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Thursday, December 20, 2007


ok i am gonna act like a deranged fan girl for a second or two, so here we go: HAVE YOU HEARD THE SONG INTO THE NIGHT BY SANTANA FT CHAD KROEGER?!!!!! IF NOT THEN YOU NEED TO GO DOWNLOAD IT OR WATCH FUSE/MTV UNTIL IT COMES ON! CHAD KROEGER IS SO FRICKIN HHOTTT IN THAT VIDEO, AND THE ALL I WANT TO DO IS DANCE TO THAT SONG! O_O ok fan girl thing over with. i am like addicted to that song at the moment, and i just find it awesome. its way better than Chad kroeger's recent stuff with nickelback, kinda like his old stuff, which i love.

so today i am babysitting, which is gonna suck kinda, but hopefully he'll play the game and leave me alone (yeah amanda, the one that threw the book at your head) but i'm thinking that for some reason he will keep me from being lazy and i'll actually get my room cleaned up >_< i hope so, i am tired of the mess, plus i want to put carpet down. ooh if i can get my room cleaned, token and amanda can come over so token can get another lesson ^_^

but anyways i am gonna go start now. bye bye friends.

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Wednesday, December 19, 2007


ok sorry for any spelling errors, you know the drill.

Chapter 7
Tenten was slowly awoke the next morning feeling tired, not sleepy, but tired of being in bed. Sakura sat next to her bed.
"Sakura?" Tenten asked.
Sakura jumped up, not expecting Tenten to speak since she had been unconcious that past few days, except when she had awaken for Neji.
"Oh, Tenten, it's only you, whats wrong?"
"I want... I want to get out of bed, I want to walk around," Tenten answered.
"Oh, but Tenten you'll fall flat on your face if you do," Sakura said, cheerfully. "Why don't I go get you something to eat instead? That way you can build your strength."
Before Tenten could even reply, Sakura had left to get some food. Tenten was so annoyed with Sakura that she decided to prove her wrong. She sat up, and scooted slowly to the bed's edge. She wung her legs over the edge and her feet were touching the floor. Slowly she lifted her self up into a standing position, still holding on to the bed. She wasn't as weak as she thought she would be and started slowly walking towards the window.
"Wha...?" Sakura had came back into the room and saw Tenten standing next to the window.
"Who is that?" Tenten asked.
Sakura walked over beside Tenten and noticed that Neji was outside walking beside a strange girl.
"Oh, thats Akemi. She just traveled here. Shes very pretty isn't she?" Sakura said, not noticing Tenten's face.
Sakura set the tray down next to the bed and began straightening the bed.
Tenten gazed down at the girl. She had bright round eyes, and light blond hair. Neji was smiling at her, oblivious that anyone was watching.
Tenten couldn't take the site any longer and her knees went week. Sakure let out a shrill scream when Tenten fell to the ground. Neji heard the scream and came running.
"Sakura! Tenten! What happened," Neji yelled before pushing the door open to see Tenten collapsed on the floor and Sakura kneeling beside her.
"She was just standing there, looking at something out the window and she collapsed," Sakura said, feeling guilty at having allowed Tenten to stand at all. "I don't know what happened, she standing so strong, so I took the moment to straighten the bed..."
Neji slowly lifted Tenten from the floor and carried her sleeping form to the bed.
"Sakura I will watch Tenten now, you may leave."
"Your not mad at me are you?" Sakura asked, close to tears.
"No, Sakura, I was on my way up here anyways when I stoped to talk to Akemi," Neji replied to sooth Sakura.
"Oh, that's it! She was standing there watching you and Akemi! She asked me who Akemi was, thats what she was looking at out the window," Sakura said, glad she remembered, before walked out of the room, not realizing the look of apprehension on Neji's face.
Neji sat a while, and just looked at Tenten. How could she believe Neji would ever like someone else?
"Tenten, you mean the world to me," Neji whispered softly to Tenten. "I could never love another. I don't know if you can hear me, but you are my everything, no one else could ever mean a thing to me."
Silence was his response, though he did not expect more.

