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Sunday, December 16, 2007


Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
CHATPER 8: KIBA'S FINAL ATTACK!

Neji, Lee, Tenten, Kiba and Akamaru and Shino dashed through the corridor.

"Kiba do you smell them?" Neji asked.

"Kiba sniffed the air for Naruto and the others. "Thats not good."

"What?" Lee asked.

"I smell blood up ahead!" Kiba replies.

"We better hurry" Neji said.

Meanwhile Hinata's eyse were wide open and blood was on her face as she sat up from the push. "Naruto-kun!"

Raz's katana had struck Naruto deep. Blood poured outta his deep wound.

"Fool! you were too concerned about the girl that you didn't have time to protect yourself!" Raz said.

Naruto threw up blood and smirked.

"What are you smiling about! I know something that will wipe that smirk of your face!" Raz yelled as he ran to attack Hinata.

"Hinata!" Naruto yelled clutching his deep cut. He dashed after him without thinking.

Raz lifted his katana to attack and struck. Naruto hovered over Hinata and recieved the brutal attack. Blood spilled everywhere.

"Aahh!" Naruto screamed.

"Why! Why are you sacrificing yourself for me!" Hinata asked with tears in her eyes.

"Because.....because i made a promise to Neji to protect you with my life! And i never go back on my word.....thats my nindo! My ninja way!" Naruto said.

"How touching....too bad you're gonna die!" Raz said as he geared to attack again. Suddenly a clang of metal was heard. "Huh? Who are you?"

"Im Sasuke Uchiha" Sasuke said as he pushed Raz away.

Naruto looked behind him. "Sasuke......" Naruto softly said.

"Are you ok Naruto?" Sasuke asked.

"Yeah i'll be ok!" Naruto said. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" A clone popped up. "Transform!" That clone transformed into a large shuriken. "Sasuke catch!"

Sasuke caught it. "So you wanna do that huh? This brings back memories." Sasuke held up the Shuriken. "Demon Wind Shuriken! Windmill of Shadows!" Sasuke threw the shuriken at Raz. Just as suspected he dodged and leapt in the air. Another one came flying at Raz.

"Crap! one in the shadow of the last!" He dodged it again barely as it cut him on the hip.

Suddenly the two shurikens poofed into Naruto and his clone as they bounced off the wall. The clone began swirling chakra in Naruto's hand as they flew towards Raz. Suddenly the clone stopped and poofed as the ball glowed. "Rasengan!"

"What!" Raz said as he looked behind him in mid-air. He turned around and attacked. His katana met the Rasengan. Chakra rippled through the air as the two combatants growled trying to overpower the other.

Meanwhile Kiba and the rest down the hallway but suddenly a force overcame Neji, Lee, and Tenten.

"Hold on! I'll save you guys!" Kiba yelled.

"No Kiba! Go save your teammate!" Neji yelled.

Kiba, Akamaru, and Shino trusted them and dashed away.

"Can you move Tenten?" Neji asked.

Tenten tried to move but couldn't. "I can't Neji! Its like gravity pulling us down!"

"Well look at the brains on captain obvious!" A woman stepped from the shadows. "And who's the cutie here!" She walked to Neji frozen in his place.

"Who are you?" Neji asked.

"Why I'm Vaka of the village hidden in the grass." She walked around Neji to his ear. "And may i ask who you are hot stuff?"

"I'm not supposed to talk to strangers." Neji joked.

"Aww but I'm no stranger." Vaka said as she stroked Neji's chest and seductively licked his ear.

Needless to say, that pissed Tenten off. "Keep your hands off of him! You Bitch!"

"Let's say we lose the party pooper, huh sweetie?" Vaka said as she grabbed a kunai knife and walked past Lee towards Tenten.

Tenten's heart raced. She couldn't move an inch.

"Come on Neji! Move! Move!" Neji thought.

"Say goodnight whore!" Vaka raised her kunai and struck. Blood went through the air.

Meanwhile Kiba, Akamaru, and Shino ran down the hall. Suddenly Kiba got tackled by a ripped figure through a wall outside into a field.

"Did anyone get the license plate of that truck that hit me?" Kiba said rubbing his head.

Suddenly the same ripped figure attacked from up above. Kiba backflipped and dodged the attack. But the man kept coming and attacked again. Kiba didn't have time to dodge. Suddenly a shield of bugs appeared and blocked the attack.

"Thanks alot Shino!" Kiba said.

