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Saturday, January 15, 2005


   AHH!!! IT'S HERE THE FIRST HALF A THE POEM POLL IS HERE SO VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO HAPPY!!! hehe

OKAY PEOPLE THE POEM POLL IS HERE!!!!!!! YEAH!!!! *everyone over here is cheering* So we will be having the special poem that has won our last poem poll and of course yall know i'm talking bout SAYING GOODBYE!!!!! *clapping..LOUDLY(ow)* And then I am having my other poem that I got lotsa great comments that I titled THROUGH THE RAIN!! I really liked that one too along with Saying Goodbye. And THANK YOU FOR ALL THOSE WHO WENT TO DESI'S SITE!! ^_^

Well LET US BEGIN THE POEM POLL!!!! *cheering(again and oh yeah OW)*

OKAY SO HERE'S LAST TIME'S WINNER SAYING GOODBYE

TITLE: SAYING GOODBYE

The wind is blowing in the trees
Its pushing me to take my leave
I look behind to see you there
with all the others without a care
smiling, laughing, and having fun I wish I was one
a single tear slids from my eye
I run into the sunset with a cry
I don't know where to go
I lost my dreams, fears, and hopes
I have nothing to lose
and nothing to gain
but I will no stop running
I won't look back to what I was
I can't, I won't, and never will
maybe when time passes I will see your smiling face
but for now I'm running
I don't know where or how far
but I do know that I will return someday, I don't know when, or how
but this poem is to say what I couldn't say before
so I say this when there is still time
I say good-bye

Yeah yall knwo I wrote that one so before we go through the Rain I will put up Desi's work like I said before. Uh huh Okay so this piece of work doesn't have a title unless Desi's wants to Title it. It is kinda a story like thing but very good. So here it is!!

This is from DESI!!!!!!
You know you're in love when you can say anything to the person and you know he won't laugh at you. When you can see their face when you close your eyes. When you can still feel their arms around you holding you tight long after they're gone. When you can still taste their kiss after you have said goodbye. You can tell you're in love when you miss them before they're gone. When their voice lingers in your ears. When their presence eases any pain. When their name sends chills down your spine. What are the only thing you can think about. You know you're in love when you can see all their hopes and dreams and their soul when you look into their eyes. When they call you at four in the morning to say "i love you" and mean it. When your tears stain not only their shirt but also their heart. When they're hurt just because of these tears. When even a simple chore done with them can become a lasting memory. Ultimately, you know you're in love when you can't imagine living without them and i can't figure how you lived before you knew them. When they fulfill every need and without them you're incomplete. The love of someone else completes the heart and soul and mind all at once...

Yes long but SO GOOD! Okay now to end today's poem poll I will put up my poem THROUGH THE RAIN!!!

TITLE: Through the rain
I can hear through the rain
The cries of a girl in pain
This time it is not me
I look but I can't see
I run outside and run while pray
That screams are the last to say
I hope I'm not to late
I can only trust my fate
Whether or not they let me save
This young girl from her grave
I slow and in an alley see
That she was not meant be
In the dark, I hear
Her heart, I fear
No beats are there
Blood is in her hair
Her cloths are torn
But I could of sworn
I saw her blink
My heart could sink
I brushed the hair out of her face
And saw suck beauty and such grace
In such a young child I see
That she was someone like me
I could see the man who killed her
I saw him dead as well, then a blur
I fell down in the rain
Now I screamed in pain
I don't remember who she was
I don't know what happened of
Those people in the rain
The girl who screamed pain
The man I saw with shame
I think it was just a game
No one found who they were
But more lives were taken
The last they saw was a blur
Why was my soul was shaken?
I never could found out
But sometimes
I can hear her shout

OKAY SO THAT IS TODAY'S FIRST HALF OF TH EPOEM POLL!!!! TOMMOROW WE ARE HAVING TWO PIECES OF WORK FROM DESI AND ONE POEM FROM ME!!! WELL OKAY IF YOU VOTE FOR DESI THEN GO TO HER SITE AND GO TELL HER IN A COMMENT!! OKAY WELL SEEYA ROUND GUYS!!! *cheering* OMG I DUNNO IF I CAN TAKE THIS STILL!!! BYE!! *plays seteo and dances with cuzs for a while laughing at how weird my cuz is dancing(and on purpose too)*

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