Kiba slowly awoke to light shining into his face. His arm was hurting and he looked down to see it lying under Hinata's sleeping form. Her naked sleeping form. She looked like she had had a long pleasure filled night. He would have to thank Kakashi for lending him those books.
Kiba slowly pulled his arm from under Hinata and stood up. Hinata whimpered at the loss of warmth, but didn't awake. Kiba bagan to dress, but before he could do more than put his boxers on, there was a knock at the door.
Not expecting anyone important, Kiba went to answer. To his shock, there stood Shikamaru and Ino
"Oh, the horror!" Ino screeched, covering her eyes. She ran back downstairs.
"What the hell..." Kiba said, stunned.
"I see you don't waste your time, Kiba," Shikamaru said, nodding towards Hinata.
Kiba punched Shikamaru, "Stop looking, you perv!"
Kiba slammed the door shut in Shikamaru's laughing face, who went back downstairs to await.
Kiba quickly dressed and went over to the bed.
"Hinata..." Kiba said, poking Hinata on the shoulder.
"Mmmm," Hinata said, rolling over, the blankets falling off. It was all Kiba could do but to jump into bed with Hinata.
"Wake up, Hinata, we have visitors."
Hinata jumped up, dragging the blankets up to her neck. "Where?"
"Downstairs, Silly. Do you honestly think I would allow anyone to see your naked body, but me?" Kiba said walking towards the door, "Shikamaru and Ino are waiting downstairs, hurry up and get dressed."
With that Kiba left the room. Hinata slowly got dressed thinking about what had happened that night. She couldn't help but blush, knowing that her friends would know what had happened too.
Hinata walked downstairs into the dining area where the first thing she saw was Ino talking with the gentlemen from yesterday, Kiyoshi. She went and sat next to Kiba and Shikamaru gave her that warm smile that he always gave.
"So, Hinata, how did you sleep?" Shikamaru said with a wink.
Hinata blushed a deep red, and was very embarrassed.
"Cut it out!" Kiba said, glaring at Shikamaru. "The Inn is full, I don't know how you are gonna get a room, Shikamaru."
"We already have. I let Ino take care of it. You can never tell her no. Not only was she able to get a room, but two rooms." Shikamaru said, digging into his hot plate of food. "You know how Ino is, though. We'll end up bunking together because she will insist Hinata have her own room."
Kiba didn't want to say anything because he didn't want to embarrass Hinata, but there was no way he was allowing Hinata a room to herself. He'd rather sleep with her than Shikamaru any day.
"I plan to get plenty of sleep today, we traveled all night. So I suggest you and Hinata go shopping, while we rest up," Shikamaru said, getting up, not waiting for a repy.
Ino and Shikamaru made their way up to their rooms.
"Well, Hinata, we are free for the day, what would you like to do?" Kiba asked, smiling warmly at Hinata.
"Let us go see the sights!" Hinata said eargly.
So they spent the day enjoying all the views the town had to offer.

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WARNING - this chapter is extremely graphic, and i'm sorry. i'm a pervert at nature. if your gonna get offended by it, just dont read it ok? I plan to write another chapter tonight thats a little less graphic. And if you haven't had Sex Ed yet, well heres your first lession! (excuse the spelling errors)

