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Sunday, October 17, 2004


Alice Got Back



My new story idea is going to be put into action. White Rabbit is a little more mature than most of my writing, but it still keeps a young audience in its range. To quick describe it, it conbines Alice in Wonderland with Kill Bill. To describe it the long way, here's the tip of the iceburg:

I'm still determining if it'll take place during 1692 in Salem when the witch trials occured or if it should take place during the original time Alice in Wonderland had. Either way, Alice, our heroine of this story, is accused by her fellow villagers that she is a witch because she casted magic. Though this theory of someone being a witch is often false, it's true in Alice's case. But she means no harm.

Nevertheless, the villagers hunt her down to kill her like any other witch for reasons of fear, ignorance, and untrustworthiness. She eventually is chased into the Forbidden Woodlands, a place I made up for this story alone. It's the woods just outside the town that strange stuff is said to happen in, so no one ever goes there. Naturally, Alice rushes in for safety, but the villagers dare not follow.

Upon entering, she gets lost, scared, and sooner or later falls in a hole leading to none other than Wonderland. She doesn't know where she is at first, but luckily she finds a white rabbit.

Now, the reason I named this story White Rabbit is because he plays a prominent role in the whole ordeal. He's not just a really cool character (and he is), but he's pretty much Alice's sidekick in it. To describe him, he's human-sized and about 5'10'' (little taller than Alice, minus ear height). He's also dressed in a dirty brown leather jacket, even dirtier jeans, some pilot goggles snapped to his forehead above his eyes, and gloves and boots. Of course, he has other stuff, but I don't wanna describe him now.

He's unique because he's smart (he's an alchemist), quick, and can shoot a flea off a sleeping dog without the mutt waking. (Look at the image above and you'll see him with the gun.)

Anyways, enough about White Rabbit for now... Alice winds up in Wonderland and wants to figure out what's happened. White Rabbit explains that there is no escape from Wonderland unless you kill the Evil Queen that rules. And the journey to her isn't that wonderful with all her loyal subjects ready to kill you. And if they don't stop you, the murderous scum that plague the lands will.

Truely enough, though, Alice is equiped with her magic and after suiting up with some armor and weapons supplied by White Rabbit, her and her new fuzzy friend are ready to go slay some royalty.

That's the start of it. She wants to kill the Queen of Wonderland so she can escape and go get revenge on the villagers... or force them to accept her. Naturally her skills with weaponry are slim to none, but she's learned tricks with the hard work she did back at home.

It'll be fun to write and I have numerous ideas for it, but to link them all together and to produce the amazing ending I have in mind, I'll have to think things over big time. Wish me luck.

I'll keep you guys updated.

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