The man backed away shaking the bugs off. Suddenly a tidal wave of bugs came after him. The man pulled up part of the ground and made a shield. The bugs hit it. Then two vortexes came outta both sides. "Fang over Fang!" But the attack didn't work as the man caught them by the neck and slammed into the rock wall very hard. Their bodies stayed there limp. Then the man backed away and charged the two punching them through the wall.

"Aaahhh!!!" Kiba screamed as his headband went flying as he landed.

Kohaki saw Kiba get pummeled then she ran towards him.

"No stay back!" Kiba yelled.

The man sought the opportunity to strike Kohaki and put an end to her life. Akamaru pushed her outta the way and recieved the bone-crushing attack instead.

"No Akamaru!!!" Kiba cried out. Kiba charged the man and got chokeslammed into the ground. Blood spat outta Kiba's mouth. The man jumped away. Kiba stood up and dashed back to Akamaru and Kohaki is crying over him. "Whats wrong Kohaki?"

Kohaki looked at Kiba with tears streaming down her cheeks. "Its Akamaru! He's dead!"

Kiba's heart skipped a beat. "No...Akamaru can't be dead!" Kiba clenched his fist and grinded his teeth as the tears ran down. "No..." Pictures of them together when they were younger ran through his head. "Shino! Take Kohaki and get to a safe place! Im doing that Jutsu!"

"No you could very much die from that Jutsu Kiba!" Shino pointed out.

"No don't do it Kiba! I want you to live!" Kohaki cried as she ran and hugged Kiba's back, then she turned him around and kissed him on the lips.

The liplock ended as kiba walked away from her. "If i do make it out alive.......remind me to take you out sometimes thats if i survive the after effects.." Kiba found his headband and tied it on tight. Then Shino took Kohaki and took her to the roof but she struggled alot.

"No Kiba No!" Kohaki yelled.

Kiba ate a food pills and then made a hand signs. "Inuzuka Style! Man-Beast Transformation! Wolf Mimicry!" Kiba then fell to his knees and shouted in pain. Kiba's eyes turned yellow and his pupil got sharper and keener. His bones cracked and his face turned that of a wolf as brown fur covered his entire body. His muscles bulged and grew larger. His claws grew longer and his fangs reached his chin. As soon as the transformation was over with Kiba ripped his shirt and howled at the sky.

Meanwhile Ino and the rest were battling Mali.

"Expansion Jutsu!" Choji said as his body puffed up like a balloon. "Human Boulder!" Choji rolled his head inside his shirt as did arms and legs. He then rolled at a fast speed towards Mali.

Mali then put his hands together. "Earth Molding Jutsu!" Suddenly he held out his left and the earth started to break apart and he grabbed it. He pulled it out and molded it into a huge bat. He swung it as soon as Choji attacked. The earth bat hit Choji with such a force that it broke the expansion jutsu. Choji's body hit Shikamaru and they both hit the wall. The two emerged from the wreakage bleeding and bruised.

"We need a plan and fast!" Shikamaru said.


Meanwhile Naruto's Rasengan was overpowering Raz's katana until suddenly he started getting stronger. Suddenly glowing marks appeared on Raz's body.

"Oh no! Naruto be careful! Its a curse mark!" Sasuke yelled.

"What!" Naruto said as he looked at Raz's newly emerged tribal marks on his body. Suddenly Raz's katana glowed as he forced the Rasengan to dissipate.

"That's right! and now die!" Raz kicked Naruto in mid-air who hit the wall and broke through it.

"Sakura! Go heal Naruto! I'll take of Raz!" Sasuke ordered.

"Got it!" Sakura and Hinata ran to Naruto.

Sasuke's curse mark started to glow and cover his body. Sasuke stood in a defensive stance with his katana.

"Well well seems like im not the only one with a curse mark! And its the Heaven curse mark as well!" Raz chuckled. "Seems only fitting that I would have the Hell curse mark!" Raz put himself in a defensive position as well.

"Shut up and lets fight already!" Sasuke said with the Sharingan activated.

"You're right! Lets fight! Heaven versus Hell!" Raz said as the two jumped at each other and their katanas clanged at each other as sparks flew from the metals.


~End of Chapter 8~

thats was exciting as always! who win Sasuke or Raz? Will Kiba's transformation actually kill him in the end? Is Tenten alive? Will Ino-Shika-Cho find a way defeat this powerful enemy? Find out Monday!

CHAPTER 9: HEAVEN VS. HELL: NARUTO ASCENDS!


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