Chapter 6
Hinata woke suddenly at a unexplained sound. She opened her eyes and wiggled out of Kiba's grip to sit up. Akamaru sleep in the corner, unaffected. The noise came again, booming from right beside her. She looked over to see that it was Kiba's snoring. She didn't know whether to push him off and suffer the cold, or to just ignore him and be warm. She decided to wake him up.
"Kiba," She whispered, poking him. "Wake up, your snoring."
Kiba snored even louder in response.
"What kind of ninja reflexes are these? Arn't ninjas supposed to be alert at ALL times," Hinata muttered, poking him even harder.
Kiba didn't budge, he kept right on snoring.
"Fine," Hinata tried to push him off the bed, but found she wasn't strong enough.
Hinata sat back, annoyed. She didn't know what to do to get him awake.
Kiba muttered something in his sleep and rolled over, slinging his arm across Hinata, dragging her down, beside him. He mouth was right beside her ear. Again he began to snore, and it all Hinata could take because now it was very loud in her ear.
Hinata did the last thing she could think of. She inhaled a deep breath and let out a loud shrill scream.
Kiba jumped up and out of bed and Akamaru started barking.
"Good," Hinata said, rolling over and snugging in the blankets to sleep.
"Wha...?" Kiba said, confused.
"You were snoring in my ear and I couldn't wake you up"
"Oh..." Kiba said, sitting back down the edge of the bed.
After a while of him sitting there, Hinata sat up, wondering what was wrong with him.
"Kiba?" Hinata asked, touching his shoulder.
Her response was another snore.
"Oh!" Hinata said, angrily. "Your alseep!"
Hinata stood up and looked a Kiba. What was she supposed to do now? She decided she'd have to drag him back into the bed. She pushed him back, but in his sleepy condition, he grabbed Hinata's arm and pulled her back with him. Kiba's arms were wrapped securely around her waist and she wasn't going anywhere.
"Kiba, let go!"
Kiba opened his eyes very sleepily, and looked at Hinata.
"What are you doing there, Hinata?" Kiba asked in a daze.
"Oh, I just wonder," Hinata said with sarcasm.
"Aw, you didn't have to attack me for a kiss, Hinata, all you had to do was ask!"
Kiba pulled Hinata's head down towards his, before she could say a word. Their lips met, and Hinata wound her arms around his neck. Kiba's tounge traced the inside of her lower lip, sending shivers down Hinata's spine.
"Hinata, please don't stop me this time," Kiba said in a broken whisper.
Hinata's hold tighten around Kiba, and she leaned down to deepen the kiss, it was all the response Kiba needed. Kiba teased her her lips with his tounge and teeth, before he thrust his tounge deep into Hinata's mouth to taste her sweetness. He acted as though he had all the time in the world, but Hinata's mind was becoming mesh and she couldn't stand the sweet torture any longer.
Kiba stopped and looked into her glazed eyes. She was soft and willing, that innocent response was all he could handle. He was so hungry for her that he couldn't control his pace anymore. The kiss turned ravenous. Passion ignited into raw desire as his mouth slanted over hers.
The kiss seemed unending and yet over all too soon. Kiba pulled back again and Hinata's mouth was rosy and wet. The taste of her in his mouth now, but it wasn't enough for him.
Hinata collapaws against his chest, and tucked her face under his chin. Her breathing was fast against his collarbone.
Kiba lifed her into his arms and gently placed her in the center of the bed. He now stood looming over her. His gaze moved over her still clothed body. Kiba quickly stipped out of his shirt, but kept his pants on, not wanting Hinata to panic.
Kiba layed back down into bed again, and took Hinata's face in his hands for a long, hard kiss again. He made her shiver with desire. Kiba's body leaned over top of Hinata, and she couldn't resist putting her arms around his waist, running her hands up and down his muscled back. She simply couldn't get enough, she wanted to touch him, to stroke him.
Her touch was as light as butterfly's wings against his skin and yet it was the most eroticcaress he'd ever received. He turned his attention to her neck and she turned her head ever so slightly to give him access. His teeth gently tugged at her earlobes, sending jolts of pleasure cascading all the way down to her toes, and his tounge was making it impossible to thing.
She started shifting impatiently for more. Kiba shifted down lower and kissed a line down her throat. He moved lower and kissed the valley between her breasts. Hinata thought she would die if he stopped. His hands cupped her breasts and she immediately began to ache for more. She didn't understand the frustration building inside of her. Then Kiba's tounge brushed across her nipple and she almost came up off the bed. The feeling was almost too intense to endure, yet it was wonderful, too. Her hands dropped back to her sides and she grapped fistfuls of the sheets in an attempt to anchor herself against the storm of emotions flooding her.
"Kiba!" Hinata squealed.
Kiba had taken Hinata's nipple in his mouth and began to suckle. He was drving her beyond control. His hands stroked her everywhere. She drew a deep, ragged breath and began to whimper. His mouth captured hers again just as his hand slid down toward Hinata's waist. His hand ran inside her pants. The pad of his thumb rubbed against the very spot he knew would driver her crazy through .
Kiba pulled away and Hinata let go reluctantly. Kiba stood up and quickly jerked his pants off, and sitting on the edge of the bed, pulled Hinata's pants down, too. Sometime during last moments her shirt had already been removed. He gazed down at her with nothing but her underwear on.
"Kiba, your making me ache. Please..." Hinata begged.
She didn't know what she wanted from him, only knew she would go mad if he didn't do anything to ease the sweet torment.
He hoped to god she was ready for him. He pulled her arms away from the sheets and wrapped them around his neck. He quickely slipped her understand down her legs. His knee nudged her thighs wider and his hands slid under her hips to hold her close. The tip of him was surrounded by her liquid heat. She slowly pressed insdie of her, paused when he felt the barrier of her virginity, and then tried to gently push past the obstacle. Kiba's jaw was clenched tight and his breathing ragged as though he'd just ran a mile, for the pleasure was already so intense he could barely hold on to what little control he had left. He knew he was hurting her. She cried out against his mouth and tried to push him away at the same time.
"It's going to be alright, Hinata, the pain won't last long. Just hold on me," Kiba said with all the breath he could get before thrusting into her with one deep stroke.
Hinata cried out, and tears began spilling over and down her cheeks.
"Please don't cry. I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you. It'll get better in a few minutes, just don't move. You feel so good."
The worry in his voice soothes her far more than his words. Pleasure warred with pain. She was so confused by the the feelings, she didn't know what to do. She wanted him to stop, and yet she didn't. His breath was hot against her ear. The sound of its harshness excited her.
"I want to move." Her voice a bare whisper, shocking even herself.
Kiba leaned up on his elbows to look at her. Her eyes shimmered with passion, but more important to him, she had stopped crying.
"Me, too." His voice was roush, and she instinctively squeezed him tight.
His mouth covered hers in another ravenous kiss. The hunger inside him raged out of control. He slowly withdrew amnd thrust deep inside again. The ritual consumed him, and when she tightened around him again and lifted her hips up to meet his thrusts, he buried his face against the side of her neck and let out a raw groan. The pressure building up inside him was too intense. He had to find relief. Hinata was like fire in his arms, and her wild, uninhibited response shook him to his very soul. She held nothing back and that act forced him to do the same. The bed squeaked in protest as he thrust inside of her again and again.
It came upon them in a rush. She found her release first and when she instinctively squeezed him tight and arched against him, he gave in to his own pleasure.
Hinata clung to Kiba as they both tried to recover. She let the wave of blissful surrender was over her. Kiba rolled over beside her and pulled her into his arms. Both fell asleep without a word being whispered.

Shikamaru and Ino travelled through the night to reach the Village before morning. They travelled in silence. Neither knew what would greet them once they arrived.

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Tuesday, December 18, 2007


ok so yay chapter 5... sorry, frownz, i make ino seem like a real bitch, i didn't do it on purpose, it just kinda happened that way. she'll better, i promise hope.
Sorry for spelling errors, and there is no explicit content in this chapter.

