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Wednesday, December 19, 2007


   Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
ok heres chapter 11 and 12 of my ninja fanfic!


CHAPTER 11: THE ANNUAL JONIN TOURNAMENT! GAARA RETURNS!


Naruto slowly awakes in a hospital bed and find Hinata sleeping right beside him on the edge.

He bent over and kissed her on the forehead. Naruto then looked to his left and found Kiba

reading a magazine. Naruto then looked to his right and found Sasuke eating a apple with his left arm since his right got chopped off.

"Hey Sasuke how's it hanging!" Naruto asked.

"I should ask you the same thing you've been passed out for two days now." Sasuke said.

"What! Two whole days!" Naruto yelled.

"Yep! and Hinata never left your side not once. That girl is devoted to you Naruto." Kiba said.

Naruto looked at Hinata and felt a happiness in his heart that someone actually loves him. He smiled. Naruto heard the door open and saw a tall nurse about two years older than them walking towards them.

"Well it seems like you're finally awake Mr. Uzumaki. How are you feeling?" The nurse asked.

"I feel great!" Naruto said as he ripped the bandages off to find his wounds completely healed.

"What are you doing!" The nurse yelled.

"Look at me! Im fine." Naruto said.

"Well we have a fast healer here!" She said. "But your arm is still broken though"

Naruto wiggled his left arm in the sling and wiggled his fingers. He ripped the sling apart and bent his left arm up and down. "Nope its healed also!"

"Wow! either this kid is a fast healer or our medicine is better than i thought." The nurse said.

The door opened again and this time Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Kohaki, Choji and Akamaru step through.

"Hey Sakura!" Naruto said.

Hinata woke up drooling a bit and her hair was a mess. She wiped away the drool and rubbed her eyes.

"Hey Naruto and Sasuke. How are you two doing?" Sakura said.

"Im doing great as always! I feel like I can take on the whole world!" Naruto said as he stood on the hospital bed with fire in his eyes holding his fist in the air.

Sakura smiled as she turned her attention to Sasuke. "How about you Sasuke-kun?"

"I doing fine. Just here eating an apple." Sasuke replied.

Naruto's stomach growled. "Oh man! I just realized I haven't eating in two days!"

Choji opened a bag of chips. It seemed so appetizing to Naruto. "Hey Choji how bout sharing those chips with me?"

Choji's eyes stared at Naruto like he was crazy. "Are you crazy! I never share my barbecue chips with anyone except Yuki!"

"Yuki? Whos that?" Naruto asked as he sat back down in his bed.

"Oh yeah that is right! Since you've been gone Choji got married to a girl from the Village hidden in the clouds." Shikamaru said.

"Choji? Married?" Naruto thought. Naruto's stomach growled again. "Man I'm so hungry!"

"Its ok Naruto-kun. I got a surprise for you!" Hinata said. "Meet me in the hospital lobby later." She kissed him on the lips and ran out the door.

"Awww! They are so cute! Watching them makes me wanna be with Shino right now!" Ino said.

Akamaru jumped onto Naruto licking his face. "Hey Akamaru! Hey cut that out! That tickles!" Naruto laughed unbearably.

Akamaru stopped licking Naruto and jumped onto Kiba and started licking him.

Naruto looked at Sasuke and Sakura in another make out session. He smiled. "I remember Sakura always desperately tried to get Sasuke's attention when we were kids. But now I guess I'm not the only dimwit who didn't realize love." Naruto thought.

"Do you guys think that you would be ready in time for the Annual Leaf Ninja Tournament in three weeks?" Shikamaru asked.

Naruto drew a blank expression on his face. "Oh crap! I totally forgot! Grandma Tsunade told me about that! I got to get training quickly!" Naruto stepped out of the bed to leave but Sakura pulled him by the hair.

"Oh no you don't! You are no condition to start training idiot! Sakura said.

"Why not! Im completely healed!" Naruto argued. "Why don't you tend to your boyfriend!"

A vein appeared in Sakura's head. "I said no!" She punched him in the head.

Sasuke smirked.

"Gee ok mom!" Naruto said rubbing his head.

"Mr Uchiha is it? Well Mr. Sumataku will see you now in the emergency room." The nurse said.

The nurse walked away with Sasuke and Sakura. Kiba looked into Kohaki's eyes. "I love you Kohaki."

