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Saturday, January 5, 2008


Forbiddenlove episode 5 is ready to go.
Well I know it kinda took me a month. I just finished it last night. So I really hope you enjoy. It's not as long as I thought it would be. I kinda changed it around. Because I usually write my prewriting on paper. Well the story anyway. I'll explain later. I guess my next post will be a Forbidden Love interveiw. That's right you can ask me some questions and I'll answer them in the next post. Hows that? Oh and one more thing my anniversery will be in a few days. I'd be on here for three years. ^^ So enought of my rambiling...
Fluffy: GET ON WITH IT!
VD: -_-

Forbidden Love
Episode 5
Friendship Is More Important


Last time Saru and the gang ran into Renji, and fought his clones.




A few hours after the fight, they got settled into their rooms in a fancy hotel that Riku had arranged for them. Saru has been locked in her room ever since they got there. Tsunade has been trying to get her out by knocking several times. “Come on Saru. You can’t stay in there forever. Have some fun.” Tsunade tried to tempt her. “No thanks I’m not coming out. Please go without me.” She told her with a stern voice. Try as Tsunade did she sighed in disappointment not able to get the troubled girl. Orochimaru walked passed Tsunade then stopped and looked at her. “She won’t come out,” she told him sadly. Orochimaru shook as he held a bag of chips in his hand. He shook them and there was a sudden rustle in Saru’s room. “Um Orochimaru…how is this…,” she was interrupted by the door falling on her. “CHIPS!” she screamed in happiness as she tried to get them from Orochimaru. He held them up where she couldn’t reach them. “No fair Orochi-kun.” She sulked. “Okay but you have to promise me.” She looked at him with begging eye’s. “Fine I won’t sulk anymore.” He smirked with amusement. “And…?” She jumped up and down. “And I’ll keep my anger to a minimum. Now give me the chips I’m starving.” He gave her the chips and patted her on the head. “Good girl” She looked up at him after getting into the chips. “Yeah, yeah just let me eat.” She said rudely while stuffing her face. “Can I have some chips, too?” She glared at him guarding her chips. “Don’t you have some pepping to attend to at the hot springs?” She asked him. “Oh yeah I forgot. Ladies here I come. Don’t count me out?” He said to him self as he rushed to the hot springs. “What a loser,” Orochimaru thought to himself. Tsunade shook her head with annoyance. “You had to use food to get her out.” Tsunade snapped at Orochimaru. “What else could I do? She wouldn’t answer you even if you tried a thousand times to get her out.” He said to her as they watched her eat. Tsunade backed away slowly at the way she ate. Then after she was done Saru smiled at them. Tsunade then raced to her side and asked, “ Are you up for a game of War.” Her eyes sparkled with excitement. “ Okay you’re on.” Tsunade started walking towards her room. “Come on Orochi-kun lets do this,” she yelled as she pulled him. “Great I rather be with the pervert right now”


“Oh man I’m in heaven,” Jariya commented Then a girl in a blue bikini popped out of the water. “Oh WOW! Her chest is bigger than Saru’s.” Someone taps him on the shoulder and he looks up to see Sarutobi. “You didn’t invite me?” He asked. “Oh yes I forgot. Come on and enjoy what I have been researching,” Jariya told him.

(Okay that was weird. O_o Umm… lets get back to Saru and her game.)

“I’m so glad we got our Saru back.” Tsunade commented. Saru looked at her challenging her. “Shut up and play. She put down an ace and Tsunade put down a club of fours. “Darn I lost.” Saru looked at her evilly as she took her money. “Muhaha! No shopping for you!” She says. Tsunade looks at her weird as she moves away. “Okay, um don’t tell me if those chips had something in them.” Saru jumped up and yelled. “Yeah salt and sugar to make me hyper. Now Orochi-kun, draw you’re freaking cards and lets go!” Orochimaru rolls his eyes. “You’re insane.” He draws a 10 as she draws a black jack. “OH YEAH! Aren’t you going to give me something? Lets see I like you’re kimono. So I’ll take that.” Orochimaru pins her down as she laughs. “Next time remind me never to give you salt covered chips.” He gives her a snake as she jumps in the air from shock. “Okay I want to try again,” Tsunade told her. Saru smirks at her knowing that she is going to win. “Are you sure about that? What am I going to take next your head band?” Tsunade looks at her blankly. “No I’ll treat you to a big dinner when we get back to Konaha. All you can eat. I’ll pay the bill.” Saru jumps for joy. “THAT SOUNDS GREAT! Now lets draw cards.”
~ten minutes later~
Tsunade came out with a clean victory leaving Saru on the floor crying for her money. Tsunade looked bothered when she asked her self, “ I won?” Saru pouts about her money. “I can’t believe I lost all that money, and a free trip to an all you can eat restraunt.” Orochimaru sweat drops because of Saru’s gambling problem. “ Saru you really need to get a hold of yourself.” Tsunade runs out the door as Saru and Orochimaru look at each other. “What the heck is her problem,” Saru asks. Then they here girls screams down stairs. “GET OUT YOU BEASTS!” Saru and Orochimaru dash out of the room soon catching up with Tsunade. “I knew this was going to be bad,” She says with disappointment. When they get down stairs a plate is thrown at Saru, but she doges just in time. All the girls at the pool kept throwing anything they got their hands on at Sarutobi and Jiraiya. They soon got out of there and ran upstairs to hide. Saru then has a discusted look on her face, her enthusiasm fades. “I’m going to bed,” She says miserably. As she walks away Tsunade whispers in Orochimaru’s ear. “You might want to keep an eye on her. She might try to sneak off while we’re asleep. You know to go fight that Renji guy.” Orochimaru looks back at her with concern. “I know what you mean.” Tsunade nods at his remark. “Right now all she needs is a friend to help her,” She tells him. He nods as he starts to walk off towards Saru’s room.