Chapter 5
"We should reach the village by this afternoon. Just in time to get a room for the night," Kiba told Hinata, as they took a small break.
Hinata just nodded. She hadn't said a word all day, and Kiba knew the reason, yet he still pondered over it. It hadn't even gotten that serious, at least Kiba didn't believe so. He wasn't about to say anything though, girls always got so touchy about that sort of thing.
They tredged on in silence. Ever now and again Kiba tried to being up a conversation, but all he got a nod. He soon got really tired of her attitude.
"What the crap is wrong with you, Hinata?"
Icey eyes sharply turned toward his, but those lips refused to move.
"I don't know what your problem is. I mean, I know, but I don't understand why your causing such a big fuss about it. It didn't even go that far," Kiba said, not caring if it hurt Hinata, he'd rather have her angry and yelling at him than not talking to him at all. Akamaru choosing this moment to run off into the woods, he wanted no part in their yelling.
"You don't understand anything do you?" Hinata said, granting Kiba's wish for her to yell at him. "You took advantage of me!"
"All I did was kiss you!" Kiba was yelling too, just as angry at the accustion. "I stopped when you told me too, but I didn't hear any complaints, just that we shouldn't!"
"Kiba, GAH! You make me so angry and frustrated." Hinata said, and tears started spilling over from her eyes.
"Don't... no... Hinata, I'm sorry, please don't cry," Kiba didn't know what to do.
Kiba did the only thing he could think of, he pulled her into his arms and pushed her head down on his chest. Hinata just held on to Kiba and cried.
"I'm sorry, Hinata, I didn't mean to take advantage of you, I just couldn't help myself. Your the most beautiful girl I have ever seen, and I'm just a guy."
Hinata felt better hearing Kiba's confession. Maybe because he was making himself vunerable to protect her feelings. None the less, she was comforted, and if anything it made her like Kiba so much more.
"I'm sorry I got your shirt wet," Hinata said, pulling her face away from Kiba's chest.
"It's alright, Hinata. I promise I won't touch you anymore without your consent ok?"
Hinata and Kiba walked on with their friendship mended. Closer it seemed than ever before.

Back in the village, the Hokage called Shikamaru and Ino to her.
"I have decided that we do not need this many people to stay here in the village, Kiba and Hinata will surely need your help in their battle." the Hokage said to the two people before her. "I would just send you, Shikamaru, because I know you would be good for the job, but because of Hinata, I have decided to send you too, Ino."
The hokage stood up, "They have headed toward the Sound Village, They should make it their today, if you travel fast, you will catch them there before they begin to travel else where. Go now."
Both Shikamaru and Ino bowed and took their leave. They walked outside in silence.
"I don't know why I had to get stuck with you, Shikamaru," Ino said, when they got outside. "I don't want to hear any pervert comments from you on this trip, do you hear me? And don't even thinkf of trying to make any type of move," Ino told Shikamaru.
"What a drag." Shikamaru's face resembled that of a young boy who was told he'd have to stay inside while it rained, but then he just shrugged telling himself, when did that ever stop him?
After packing, both Ino and Shikamaru began their journey to find Hinata and Kiba.
"I don't know why they had to chose you, I could have done it all by myself, even without Kiba and Hinata," Ino said.
Shikamaru just rolled his eyes and continued on, this would be a long trip.

Hinata and Kiba finally reached the Sound Village. They went straight to the Inn.
"I'll get our rooms, Hinata, you go and have something warm to eat," Kiba said, pushing Hinata towards the dining area of the Inn.
Kiba motioned for Akamaru to fallow and walked up to the front desk and waited for someone to assist him. A young woman, looked about the same age as Kiba himself, came to help him.
"I am looking for two rooms, maybe close to each other?" Kiba told the lady.
"Um, well there have been many visitors it seems lately, and I'm afraid we only have one room available."
"What? But that won't do." Kiba said, kind of annoyed.
"I'm sorry, but that is the best I can do for you."
Kiba muttered to himself. It was alright, he and Hinata could hold themselves together to acomplish this task.
"Oh, alright, I'll take it," Kiba mumbled, handing her some coin.
"You may call me Hotaru," The woman said extending her hand to him.
"Uh... Yeah, call me Kiba," Kiba said, taking her hand.
He left with the room key and went to put his and Hinata's things in it. Then went downstairs to tell Hinata the bad news on only one room, and to get something to eat.
Kiba approached Hinata, who was in deep conversation with a man who looked only a few years older than Hinata. Akamaru went and sat next to Hinata. The man had dashing looks, and charm, for Hinata was blushing at the compliments he gave. Kiba sat beside Hinata and glared at the man.
"Oh!" Hinata had forgotten about Kiba. "Kiyoshi, this is my..."
"Her boyfriend," Kiba finished, cutting Hinata short.
Hinata just kind of looked at Kiba, knowing something was up and she decided not to push him.
"Yes, my boyfriend, Kiba," Hinata murmured. "Kiba, this is Kiyoshi, he was just telling me of some of the sights in town."
Kiba was stunned that Hinata wasn't getting angry with his comment, but in truth he didn't have a reason for it, other than jealousy.
"If you will excuse us, Kiyoshi, but I have need to speak with my girl," Kiba said, giving Kiyoshi a look that told him to go the fuck away.
"Hinata, we have a problem with the rooms," Kiba said to Hinata when they were alone. "They only had one available."
"What? What are we going to do?" Hinata asked
"I'll sleep on the floor, ok?"
"Alright," Hinata replied. "Lets go to bed, I am tired."
The three went up to the room to go to sleep. Kiba rolled hid bed out onto the floor and fell onto it, fully clothed. Hinata did the same in the bed next to the only window. Akamaru lay next to Kiba, giving him the warmth from his fuzzy body.
"Goodnight, Hinata."
"Goodnight."
Both lay in bed, but neither slept. Hinata was about to freeze and was trying to think of a way to get Kiba to sleep next to her, she knew he would radiate warmth.
"Kiba?" Hinata whispered after a long silence.
"Hmmm?" Was her reply.
"If your really cold you could come lay up here..." Hinata didn't even finish the sentence and Kiba was climbing into bed with her. "But you have to stay on your side of the bed!"
Kiba ignored her last comment and pulled her into his arms.
"Go to sleep, Hinata, I could hear your teeth chattering from way across the room," Kiba said, hushing all protests Hinata might have gave.

