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Monday, July 3, 2006


   hallucinations of the very tired!
well i think i've been short of sleep for weeks..
been staying up late on the net lol
waking up late.. just isn't the same-_- i used to be able to do this, why can't i now?
..i'm getting old.. 0_0
omg
i dont' want to go to heritage hall.. that is like the worst nursing home ever i had to go chime there and it's bad
...anyway
i've been writing a lot lately too, for the book knox and i are writing.. we're a fine pair, we get together, write, then bewail our writing skills and threaten each other for it
"oh my looorrrrdd, my writing sucks it is such CHEEEEZ"
"IF YOU SAY THAT ONE MORE TIME I WILL DO YOU BODILY HARM!!!!!! IT IS NOT CHEEZ! IT IS GOOD!!"
that's what we always do to each other-_-'
lol
although i want an unbiased opinion.. i have to write slight romance and it's really hard to do without a certain amount of cheeziness.. so here's an exerpt.. tell me how bad it sounds:

' “Well, this hasn’t done much for either of us.” he sat back and stared at the sky. He had to look back down again almost immediately. The blue was so intense it burned his eyes. He looked at Lyra, and she was the opposite of that bright sky. In her gray school uniform with her dark brown hair framing a pale and unhappy face. Now she was looking at him, and he thought it was sad that he couldn’t make her as bright as that sky, only even more pale and unhappy than she always was.
“Can I ask you for a favor, then?” '

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