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Saturday, August 7, 2004


Gundam story
Well Chie as promised here is the first episode of my gundam story.

In U.C. 0479, one month after the Great War, because of the massive damage caused by mobile suits and gundams, the Earth Sphere ordered all mobile suits including the gundams to be destroyed, to prevent another war that might destroy the earth.

The year is now U.C. 0489; all battles are now fought in a fighting competition called “Rumbling” with strict rules, and pilot five-meter tall mechs called scoobies. Though most of the mobile suits and gundams were destroyed a few survived and were used by outlaws and gangs, and there were few who would stand against them. After five years of turmoil, a secret government called, G.D.A.M. started to rebuild an ancient gundam, which was built 200 years earlier, but it was so powerful it was deconstructed and put in a secret bunker, never to be used until now.


Gundam 0489
The Story of Shadow

Episode 1

Hi, I’m Bit Winner

Allen Race “Ahhh!… Damn, Command System Freeze.”
Bit Winner “Better luck next time, Allen.”
Allen Race [Getting out of the cockpit] “I’ll get you Bit Winner!”
ZERO “I doubt that.”
Bit Winner “You got that right. ZERO and I can beat you any day Allen.”
ZERO “Warning, missile lock-on! It’s behind us.”
[Bit looks at the rear monitor and dodges to the right, between two buildings. The missile narrowly misses Bit and ZERO (ZERO is the A.I. for Bit’s scoobie.)]
Bit “That was too close. Hey ZERO Activate the O.C. (Optical Camouflage)”
ZERO “Rodger. Activating now.”
[Then Bit and ZERO almost completely disappear, only leaving a slight outline.]
Jack Race “Nice move Bit. But I won’t miss next time.”
Bit [Sneaking up on Jack from behind] “There won’t be a next time.”
Jack Race “What do you mean?”
Bit “Just look behind you and find out.”
Jack “What!”
[Jack starts to turn around but it’s too late, Bit hits him with his drill causing a command system freeze.]
Judge “Fight 1569, Bit Winner Vs Team Wolf. Winner, Bit Winner!
Jack “Damn! I can’t believe I lost. Oh well that was a good mach anyway.”
Bit [Getting out of the cockpit] “Not really, you two are only worth 15,000Ny(Neo Yen). Normally I wouldn’t fight class B fighters, but I needed some easy money to get a new hoverboard.”
Team Wolf “What!”
Bit “Anyway, I think you guys should change your name. How about Team “Slow Turtles” or “Fuzzy Pandas”?”
Team Wolf “We’ll get you for that!
Bit [Thinking aloud] “Lets see, Slow Turtles or Fuzzy Pandas…”
Team Wolf “Hey! Are you listening to us!
Bit [still thinking aloud] “Pandas… Defiantly, Fuzzy Pandas.”
Judge “Bit Winner.”
Bit “Huh? Oops sorry, what were you saying Judge?”
Judge “Bit Winner, go to the Rumble Battle Commission office to get your prize money.”
Bit “Rodger. [Short pause] Well ZERO lets go get that prize money. [Bit gets into the cockpit] ZERO?”
ZERO “Yes bit.”
Bit “The controls seamed a little slow today, is there something wrong? ”
ZERO “let me check… running self diagnostic… problem found. Bit, stabilizers one and three need to be recalibrated and number two needs to be replaced.”
Bit “That must have happened when we got hit yesterday…[Bit has a flashback of the last battle.] Lets see, the hoverboard costs 7,000Ny that leaves 8,000Ny. With that we can upgrade to level 10 stabilizers.”
[Several hours later at Bit’s home in the neglected area.]
Bit “Okay ZERO, test the stabilizers.”
ZERO “Rodger, testing now… Bit everything is at 100%.”
Bit “Alright lets…[huge explosion outside] what was that!”
[Bit runs outside to see what’s going on.]
Bit “What a mobile suit!.. It’s attacking that scoobie. That scoobie doesn’t stand a chance. [Bit turns around and runs back inside] ZERO, are the guns loaded.”
ZERO “Only the right cannon has ammo bit. Why do you want to know bit?”
Bit “That will have to do. ZERO get ready to fight!”
ZERO “What, fight a mobile suit are you crazy!”
Bit “[Bit to him self, as he gets in to the cockpit.] Were that’s pilots only hope. ZERO, open the Sv bay door. ”
ZERO “ Yes bit, right away.”
[Bit and zero exit the hanger bay and head towards the battle.]
Bit “Hey, leave the Sv alone!”
M.S. Pilot “[The mobile suit stops attacking the Sv and turns around.] If I where you kid, I would just walk away.”
[Then the starts to attack the Sv again.]
Bit “Stop!!! [Then bit fires the cannon at the M.S. causing only a few minor scratches.] What out of ammo!”
M.S. Pilot [Stops attacking the Sv.] Well kid, I wasn’t going to fight you, but now I’m going to teach you a lesson!”
[Then the M.S. fires at Bit and ZERO, but Bit was able do dodge behind a building and avoid the attack.]
Bit “ZERO, activate the O.C.”
M.S. Pilot “He must have activated his O.C. Lets see… he should sill show up on inferred. Ah there he is!”
[The mobile suit drops the machine gun and pulls out a beam saber and activates the blade. Then charges at Bit, and slashes to the right but Bit jumps straight up and lands a hit from the drill on the main camera, which destroys it.]
Bit “all right! That suit cant fight in that condition.”
M.S. Pilot “Damn… Well continue this fight some other time kid, and next time I won’t go so easy on you.”
[Then the M.S. flies away in to the setting sun.]
Bit [wiping sweat of his face.] “Man, that was a close fight… oh yeah I almost forgot, ZERO where is the other S.V.”
ZERO “To your right Bit.”
[Bit pulls up next to the other S.V. opens the hatch and stands up.]
Bit “Hey are you ok?”
[The hatch slowly opens and a 15-year-old girl comes out.]
Shinko Yamio “I’m ok, but my Scoobie’s A.I. is frozen.”
Bit “I can fix that.”
[Bit jumps out of the cockpit and walks over to Shinko’s scoobie. Opens a panel looks in side to see what’s wrong.]
Bit “ZERO do you have a spare type 41 connecter?”
ZERO “Yes Bit it’s in the rear spare parts container.”
[Bit opens the container searches for a while.]
Bit “Ah here it is.”
[Bit runs back to the open panel and putt’s the connecter in place.]
Bit “Well That should do it! Ok restart the scoobie.”
Shinko “Ok. [Cheerfully] Thank you…”
Bit “Oh sorry, I’m Bit Winner.”
Shinko “ My name is Shinko Yamio.”
[Shinko invites Bit to dinner at a nearby restaurant. Bit gladly accepts the offer, never wanting to miss the opportunity for free food.]
While talking over dinner Shinko tells Bit that she works for the Mobile Systems Corporation (M.S.C. for short) and that she was testing a new S.V. with improved armor and speed capabilities, but then out of nowhere that mobile suit started attacking her.
[As Bit and Shinko leave the restaurant.]
Shinko “Bit come by the M.S.C. building tomorrow at 10:00 and I’ll give you a tour.”
[Then Shinko leaves, and Bit goes home.
That night Bit dreams about how the M.S.C. might look.]


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