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ok so story will be a little late today because i have been imspired by Frownz. >_< its not exactly what you requested, frownz, but i will start a totally new story as soon as i am finished with this one, and it'll be all about them. for now, i will just add them into my already story as much as possible without taking away from Kiba and Hinata. ^_^ hope thats ok.

but anyways i took my friend to get her drivers license today and she got them! i had to watch her ginger baby, and i was so excited and scared at the same time, but Alanis just goo gooed away and pointed at all kinds of stuff, that made her happy till her mama got back. it was fun actually.

I'm kinda depressed because my boyfriend is, and i wish i could help him. This is what he said, which some explain it all "The story of my fucking life 'At this time, you are no longer being considered for the position of your choice based on a careful review of your interests and qualifications.'" hes got two jobs and wants to go back to college but he can't until hes able to get just one good job. hes so stressed out, and i can't do anything for him. i offered to help him out, but refuses to take money from anyone, even his parents. *sigh*

anyways i am gonna go work on my story now. laterz all.

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Monday, December 17, 2007


WARNING: the next chapter holds kinda explicit content, but not exactly. like to me, this is nothing, b/c it'll get way more detailed and stuff later, i just don't want someone getting mad at me or something. if you are offended by "smex" then don't read it. its that simple. This chapter just holds the kid stuff.
oh and ignore spelling errors again.

Chapter 4
As darkness fell, Kiba and Hinata started to search out a water source and came upon a small stream close to the path's edge. There they set up camp.
After starting up a fire, Kiba and Hinata sat silently across from each other soaking up the warmth and night sounds.
"Uh... Listen, Hinata... About that kiss..." Kiba began, but paused trying to word his thoughts.
"Yes?" Hinata asked looking up.
"Well, it didn't mean anything, It was just kinda... spur of the moment," Kiba said, but seeing the hurt look in Hinata's eyes he hated he had said anything at all.
"Yeah... It didn't mean anything." Hinata replied. "I'm going to bed now."
Jumping up Hinata grabbed her bed roll and rolled it out beside the fire. "Goodnight." She offered, rolling away from him and going to sleep.
Kiba just sat, with Akarmu's head in his lap, staring at Hinata's sleeping form.
"Well, boy, seems like i've done it again," Kiba muttered to Akamaru, as he got up to get his own bed roll.
After settling down, he hands behind his back and Akamaru snuggled up next to him, he thought about the kiss. He thought about how wonderful it had felt to feel Hinata soft curves against his hard body. Her lips had been so soft, and yet so incredibly sweet. He imagined what her body would feel like without the boundries of clothes between them. He could imagine her long legs wrapped around his waist, how smooth and perfect they were.
Kiba could stand it no more, desire fueled his movements. He stood up and walked around the fire. He paused when he reached Hinata's sleeping form, seeing the flickering light from the fire spreading across her face. Slowly kneeling down beside her, Kiba lifted a strand of hair away from her face and lowed his lips to hers.
Hinata sighed in her sleep as Kiba's lips met hers. As his hand began to caress her soft face moving to the back of her neck, he kissed her softly.Hinata arched her back in response, slowly awaking, but unsure of if she was still dreaming or not.
"Kiba?" Hinata whispered against his lips.
Kiba took that chance and plunged his tounge through her lips, taking all he could of her sweet taste.
Kiba took and took, not giving a inch, not allowing Hinata to protest. His hands moved down her back up the back of her shirt, moving along smooth silky skin. One hand moved around to caress her smooth flat stomach. Hinata moaned at the feel of Kiba's rough hands. Kiba broke his lips away from hers and moved to her neck.
Hinata didn't know what was happening to her, just that it was the most wonderful feeling ever. She wanted more but wasn't too sure what more was. her hands clinched in Kiba's hair, but she didn't know whether to pull him closer or to push him away.
"Kiba..." She said breathlessly. "I think... I think we should stop."
Kiba rolled away from Hinata and stared at the sky, trying to catch his breath, to control his desire. "I want you so much, Hinata."
Hinata sat there, too stunned to say anything. Her breath coming quick.
"Can't you feel how much I want you?" Kiba grabbed her hand her hand and held it to the crotch of his pants.
Hinata gasped and jerked her hand back in shock. At once the image of Kiba naked that morning flashed in her thoughts.
"But... You... I... We can't." Hinata said, her mind swirling.
"Yeah, your right, but when has that ever stopped me?" Kiba said, jumping to his feet. He looked down at her. "Sweet dreams, Hinata."
Kiba walked away into the woods to calm himself down, leaving Hinata with a puzzled look on her face. Hinata didn't know what to do. She wasn't sure if she should go after Kiba or not. She ended up laying back down trying to sleep, but sleep eluded her.
After about 15 minutes of lying there Hinata heard Kiba's footsteps coming back. She knew he had layed back down in his own bed to sleep. Eventually she fell asleep.