"I love you too Kiba." Kohaki said as they kissed passionately.

Ino looked at Shikamaru and Choji. "We should throw a party!"

"Oh yeah! with food!" Choji said.

"A party? Why Ino?" Shikamaru asked.

"Cause we all have someone now! I have Shino! You have Temari! Sakura has Sasuke! Choji has Yuki! Kiba has Kohaki! Neji has Tenten! And Naruto has Hinata! We should totally have a huge party!" Ino said.

"Aren't you forgetting someone?" Shikamaru asked.

"If you are talking about Lee, don't worry I found someone for him." Ino replied.

Shikamaru looked at Ino with a confused look but paid it no attention. "Anyway we should get ready to leave for the Leaf Village today."

"Sure! I can't wait to see Kakashi-sensei again!" Naruto said as he jumps out of the bed and opens his backpack and pulls out a spare set of clothes. His old jumpsuit, the classic blue and orange one. He ran to the shower room and took a shower. In the shower he noticed someone
singing a beautiful song in the stall next to him. He lifts himself up and finds a purple haired girl washing herself and singing so beautifully. His eyes widen as he looks up and down her naked body. He starts to sweat a little. He carefully steps back down.

"I just saw Hinata naked." Naruto thought as he blushed a dark red. "Darn you Pervy Sage! Im a pervert like you!"

"Naruto is that you?" Hinata's voice spoke out.

Naruto froze with fear. "What do i say! Hey Hinata I just saw you naked! No no no that's not the way to go! Gahhh!" Naruto thought. Naruto didn't respond but just left to put on his jumpsuit.

Naruto sat in the hospital lobby still thinking about what he just saw. "Oh man! I didn't know she could have curves like that! I mean she always wore that jacket and everything so i couldn't see anything but I've never been so........confused and excited before. I mean I wanted to walk into that stall and kiss her but I'm still a virgin."

"Hey Naruto-kun!" Hinata said as she walked up beside him. "Are you ready for my surprise?"

"Ummmm.......sure Hinata" Naruto uneasily said.

Hinata ran off into the hallway and pushed out an cart.. "It's your present for saving me."

Naruto's eyes widen as tears of joy rolled down his face. "Cake!"

The inscription on the cake read "I love you with all my heart" and it was shaped in a pink heart.

"Oh thank you Hinata!" Naruto kissed Hinata passionately as their tounges rolled around each other. Naruto couldn't help himself but stroked Hinata's body as they felt each other's passion for each other.

"Ahem!" a voice rang out.

Naruto and Hinata broke up their make out session to find Shino and Ino holding hands.

"Save it for when we get home you two!" Ino said.

"Oh ok." Hinata blushed but Naruto dived into his cake eating it. "Uh-huh....." Naruto said with a mouth full of cake.

Naruto ate all of the cake and was hyper off the sugar. "Sugar Rush!!!" Naruto and Hinata held hands as they walked to the entrance of Mizuke Village.

Kiba was on one crutch as he kissed Kohaki. "Are you sure you wanna leave this village?" Kiba asked.

"Yes this village would be fine without a king telling them what to do. Right now I wanna be with you!" They kissed again.

"Is everyone here?" Shikamaru asked.

Naruto looked around and searched the crowd. "Hey where's Sasuke and Sakura?"

"Here we are!" Sakura shouted holding Sasuke's hand.

Naruto looked at Sasuke's right side and noticed he had a new arm. "Hey! Your arm!" Naruto pointed.

"Yeah! the doctors built a robotic arm for Sasuke and gave him skin to boot." Sakura said with a smile.

Everyone gathered around and looked at Sasuke's cool new arm. "Ok ok. Its not important right now. We have to report back to the Leaf Village." Sasuke said.

"He's right. We should be heading off now." Shikamaru said. Then a carriage pulled up and everyone got in except Naruto and Hinata the rode on top of it.

"Look at the sky Naruto-kun. Its so beautiful!" Hinata said.

"You're more beautiful." Naruto kissed Hinata as they rode off into the distance.

Two days later. Everyone looked at the Leaf Village Entrance and breathed a sigh of relief.

Naruto jumped from the carriage in front of the entrance. "Oh Yeah! We are home again! Im heading to Ichiraku Ramen first!"

Sakura pulled him back by the collar and stopped him. "You idiot! You have to report back to Lady Tsunade first!"

