

Never Stop Loving You (part 5...... *Kiba and Me huggin each other bawling* yes its sad..... T.T)

We came across misfortune as we walked along our way. It was the same people who burned that town and killed all of those people.

“Demon! You are now in our custody!” yelled an elderly man.

Soldiers surrounded us, pointing their spears at me. Mimori, frightened of the soldiers, hid behind me.

The elderly man saw Mimori as he said, “Why is this young girl with you? What have you done to this child?”

“She is my sister,” I replied. Mimori nodded to confirm.

“Ridiculous. A demon has a human sibling?” he laughed.

He gave a signal with his hand, and the soldiers came closer. The first one grabbed Mimori, and while I was distracted, they knocked me down. Many of the soldiers immobilized me while I struggled, and they began to tie my wrists and ankles.

Mimori was screaming and hitting with her small fists at the soldier that held her back.

When they had finished, one of the soldiers slung me over his shoulder. I was completely unable to move. I was full of rage when I saw them tie Mimori’s wrists.

They brought us to an old cathedral. The outside had an eerie demeanor. High windows decorated with broken stained glass and the dark gray stone, the building was constructed of, were worn. The front door was made of thick oak that was beginning to splinter.

We entered through the door. In the center of the room was a symbol on the floor. It was marked with curves and markings I had never seen before.

They placed Mimori near a wall far off to the side where they placed a soldier to keep an eye on her.

In the center of the symbol were shackles attached to the floor with about four feet of chains. Many soldiers held me as they placed the shackles on my wrists. They untied my wrists and ankles as they did so.

“What the hell are you trying to do?” I yelled at the elderly man. “Who are you anyway?”

“My name is Kraden Thomas. I was hired to dispatch the demon from these lands,” he smiled as he spoke.

I lunged forward, but the chains prevented me from getting closer to him. I glared at him angrily.

“Let my sister go!” Mimori yelled.

“Shut up you little twerp!” said the soldier standing next to her.

Tears began to fall down her face. She kept yelling, “Leave her alone! She didn’t do anything!”

Kraden’s lifted his eyebrows in inquiry, “Nothing whatsoever? Child, do you know nothing of this demon’s past?”

“She’s different. She’s trying to fight it,” Mimori claimed.

He ignored her as he began to walk closer to me. He came closer, but not close enough for me to be able to hurt him. If I could, I could probably escape. He reached into a sack attached to his belt and brought out seven needles made of metal, about the length of a grown man’s palm. He placed them in the circle surrounding me. I knew exactly what he was doing. He was going to kill Kanna and me as well. Although, the needles had no relevance to what he was doing. They were part of an old tradition.

“Any last words, demon?” he asked.

“I want you to promise me something, Kraden,” I spoke. He raised his eyebrows in question. “Promise me you’ll keep her safe. Take care of Mimori.”

“I’ll fulfill your request, demon.”

He unsheathed a long rapier from his belt. Slender and sleek, the rapier caught the sun’s rays as it shone through the openings in the stained glass and into the dark cathedral. I fell to my knees and raised my head, showing the vulnerable skin of my neck. This simple act shocked Kraden.

“Why are you so willing to die now, when you struggled to live earlier?” he asked.

“I wanted to protect my family from harm that would come to pass them. I have caused more grief than I should. And now that I know the last of my family will be safe, I die willingly and peacefully.”

I glanced over to Mimori to see her crying. I turned my head and smiled, “Mimori, I don’t want you to be sad, but I don’t want you to be killed either.

“Prepare yourself, demon,” Kraden said.

He brought his arm back and briskly walked towards me. His pace quickened and as he thrust the rapier, I closed my eyes. I waited for the fatal blow to strike but it never came. I smelled fresh blood, but it wasn’t my own. Opening my eyes, I came across a horrid sight. Mimori was in front of me. Crimson blood poured out of her small body and it began to shake. The rapier had gone through her chest and resurfaced through her back. I stared at the bloody point of the sword that was merely inches from my neck.

Kraden was in disbelief of what he had done. His voice was shaky as he spoke, “Child, why?”

He unsheathed his rapier from her chest. She fell forwards, but I reached out and grabbed her. I looked at her face, watching her tears once again cascade down her face.

I felt my own tears fall down my face as I shakily spoke, “Mimori?” I heard the clank of chains as I held her tighter.

“Sister, I said I would never stop loving you,” she said softly. She reached up and played with my cat ears one last time. She gave a small laugh before her eyes went dull and her hand fell. I held her close and cried.

Kraden had dropped his rapier and backed away. I saw that it was within my reach. I grabbed it and with all my strength, I thrust it into my stomach. I coughed up blood. I saw Kraden mouth “why?” and I said, “I lost everything I had. What’s life without those I care about.” I couldn’t hear anymore, my body went numb, and my eyes began to blur. I fell onto the ground next to my sister. My breath, I could feel, had ceased and my heart had slowed. The demon, Kanna, was dying. It would never roam the earth again, because I was about to die. I smiled faintly as I knew that in a few moments I was going to see Elliot and Mimori and my parents, too. Tears of joy fell to the floor.

Softly, in a whisper, my last words, as I took my last breath and crossed over, “I never stopped loving any of you. Never.”

Author's note: I told u! but in a way its kind of sad AND happy. I mean hey! Lousy life, disguises, family dying. Dying with them is basically the best thing. Hell, I'd do it everything I loved suddenly died. And if ur wondering wut happened to Kraden. He just left. Nothing else. Cuz it was in Yumi's point of view and when she dead that was it! end of story! no more. but I may write sum more. so plz give me sum ideas for a story as well if u enjoyed reading this one. THANX FOR READING!!

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