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Thursday, July 26, 2007


   poetry


Poetry by: lover of the sand




Gaara





Rhyme
is part of time,
past on without a word, torn and then born, that is how rhyme was made, since the beginning of
time. O my what a rhyme in deed







You had me at “hello”
I couldn’t let go when you said “love”
I fell in fear
Im so full of cheer?
what is this feeling
so deep inside
so fearful, unknown,
soon to unravel, reveal, yet hide
the secrets deep inside,
soon to bloom, blossoming, bursting with cheer
I looked down to see inside, a feeling
so new, sweat so pure
the world couldn’t tell what has come near
I looked inside, found a string held it tight,
wound as if made of light,
I pulled with fear held on tight

I looked up
Surprised…. I was looking right into,

your eyes






THESE ARE SOME OF MY BEST RYMES FOR NOW INTILL I COME UP WITH SOME MORE

(O^-^O) PLEASE COMMENT ON MY POETRY AND LET ME NOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT,

.......IF YOU DONT LIKE IT THEN DONT COMMENT (X.x)






Gaara

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