Hinata awoke to a bright light. She opened her eyes to find it morning already. She sat up and looked to where Kiba should of been sleeping and all of her memories from the night before flooded back.
"Oh!" She gasped, bringing her hand up to her lips as if to feel Kiba's lips still pressed against them.
"Something wrong?" Kiba asked from behind her.
Hinata whirled around with a blush.
"Nothing is wrong," Hinata blurted out.
Hinata looked at Kiba to see any sign of the night before, but Kiba stood next to Akamaru, as if nothing had happened. Had she dreamt it all? Was she losing her mind? No! She knew it had happened, there was no way she could dreamed of something that passionate. Why was Kiba acting as he was?
As Hinata packed away her sleeping material and went to the stream to rinse her face she decided that it must have not been that important and chose to fallow Kiba's example.
"Come, Hinata, I think that if we make good time we should be able to make it by mid day tomorrow," Kiba said to Hinata as the three began their journey.

Back at the Village Neji was going nuts. He couldn't stop blaming himself for Tenten's injury. If he had just kept a better eye on her, then she would be ok right now, not at death's mercy.
He sat beside her bed as Sakura and Ino slept. He could not take his eyes from her face. She had yet to awaken or show any progress. He didn't know what he would do without Tenten, she was his anchor in his world of chaos. Everything he did, he did for her.
A light knock sounded on the door and Neji got up to answer it. Shino stood on the other side.
"Neji," Shino greeted.
Neji stood aside allowing Shino to come in. Shino went directly to Tenten's side.
"How is she?" Shino spoke to Neji, but kept his eyes on Tenten.
"The same," Neji said with a sigh, plopping back down in his chair.
Shino stood silently staring at Tenten's features. Neji sat with his eyes closed. As Shino watched, he saw Tenten's eye lids flutter, then open. She looked up at Shino and the two stared silently at each other.
"Things will improve Neji, I am sure of it." With that, Shino turned around and walked out.
Tenten started with interest at Neji, who had yet to notice. She moved her head to the side to get a better view. Neji's head popped up to see Tenten's bright eyes staring at him.
"Tenten!" Neji said, jumping to his feet. "Your awake! How are you? How do you feel? Are you hungry? Do you want something to drink?"
"Ne..." Tenten tried to speak but her voice came out hoarse. She cleared her throat but found it hurt to do so. "Neji, where am I? What happened to me? Why do I hurt?"
Neji wanted to grab Tenten and pull her close but he couldn't for fear of hurting her worse. So insteast he took hold of her hand and squeezed it.
"Tenten, it will be alright, everything will be ok," Neji told her.
"But... I'm so confused, Neji, what happened? What did I do? I can't... can't remember..."
"Tenten, stay calm, your alirght, i promise. Two nights ago someone broke into your room and hurt you really bad. Everything is alright now because your awake," Neji told her. "Kiba and Hinata are out right now trying to find the guy whos did it, while Sasuke and Naruto are making the village safe again for you. Tenten, I am so sorry I let this happen to you, I should have watched out for you better."
It hurt Tenten was trying to remain awake, but her eyes kept drifting down, she was so tired, so weak, she didn't like feeling this way.
"I'm so sorry, Tenten, you need sleep," Neji said, sitting back down in his chair.
Tenten didn't argue and was asleep in minutes.
As soon as Neji was absolutely sure Tenten was a sleep he left the room to get Sakura who was asleep in her own room, to tell her the good news.
Sakura opened her door a little angry at being woke up, but as soon as she saw Neji, her mood changed to one of being worried.
"Is everything alright, Neji?" Sakura asked, turned to grab a robe so she could hurry to Tenten's room.
Neji stopped her by giving her a huge bear hug. Sakura was stunned at Neji's behavior.
"Tenten woke up!" Neji about screamed in Sakura's ear.
At first Sakura didn't quite comprehend what Neji had said but as soon as she realized she hugged him back just as tight, if not tighter.
"We must tell the others! You go back and sit with her, I'll go get Ino and the rest." Sakura said, breaking away from Neji.
Over and over again the message 'Tenten woke up' played in Sakura's mind. Everything would be okay now, if only Kiba and Hinata can destroy the enemies.

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Sunday, December 16, 2007


Ok FINALLY >_< here it is, the 3rd chapter. i am going to try my hardest to get the 4th up tonight too ^_^ and again, sorry for any spelling errors, i didn't spell check it this time. sorry.

