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Thursday, June 14, 2007


Story
I decided Im going to post a bit of my story. TO be more exact, its the first page of my story. Im going to try and post a bit of my story everyonce and a while on my site. I dont know if anyone is going to like it right away, but maybe they might. My story gets really interesting around the 4th or 5th chapter. I try my best to make it interesting. I'll put more details on the setting of my story on another post within the next few days. Oh yeah, this story has no title yet, but it was made by the one and only Zano

This endless space was dark, no sign of light, or any other living object. THe only thing I could see was my own shivering hands. This infinite space of darkness was cold, almost almost freezing. I felt no life at all. I continued to walk, but nothing was appearing. It grew colder. Hours passed and I finally noticed an object in the distance. I started running. It seemed as if this object was miles away. The longer I was running, the clearer this object became. I finally stopped right in front of this object. It was a mirror. It seemed brightly lit and much decorated, like a sacred object of some sort. This seemed to be the only light left in this world of darkness and shadows.

As I stared into the mirror, a perfect reflection of myself became visible. Everything about my reflection was normal, but as I continued to look up, I noticed my reflections eyes turn blood red. And then, all of a sudden, my reflection's left hand lunged at my throat violently and lifted me off my feet. I started struggling for air. I looked into my reflection's blood-red eyes. It seemed as if I felt its torrent of emotions. In this torrent I felt its sorrow, anger, hatred, even its hope, and the feint sign of happiness, despair, and lonliness. These are the exact emotions that I feel about everything and I do not tell anyone at all.

"Wake up," a voice whispered to me. My reflection tightened its demonic grasp around my neck. I struggled even harder for air. My face felt like bursting into a thousand pieces of crimson red flesh. "Come on, wake up!!" the voice grew louder. I couldn't do anything. I tried to swing at my reflection, but failed. I could no longer breathe. Is this a dream, or a nightmare? Is this real, or fake? If it is a dream, I sure hope to wake from this soon.
..... to be continued.....

I hope whoever reads this enjoys it^^ It starts off in a dark type setting, but as you can guess, it is the main characters nightmare. But the story carries action and such back and forth. Well, that all I got for now Matane^^

-from otaku's weather freak and dark-blue wolf, Zano (a.k.a Billza/Light)

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