Jump to User:

myOtaku.com: MoonshineDancer


Tuesday, November 6, 2007


   Flying on Broken Wings
EASY LISTENING: We Didn't Start the Fire by Billy Joel
READ UP ON IT: Hellsing

Creative Writing is...interesting so far. There's not much I can say about it yet, since it hasn't even been a whole week yet... I've made one "good" poem so far. We had to write up personification poems, and I decided to personify Evil. If you can see anything that needs to be changed, please tell me:

"False Promises"

Solidified midnight
Tumbling in gentle waves
Down her back,
Her blood-red eyes
Filled with malice,
Lips of pure sin
Smiling sadistically,
Skin the color of
Freshly fallen snow
Wrapped in black velvet,
All who cross her path
Turn from their own
Smitten by her temptaion,
Dragging them down
Into her false promises
And untruths.
She befalls many a man
With Pride and Greed,
For she it their sister
And works by their side
To fulfill Chaos,
Their mother.


Personally, I think the ending is weak. Maybe it should be something like "To fulfill Chaos's wishes" or something. *shrug* I just think it's not that great of a finish.

Now I have to go do a simile poem...that one'll be a little harder. I don't even know what to write -about- much less a start to a poem. *shrug* hopefully by the end of tonight, something will come.

Ugg. I drifted off this morning and missed my bus. I've done this once before, and I want to keep it that it never happens again (and I swear, I really hate asking for Sara or Dad to drive back to the house to give me a ride...). After I'm halfway done with my morning rutine, I have about an hour to do homework, read, or whatever. Normally I read or set my alarm so I CAN drift off without missing 7 o'clock, which is when I normally finish up. Sadly this morning, I forgot to set the alarm again and drifted off. I woke at 7:30 (my bus comes at 7:15), cursing my head off. Since I don't even have my learners yet, I couldn't drive the car sitting right outside in the driveway. =.= I had to get my sister to come pick me up. Started my day a little badly. THEN I couldn't stay after for the drama thing we're doing.
"The Girl in the Mirror" and "Surviving Lunch" are the two One Act plays we're doing over at the middle school. "The Girl in the Mirror" has a bigger impact than "Surviving Lunch" but then again, it's about suicide and "Lunch" is about bullying...

Hope everyone else had a good day.

~Okami~

Comments (0)

« Home