Chapter 3

Sasuke, Naruto, Kiba, and Hinata stood near the entrance of the Hokage's office.
"I have awoken to grave news this morning," the Hokage said, "And I have thought long and hard about it."
All four of them stood in silence, waiting for their commandments.
"I do not want this to happen again!" the Hokage said, angrly. She was disgusted at how easily the evil task had been accomplished. "Kiba, you go with Akamaru and fight the culprit. Do not give up and do not come back unless in disgrace," the Hokage paused, looking at Hinata, "Hinata I have witnissed your courage, you go with him, together your courage will be great, and your enemies will fall. I know not where your journey begins but I trust you to handle it."
The Hokage sat back in her chair, her mind suddendly at peace that the job would be done right. She turned to Naruto and Sasuke then.
"How does Neji fare? I know he must be devastated."
"Neji was given a sleeping potion to keep him calm," Sasuke replied.
"Hmm... Do you believe him stable enough to help make the village is safe again?"
"I believe that in Neji's condition he is the best one to help, in his will to protect Tenten he will strive for protection and sight gaps we may miss, but he may become consumed in his work and work himself to death," Sasuke answered.
"When he awakens send him to me and I will talk to him. Go now and keep this village protected, do not let your fellow neighbors suffer again."
As the five exited they parted ways. Kiba, Hinata, and Akamaru went to gather their things for the mission. Sasuke and Naruto went to check on Tenten's well being and to begin their own job.
"Kiba, I am not sure where to begin," Hinata said as they walked.
"First we go to the Sound Village to sniff out the snake," Kiba replied, all shyness from the day before gone, nothing but the grim mission ahead to acomplish on his mind.
They continued on in silence parting ways at their rooms.

Sasuke and Naruto lightly knocked on Tenten's door. A very disgruntle looking Sakura answered.
"Whoa," Naruto muttered, startled at Sakura's appearance. It earned him a glare.
"Oh, shove it, Naruto," she replied.
"Enough, you two. We have came to see about Tenten's health, Sakura," Sasuke said.
Sakura glared at Naruto once more and turned to allow the boys entrance. Naruto and Sasuke hurried over to where Tenten slept.
"Hey, Ino," Both of the boys said, ackknowledging Ino's presence.
They both looked down at Tenten's dangerously pale face.
"Sh... She's not... Dead, is she?" Naruto asked in a choked whisper.
"No, she isn't dead, just unconscious," Ino replied. "She lost alot of blood. Tenten is a fighter, we believe she will make it. We are fairly certain it missed her organs, she hasn't began to spit of blood or anything yet."
"When Neji awakens the Hokage wishes to speak with him," Sasuke said. "We will come back later, if anything happens, please inform us."
"Alright," Sakura said, sitting down.

Kiba opened up his closest door to grab some clothes and saw that everything he owned was identical.
"Gah, I really need to buy some new clothes, maybe when this is all over with I will remember to," Kiba muttered to himself, while quickly grabbing items and throwing them in a bag.
Kiba glanced at Akamaru and remembered to pack some food rations.
"No telling how long we'll be out there, boy, might as well pack all the food we got," Kiba said to Akamaru.
He began to actually think. He thought about what it meant to go on this trip with Hinata. Just the two of them, alone. Kiba began to grow more nervous about it.
He quickly finished packing and trotted outside to await Hinata. All he could imagine was Hinata sleeping near him, in the cold and he began to day dream.
"Oh, Kiba, its so cold, will you keep me warm?" He imagined Hinata saying.
"Of Course, Hinata," Kiba replied to his dream.
"Of course what?"
Kiba jerked his head up to see Hinata standing in from of him.
"Of course you would take longer to get ready because your a girl," Kiba said trying to cover himself.
"Oh? And what exactly is that supposed to mean?" Hinata said raising her eyebrow.
Kiba thought to himself that atleast she was mad and not slapping him for his day dreaming. "Well, girls always seem to need so much to get ready, thats all."
"Right... C'mon, then, lets go!" Hinata said a little angrily.
"Uh, right. I think we should head towards the Sound Village first. Thats where Orochimaru stays, so best chances that he might be there. We should scout out the most obvious places first."
Kiba, Hinata, and Akamaru headed out in silence. They walked along to old trodden path towards the Sound Village. Once they got into a more wooden area Kiba fell behind a little, but Hinata was still a little mad about the sexist comment and chose to ignore him.
"Hey, Hinata check this out, I'm a bird!" Kiba yelled at from above.
Hinata looked up in shock as Kiba spread his arms and jumped off a tree limp.
"Kiba! NO!" Hinata screamed running forward to try and catch him.
Kiba grabbed another limb, laughing and swung down to his feet.
"Ha ha, were you actually trying to catch me?" Kiba said, laughing at Hinata.
"Kiba, you idiot you could have been hurt!" Hinata said, her face turning red.
"Aww, were you worried about me?" Kiba said, teasing.
"Just shut up, Kiba, I couldn't care less if you broke your neck," Hinata tried to storm off, but Kiba caught hold of her wrist.
He pulled her against tha tree placing his hands on either side of her face. He placed one hand beneath her chin and lifted her face towards his.
"I'm sorry," Kiba whispered, his hot breath blowing against her lips. Leaning down he kissed her.
Hinata felt as if her heart was going to explode it was beating so fast. She had never experienced anything so sweet and gentle as his lips.
Kiba lifted his head and looked down at her. The sunlight filtering through the trees down on Hinata's face. Kiba quickly let go of Hinata, realizing what had happened.
"Wha... Uh... I'm sorry..." Kiba said, a little embarassed that he lost his control.
Hinata remained silent, leaning against the tree for support. After a few minutes in silence, and after both seemed to recover, they walked on in silence as it began to get dark.

