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Saturday, September 23, 2006


I don't know where I'm going with this
It's been awhile since I updated so, I thought I'd change the pace a bit and add a poem/song
I'm looking for feedback on:

unintentional permanence

Erasing you is like erasing pen
it smudges just enough
to see an effort
but the mark is still clear: discernable

I should have learned by now
ink is permanent
I should have written you in pencil

Pink rubber is only dirty now
black gel is only blurred
not for lack of effort
I can still see your name: legible

I should have learned by now
it's easy to lie on paper
not so easy in person

I wish I'd had a pencil
because I should have learned by now
permanence was never your intention



Well there you have it. I'm not quite sure if I like the second verse/ third stanza. Hrmm... Anyway, feedback is most welcome!

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