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Sunday, November 7, 2004


   i guess its a poem.....i think

I found my a friend from school feeling really wlousy. she asked me what is it like to feel free. I couldn't think of an answer so I wrote down the first thing that came to mind the rain. To me the rain is free. It just falls down to us without a care. I guess thats why i like it so much. Its free. Well i began writing a poem without realizing it. She was supposed to go somewhere really special to her because she did her and her borthers chores for the week But it was raining on the day they were supposed to go. And since her parents are so busy all the time that day was the only day they got to go. Well here it is. Please tell me what you think.

Today was suppose to be fun
I was meant to be in the sun
No parents to care for
But thats what i live for
I get out of bed and the rains is like a flood
now i'm stuck at home
a tear fell from my eye
sitting all alone, my soul lost it home
my room is dark, i lost my heart
and i can't sleep tonight
I lay on my bed seeing the rain drop dead
I get off my bed and run outside
I dance in the rain no need to feel a thing
No reason to care about the rain in my hair
because now i feel free
my soul is dancing with me
my soul isn't dark, my heart is singing back to me
I finally feel like me
Is this what its like to be free?
Oh yea when i came over to her house since she was feeling down she dragged my and her into the rain! i guess she got the idea from my poem. Well after a few minutes of twirling and almost catching a cold, we got better and felt great. Her was a little upset for going outside in the rain though. ^_^ Now i have someone to go out in the rain with. laterz


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