"Oh yeah...I forgot all about Grandma Tsunade! Lets hurry up and visit her already!" Naruto said.

The gang walked to the Hokage office and Naruto opened the door without knocking. "Hiya Granny Tsunade! We are back!" But Naruto was shocked to find that Tsunade wasn't alone. He saw a pale 19 year old with black eye shadow with a red shirt and red pants with a gourd on his back.

"Hello Naruto Uzumaki." The pale kid said.

"Gaara!" Naruto said happily.

~End of Chapter 11~

ok i must warn you the next chapter is a little mature and those who are offended by it, shut up and read it anyway! Save your opinions for someone who cares but for those who like it, you're welcome to speak.


CHAPTER 12: NARUTO'S FIRST DATE!

"What are you doing here Gaara?" Naruto said as he put his arm around Gaara.

"Didn't you know? I'm the Kazekage now." Gaara said.

"What!!!" Naruto exclaimed. "You're the Kazekage!" Naruto was even more shocked.

Gaara chuckled. "Yep. After my father was murdered by Orochimaru, the Sand village elders saw me fit to be the next Kazekage."

Naruto smiled. "Well I'm happy for you Gaara! You've really changed alot since last i'd seen you"

"Thanks to you Naruto." Gaara replied.

Naruto looked confused. "Why me?"

"If it wasn't for you, I would have never learned what it means to love. I met a really nice girl in the Sand village a few months back and we've been dating for some time now." Gaara said. "How have you been doing?"

"Being with the love of my life, Hinata Hyuga!" Naruto said as he pulled Hinata closer to him.

"Ok ok Lets get down to business!" Tsunade said from her chair. "I see your mission was a success."

"Of course it was! All thanks to me!" Naruto said.

Sakura punched him in the back of the head. "Sasuke and the rest helped too!"

Naruto stood up rubbing his head. "Ok ok ok anyway what's Gaara doing here anyway Grandma Tsunade?"

"He is here to witness the Leaf Ninja Tournament with Me next month." She pointed out.

"Oh yeah! I gotta get training as soon as possible!" Naruto said.

"Well Naruto-kun I was wondering if we could spend the day together if you wanted?" Hinata asked.

"Sure anything for you Hinata." Naruto kissed her on the forehead and left the room.

"Man those two really are into each other aren't they?" A voice said from out the window.

"Is that you Kakashi-sensei?" Sakura said.

Kakashi stepped through the window with a issue of make out paradise in his hands. "Hello everyone. I was just reading outside the window and overheard Naruto disregard training for a date."

"Yeah I'm kinda shocked myself." Sasuke said.

"I don't feel like training today myself Temari" Shikamaru said.

"You never feel like it Shika-kun!" Temari said.

"Kiba you should rest your body for today." Kohaki said.

"Ok" Kiba said as he kissed Kohaki.

"I'm sorry but I don't believe we met before." Tsunade said.

Kohaki broke her kiss. "Oh please excuse my manners." Kohaki bowed. "Im Kohaki Yisuragi.Its an honor to meet the Hokage herself."

"Pleased to meet you Miss Yisuragi." Tsunade said as she held her hand. Kohaki shook it. "And please call me Tsunade." Kohaki smiled.

"Kohaki come on and lets tend to my "wounds"" Kiba said with a devilish look.

"Ok Kiba. Well it was nice meeting you all. Goodbye!" Kohaki said.

"Goodbye. Anyway I see that you're all in a cheery mood. You all have the week off." Tsunade said with a smile.

"Oh thank you Lady Tsunade! Come on Sasuke! Lets go see that movie I have been dying to see!" Sakura said.

"Not that movie! I wanted to see the action film that came out today!" Sasuke complained.

"Please Sasuke-kun!" Sakura said with puppy dog eyes. "I'll even give a extra special present during the movie." Sakura whispered.

Sasuke's eyes lit up. "Ok!" The two left the room hand in hand.

"Temari we have to go meet up with the village elders with Kankuro and make the plans for the tournament next month." Gaara said.

"Sure little brother. Come on Shika-kun!" Temari said holding Shikamaru's hand.

"What a drag!" Shikamaru refused.

"I said come on!" Temari growled as she pulled him out the door and Gaara followed.

