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Monday, April 2, 2007


   Poems
Hey guys its me again well i wrote this poem for english and well im goin to type it down so you guys can check it out
Public Lives are sounds of ocean waves
Pounding against an immense boulder
Its like an empty cave
And people walk like Stiff soliders
Its like a bee in the spring
Getting nectar from a flower
It flows like a swift swing
From a strong wind power
When im alone it is scary
People walk by and stare
And it will get eerie
People dont care!
That im alone and get shivers
But then it warms up from the suns flame
But Public lives will always differ
And yet its still the same

Hope you guys like it its a metaphor and there are a couple of similes in there so you got to understand the metaphor and simile to understand the poem i knoe it is very complocated but hey i got an A on it so yay Well im very happy now there is a naruto marathon this weekend so yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
well i gotta go now
PEACE OUT

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