Thursday, January 24, 2008

Forbidden Love Episode 7
Man I have to say this for Renji. He is one bad dude. But annoying. He never gives up. And he's really crule. As I type or write this I can feel Saru's and Renji's character. Anyway I rather get on with the story. After this I'll give the details.

Forbidden Love
Episode 7
Desperate Struggle: Saru’s Faults

Saru gets up as she wipes the blood off her chin. She looks up as Renji is falling towards her making his move. She jumps away before he could plant his foot into her back. She stagers a bit as the wind blows the remains of debris. She stares him down and then she moves. But when she tries to punch him he moves hitting her in the head and grabbing her collor. He shoves her against the ground. She could barely breath as he held her collor tightly. “This was how your grandfather looked before I killed him,” he tells her laughing. Her eyes shot open at his words. She grabs his arm, “SHUT UP!” She punches him making him move back. She gets up with a piece of sharp glass. She then tries to stab him. But she misses and he grabs the glass. She tries to move, but it was to late. Renji had pierced her in the stomach. She winces in pain as Renji takes the glass out of her. “If you would have just came with me then you wouldn’t have to suffer. It’s too bad your true power could have been some use.” She falls to her knees holding her wound. “I’d rather die than be with you,” she spits with hate. He smirks at her comment. “Then I see that this is your decision. He grabs a kunai from his pocket. He grabs Saru by the collor, once again shoving her against the wall. He then digs it into her back. She winces but doesn’t scream. He continues to do this to her back until air brushes against his cheek. Blood starts to pour out of it. He looks behind him and sees a pale boy with raven black hair.

“ LET HER GO!” Orochimaru yells. Renji smirks, “I remember you.” He lets go of Saru, and she falls to the ground trying to grip the wall. “Orochimaru, you idiot. I told you to stay,” She whispers. “So you love this girl?” Renji asks him. “That doesn’t concern you,” He answers. Renji then picks up Saru and holds the kunai to her neck. “If you do love her then save her.” Orochimaru runs at him, but before he could get to her Sarutobi punches Renji making him drop Saru. “Now Orochimaru!” He grabs Saru and carries her away having the others at his side. “Atleast this will give them enough time to take Saru to a safe place,” Sarutobi thinks to himself. He looks at Renji who is glaring at him at the moment. “I’m your opponent now.” Sarutobi tells him. Renji gets up still holding the kunai in his hand.

Meanwhile
Orochimaru lays Saru down on the ground. He pulls up her shirt as he checks the wound on her stomach. It looked to be a clean cut. “Orochi-kun, why did you come?” She asks him. He smiles at her as he looks into her eyes. “I care that’s why. If I didn’t care then I would’ve just left you there to die.” Her eyes widen at his comment. “That’s what he said last time,” she thinks. “That’s what I tried to tell you last time. I won’t standby and watch you die.” He takes his hand and puts it on her back trying to support her. He feels something warm and pauses. He takes his hand out from under her back and looks at it to see blood. His eyes became cold as he clenches his fist with her blood. Tsunade looks at the blood on his hand. “Support her. I need to heal her fast before she loses more blood.” He puts her head on his knees. “I’m not going to die now am I?” She asks. “No you’re fine. Don’t talk,” Tsunade tells her. Orochimaru holds her hand. She looks up at him and stares at his face. Darkness begins to take over her vision. “Orochi-kun…I’m sorry that I didn’t listen to you. I was so careless. I should’ve been thinking about all of you. But I kinda lost myself back there. I was thinking of you but I was only thinking of protecting you. It didn’t mattered to me if I died. I just didn’t want to see my friends to get slaughtered. Like my grandpa was.” She coughs up blood as Tsunade finished healing her stomach. “ Now turn her over. I see that she’d already lost to much blood.” She starts to heal her back as tears run down Saru’s face. Darkness then takes over her and she passes out. “Saru!” Tsunade looks down to see her out. “Her breathing is starting to slow down,” he tells her. “I know that.” Jiraiya kneels down to Orochimarus level and stares at Saru with shocking eyes. “Saru-chan” He glares at Orochimaru. “You could’ve done more to stop her. Then none of this would’ve happen.” “SHUT UP LOSER!!! I KNOW I COULD’VE DONE MORE!!! IT’S NOT LIKE YOU WOULD’VE DONE ANYTHING YOURSELF!!! You never do anything to help the situation” “Look just shut up, both of you,” Tsunade interrupts them. They do but Jiraiya looks away as Orochimaru closes his eyes in frustration. Tsunade finishes healing her back. “Saru’s breathing has gone back to normal. She’ll be all right. All she needs right now is rest.” Orochimaru and Jiraiya let out a sigh of relief in unison. Tsunade smiles at then and puts her hand on Orochimaru’s shoulder. She then gets up and leads the way. “Now we must find a place to rest until she wakes up.” “Sensi told us to go stay at the palace where Riku is,” Jiraiya reminded her. “Then it shouldn’t be too far. We’re only on the outskirts of town.”

Orochimaru picks up Saru and carries her on his back. “Man, my stomach hurts,” she mumbles behind him. “Just rest. You’ll feel better when you wake up,” “Alright Mom,” Orochimaru cocks an eyebrow at this sudden disturbance. “Mom? Saru are you okay?” He looks behind her and sees that she’s still asleep. “She must be dreaming.” He smiles to himself as he sees Saru’s peaceful face.

End

I apologize because I don't have a title for the next one. I'll post it in the next post because I'm not finished writing it yet. But I'm almost finished. It will probably be done next week. As I type I usually look at my writen version and take out the stuff I don't want to put in. I should probably be a directer or something. But I'm going with anime artist. ^^
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