Sasuke and Naruto, back at the village, had just finished up their day, and was now sitting down having a hot cup of ramen.
"How do you think Hinata and Kiba are handling it?" Sasuke wondered outloud.
"Well, if I know Kiba, hes making a move on Hinata as we speak," Naruto replied.
"Hee, and what about you, Naruto?"
"What do you mean 'me'?" Naruto asked, lifting his cup up to drink.
"Well everyone in the village knows you and Sakura were meant for each other"
"WHAT?!" Naruto said, spitting his drink out.
"Yeah, you two argue so much, your meant for each other. It seems to me that you've met your match," Sasuke said, chuckling.
"No way, man, she hates my guts," Naruto replied with a sigh.
"Yeah, I guess your right, maybe someday..." Sasuke muttered, finishing his ramen.

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Saturday, December 15, 2007


i've been really busy today and haven't gotten a chance to write much, so i doubt chapter 3 of my fan fic will get posted. >_< sorry. but at about 5 this morning i posted a new picture, go vote and comment.

Sensitive Kiba

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Friday, December 14, 2007


Ok so this is the next chapter of my fan fic. ^_^ I hope everyone enjoys it. if you want to read the first chapter, just go to my archives.

Oh and its not fully spell checked, so just ignore those mistakes.

Chapter 2 -

Kiba tossed and turned in his bed, knocking Akamaru off the bed.
"No, Mommy, not the clown suit!" Kiba called out in his sleep.
Suddenly a loud pounding came from the door and Akamaru jumped to his feet barking.
"Kiba! Get your ass up!" Sasuke's muffled voice came from behind the door, "Something terrible has happened!"
Kiba sprung up in bed and jumped to his feet to answer the door. Kiba was too drowsy to realize he wasn't wearing anything and when he opened the door, there stood Hinata along with Sasuke and Naruto. Hinata let out a gasp and covered her eyes.
"Kiba, you douche, get some clothes on!" Naruto yelled pushing kiba inside. "Maybe you should wait outside, Hinata, while we tell Kiba the news."
Sasuke and Naruto went inside pulling the door closed behind them while Kiba got dressed. Sasuke sat on the bed petting Akamaru and Naruto plundered through Kiba's bedside table. Naruto pulled out a pervy magazine.
"Oh, yeah," Naruto mumbled, flipping through the book.
"Last night, during the storm, Tenten was in stabbed in the stomach," Sasuke said, as Kiba pulled on his pants.
"By who?" Kiba asked, pausing.
"Well we know for sure that Orochimaru was involved, but we also believe that Kami and Kaze, from the Cloud Village, were in one it, too, thats where the storm came from," Naruto said, his eyes staying glued to the magazine.
"Well, what are we waiting on? Lets go kick some ass!" Kiba said and he and Akamaru headed towards the door after zipping up his jacket.
"Wait, Kiba, theres more," Sasuke said grabing Kiba's arm. "They could come back."
Kiba froze, thinking of Hinata and what might happen to her if they came back. His eyes turned cold and for a second his anger overcame him, but control seeped back in and he turned to Sasuke.
"So we send one group and leave another group behind," Kiba said, all playfulness gone. "I will go."
"That isn't our choice, Kiba, we must speak with the Hokage and let her decided," Sasuke said, "Lets go now."
Kiba wasted no time and promptly left the room, Akamaru following. Sasuke grabbed Naruto who dropped the magazine and they headed downstairs.
Hinata sat downstairs on a bench thinking a Kiba's body. She was so shocked that Kiba could be so ripped. He always had his jacket on and it was hard to tell, but earlier... oh my.
Hinata looked up and spotted Kiba headed down the stairs and blushed at her sinful thoughts, but Kiba didn't even acknowledge her presence and continued on. Startled, Hinata looked up at Sasuke who motioned her to follow. Kiba was in a killing mood and it was not wise to speak to him. Nothing would calm him but finding the culprit.
The four quickly made their way to find the Hokage with Akamaru following behind.

Tenten was in bad shape. Sakura and Ino sat her side keeping an eye on her. The knife had been drawn and the woud bandaged, but Tenten still lost a good bit of blood. They were not able to determine whether or not any organs had been puntured though.
Tenten drew her face up in pain and Sakura and Ino were continuously wiping sweat from her.
"Poor Tenten," Sakura soothed as she wiped away the sweat.
"Do you think she will make it," Ino asked with worry in her voice.
"It will be a close call if she does," Sakura replied.
"Poor Neji, hes devastated," Ino said, "It took both shino and Shikamaru to drag him back to his room. Iruka Sensei had to give him some sleeping potion to make him calm down."
"All we can do is wait," Sakura said, "And hope the boys will take care of things, while we do our best to take care of Tenten."
As Tenten began to sleep more peacefully, Sakura and Ino drifted off too. There was nothing they could do but wait.

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UPDATE: I JUST MADE A 95 ON MY ORACLE EXAM! ^_^ the highest in the class... but since there are only 4 students total in the class >_< it doesn't count as much.

so i know not many people read my fan fic if anyone but my friends did, but thats ok, b/c i am mostly writing it for my friends ^_^ and the fact that i kinda like to write.

i got two more issues of black cat. it was pretty awesome.

i'm still sick, if anything i am worse today than yesterday, but its the last day of school today and i have an exam so i HAVE to go.

i'm going with UniqueSideEffect to the zoo tomorrow to see the lights, she kinda don't know yet, but when she reads it she will. i have some more pictures to post too! but i'm gonna work on my fan fiction first and foremost. ^_^

so have a nice day everyone!

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