Saru stands under the shower head with water pouring on her body. She thinks to herself about what happened today when Renji came. Then she thought about her friends and how they might end up dead as well. “I know that I shouldn’t get them involved in this,” She thinks to herself. “He will kill anyone that’s close to me. Why should I give him the advantage to kill them?” She pauses her thoughts for a moment closing her eyes. “I will sneak out to night when everyone is sleeping and plan my attack from there. That way I can abstract my revenge for what he has done.” Her thoughts go back to this morning about what Orochimaru had said. “Don’t let your grandfathers death be in vain.” She then turns off the shower and gets into a towel. She then looks at her self in the mirror. “Maybe he is right. But…why should I take his advice he has no idea how I feel.” She then slips a t-shirt on and some shorts to get comfortable in. She then lies on her bed looking at the celling. “My parents died when I was young,” she remembered him saying a month ago when they had first met. “Maybe he has an idea of how I feel.” She then hears something brush against the door. (She has good hearing) she assumes that something is spying on her but she ignores it and sits up. She gets up and starts to pack some things that she needed while she was out.


As soon as she has her bag is full she opens the window beginning to jump until she felt a hand on her shoulder. “Now where do you think you’re going, someone asks her from behind. She looks back to see Orochimaru’s face. “Look I’m going to fight Renji on my own. I don’t want any of you to follow me. You’ll get hurt.” She starts to jump but is pulled back in by his arms. He holds her in a tight hug as she struggles. “NO! LET ME GO!!! You will only be in my way.” He shakes his head. “Saru-chan, calm down. It’s not about avenging you’re grandfather.” She turns her head to glare at him. “I know that. It’s just that he will stop at nothing to kill the ones I care for. And if you’re in my way then he’ll kill you and everyone else. Please you must understand.” Tears came down her face as she looked at him pleading for his help. He loosened his grip. “Saru if I didn’t love you I would not even care if you go. But this isn’t about revenge is it? It’s about protecting the ones you care for. Saru you know as much as I do that we all care. We’ll fight him together.” He holds her hand tight as he feels her tears hit his hand. “Orochimaru-kun, I love you. Don’t forget that” She lets go of his hand and walks towards the window once again. “Saru…” She hops on the edge of the window as she looks back at him. “Good bye for now. Oh and please don’t follow me. If I don’t come back then I’ll be dead.” She jumps off and lands on both of her feet. She looks back and sees Orochimaru stare at her and she waves at him one last time. Then she runs off. “If it’s me he want then he can have me I’m done running.

Orochimaru slams his fist on the wall for being such an idiot. “Damn it I could’ve forced her to stop. But why?” Tsunade comes in the unloced door. “What happened? Where’s Saru?” Orochimaru looks at Tsunade with anger. “She left.” Tsunade trotted towards the window and then she looked towards the distance of the town. “Why didn’t you stop her?” “What was I supposed to do? This is her battle not ours. I tried but she wants to protect us. She only cares about the ones she love.”
End of episode 5

Next time on Forbidden love Saru finds Renji and things get tough for her. But I think my girl can handle it. Right? Um yeah.
Next time Saru vs Renji.
This one's going to be good.

Anyway Go ahead and ask me some questions. And since school starts Monday I might be able to post. I hope they don't give us homework. Seeya soon.
~VD
p.s. I don't own any of the Naruto characters or the songs.

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