"Well I have to go visit Yuki. She must be worried sick about me!" Choji said as he left too.

"Oh yeah! Lee! I need you to come with me please!" Ino said.

"Huh? Why?" Lee said.

"There's someone I want you to meet." Ino said pulling Shino out the door. Lee followed with a puzzled look.

"Well Tenten Let's go hang out at the hot springs. I need a vacation." Neji said.

"Ok Neji-kun! And i'll wear that bathing suit I've been dying to wear!" Tenten said.

"And I can't wait to take it off either." Neji whispered with a devilish look.

"Oh Neji you're so bad!" Tenten said playfully slapping his chest as they walked out the room.

Tsunade smiled. "Look at them all. Their love makes me feel all fuzzy inside!"

"Yeah yeah I'm going to go read somewhere else." Kakashi said leaping out the window.

"Damn you Kakashi!" Tsunade frowned.

Meanwhile Naruto and Hinata were eating at Ichiraku Ramen. Naruto was on his sixth bowl.

Hinata smiled watching him eat like a crazy person.

"I love ramen but not as much as I love you" Naruto kissed Hinata on the lips.

"Are you ready Naruto-kun?" Hinata asked.

Naruto stopped slurping his ramen. "Ready for what?"

"I would love to hang out at your house for the evening." Hinata asked.

"Ok Hinata." Naruto said finishing his ramen and paying the owner. The two left for Naruto's apartment. Naruto opened the front door. and sat down on the couch with Hinata sitting beside him as they looked out the window and saw the sunset.

"Oh look at it! Its so beautiful! And I'm spending it with you!" Hinata said looking into Naruto's eyes.

"Aww I love you so much Hinata." Naruto said as he kissed Hinata on the lips. His tounge licked Hinata's lips for entrance. She replied and their tounges met and rolled around each other. Naruto softly stroked Hinata's hair. Hinata took off his jacket and threw it on the ground.

Naruto took off his jumpsuit jacket and threw it off as well.

"Naruto wait." Hinata said. "Are you sure we should be doing this? I mean I'm still a virgin."

"Its ok Hinata I'm a virgin as well. And I guess if two people really love each other then its ok if we commit to each other." Naruto said.

"Ok Naruto.....I love you so much." Hinata said taking off her shirt to reveal a purple bra.

Naruto took his shirt to reveal a ripped chest. They french-kissed each other again as they stroked each other's bodies. Naruto was quickly aroused at the sight of Hinata's hot body. He couldn't contain his passion for her. He laid her on the couch and unzipped her pants and took them off.

Hinata unzipped Naruto's pants as well as he slid out of them. Naruto took Hinata's hand and they walked into his bedroom. Hinata laid Naruto on the bed as she kissed his lips down to his waist. She took off his boxers and she took off her panties and jumped on top of him. They both sweated in heated passion as their hearts beat as one. Hinata rode Naruto.

"OH NARUTO!!" Hinata blushed at the lustful pain.

It lasted for a few minutes as Naruto flipped Hinata over and began thrusting her so gently. The bed squeaked in repetition with Naruto. Naruto began to pant and sweat as he cupped Hinata's breasts. He kissed her neck so softly.

"YES NARUTO!!" Hinata said as she grabbed Naruto's head and ran her hands through it.

Naruto grunted and moaned at this seductive pleasure. It felt amazing. He didn't want it to stop. He wanted this feeling to last forever.

"Oh Hinata I love you so much!" Naruto said as his thrusts got faster and harder. He was at his limit.

"YES YES YES YES!!!!" Hinata let out a scream.

Naruto came and laid beside Hinata as the two caught their breath and fell asleep in each other's arms. The moonlight shone on them while they slept.

Meanwhile Kakashi was on his couch reading his book as always then heard banging on the wall. Kakashi ignored it at first but it got louder. Kakashi stood up and banged back on the wall.

"Hey do you mind! I'm at the climax of my story!" Kakashi yelled.

"OH ME TOO! OH SASUKE!" Sakura yelled from the other side.

Kakashi drew a blank expression on his face. "I can't believe i just heard that!" Kakashi said covering his ears as he walked into his bedroom and closed the door. In silence he could finally
read Make-Out Paradise.

~End of Chapter 12~

Find out tomorrow's episode.

CHAPTER 13: A NEW JUTSU! TRAINING DAY BEGINS!


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