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Wednesday, March 23, 2005


   new story!
ok...so i haven't been updating in a while!
sorry!
this is a new story that i'm adding in...the other one wasn't very exciting...and it was writen differently...this is a bit better!
i've been doing good though!
and i'm sorry bout the typo's!
lol
ttfn
~`jamie





7 in the morning

Rilly:jalie get up...there is someone here who wishes to speak to u.

Jalie pulls the blanket over her head:i don't care...can't they wait till normal houres?

Rilly:he came all this way just to speak to u...show some respect...

Jalie:get me up at normal houres...and i'll be respectfull!

Rilly, her mother, pulls the blanket from her head.

Jalie:hey...i was using that...

Rilly:and now ur not...so get up!

Jalie:i'm going back to bed

Rilly:so that means i'll c u in 10 min.s or ur grounded!

Jalie:(picking up a pillow and throughing it at the door that was closing by her mothers hand) B***H!!!!!

Rilly:now u have 5 min.s!

ruluctintly she gets up and gets dressed!

Jalie:so where is he?

Rilly:he was just here a miniut ago...

Jalie:u got me up this eirly for nothing!!! i'm going out!

she leaves the house and desides to just go waking around town for a bit...but she constintly has the naging fealing that someone is waithchin her...

Jalie:who is there?

she finds a paper on the ground that says"...if u've ever had the fealing like thar is someting in the dark waitching ur every move...don't bother turning around...for i have already gon...and no matter how hard u try 2 c me...ur efferts will just turn into bothersom worry...for i'm not realy thair...i'm just ur paranoia...."




SO WHAT DO U THINK SO FAR?
THIS IS JUST THE FIRST PART...AND I WILL BE FINISHING THIS AS TIME GOES ON...I WILL NOT B ADDING ON A BUNCH OF DIFFERENT POSTS...I WILL JUST BE MODDIFING THIS ONE POST!

THAT WAY U CAN START FROM THE BEGINING...AND NEVER HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT SURCHING FOR THE OTHER PARTS...IT WILL BE MORE LIKE A TRUE BOOK!

FEAL FREE TO ADD ANY COMMENT TO IT THOUGH!
AND SIGESTIONS...MAY-B I'LL USE THEM!

THANKS MUCH
JAMIE¢À

CHAPTER 2...MARCH 16TH

Jalie stands up to see the face of a stranger standing in front of her...he has fire in his eyes...and yet...there is something very commferting about him...

the stranger waves his hands in frount of her face...

she wakes up in her bed

Rilly:good, ur up...there is someone here who wants to talk to u

Jalie:ya...i'll b right down

Rilly:well...hurry!

when jalie reaches the downstairs...she c's a man who had simmiler featchers to the man in which she had sean b4...

Strange man:hellow, may i talk 2 u? alone...please, if that is not a problem.

Rilly:o no of corse not

Rilly leaves the room.

Jalie: who are u...and...do i know u?

Strange man:no...u don't know me...not yet...and i am Rin.

Jalie:i don't mean to b rood...but may i ask what u are doing here?

Rin:ur not b'ing rood...and i am here because u have something that i want...no...that i need!

Jalie:what in the hell are u talking about?

Rin:u have powers that can help my cause.

Jalie:i know what i have...but i don't help ne one...i work alone!

Rin:i think u may wnat to reconsider!

he rases his hands and a power in which she has never sean b4 came out of them.

Jalie:how did u get so strong?



WOW...WHO IS THIS PERSION...AND WHAT IS ALL THIS POWER CRAP ABOUT?

OK...IF UR READING THIS...I HAVE A QUESTION...WHAT DO U THINK JALIE'S POWER IS?

CHAPTER 3
MARCH 17

Rin:good...now that i have ur attention that is!

Jalie:wait...y do u care about my abilitys ne way?

Rin:because u r part of something that has been growing for generations...and i need every peace of the puzzle that i can get!

Jalie:look...u know nothing about me

Rin:i know more then u'd think

Jalie:how do i know that this isn't a trick?

Rin:u don't

Jalie:ur right...all the more reasion not to trust u

Jalie left the house without saying a word, but somehow...

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