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Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Fighting Angels Part II
yay!!!!!!!!!!! i finish da story! sorry dat took so long. i’ve been lazy & then i’ve been busy. but i finish it. horray! anyve, enjoy da story!

Characters
The Angels
Miruko –power: earth/ground
-responsible & reasonable
-quiet because of her past (I’ll talk about it later)
Neraki –power: lighting
-easy going
-hyper & carefree
Shiyoko –power: fire
-the youngest of the 5 angels
-spirit free & carefree
Majica –power: wind
-the oldest of the 5 angels
-responsible & reasonable
Kariko –power: water
-sometimes reasonable & sometimes carefree
-she’s a little bit of everything
The Demons
Yuzuwa –an older brother of Yahitzu
-smile/smirk a lot (like Naraku from InuYasha)
-can’t be trusted
-saved Rukuwa
Rukuwa –was defeated by the angels
-was saved by Yuzuwa
-smile/smirk a lot (like Naraku from InuYasha)
-had a soft spot for Shiyoko
Yahitzu –a younger brother of Yuzuwa
-was brought back to life by Yuzuwa & Rukuwa
-didn’t like to show his emotion
-barely smiled
-had a little soft spot for his brother because of their childhood life
Kuromori –a cat demon
-she’s easy-going, but not to be trusted
-only loyal to Yuzuwa
Hatsuya –a guy who always smile
-he may looked cute (even ACTED cute), but he had a dark personality inside

Since the day that Rukuwa was “killed” by the angles, everyone was really happy, stress free, and enjoying their lives. What the people (everyone) didn’t know was that Rukuwa was still alive. He was saved from the final blow [that came from the angels] by a half-demon named Yuzuwa. To Rukuwa’s own surprised, he could not believe that there was another demon, much less a half-demon, could be stronger than him and the angels. But to Yuzuwa own surprise, he was amazed that he could survived that attack.

Up in the heaven, The God was looking down on the earth over and over again because he had a weird feeling that Rukuwa was still alive. Just then, he finally spotted Rukuwa with a half-demon named Yuzuwa. The God also had a weird feeling of Yuzuwa, a feeling that he had tried to chase it away many times, but it always came back. The feeling that he felt was that Yuzuwa was somehow stronger than Rukuwa (da name also seem familiar to The God). However, The God did not sense any power that could possibly be stronger than Rukuwa’s (dat’s b cuz Yuzuwa no how 2 hide his power). Yet, The God had never been wrong about his feelings. And so, The God discussed this with the 5 angels about what he had felt, and he also made up his mind that he and the 5 angels had to accept the fact that Rukuwa was still alive and that there was someone else who was stronger than Rukuwa and the angels. It was a shock for the angels, and it was hard for them to accept it, but they had to. Therefore, the 5 angels were sent off to not only defeat Rukuwa again, but to also to defeat Yuzuwa.

Just like before, the 5 angels had to travel by feet. Unlike before, the 5 angels didn’t really know which way to go. However, the angels could sense the presence of demons(or whoever) if they were near by, but it didn’t help them that much anyway because they still didn’t know where Rukuwa & Yuzuwa were. And so, they continued on with their journey and tried to find as much information as they could that could lead them to find Rukuwa & Yuzuwa. Just as the 5 angels were traveling, The God realized who Yuzuwa was, and so he sent a messenger to the 5 angels telling them who Yuzuwa was. He told Kariko(& of course da other 4 angels were there listening) that Yuzuwa was the one who killed her mom and took her wings. This made Kariko really mad and wanted revenge for her mom.

At Yuzuwa’s hiding place, Yuzuwa & Rukuwa were getting along pretty well. Rukuwa learned to trust Yuzuwa, but Yuzuwa was not a guy who could be trusted. And so, Rukuwa taught Yuzuwa a few of his secret stuff, such as how to bring someone back to life. Then, Yuzuwa told Rukuwa that Yahitzu & himself were brothers. And so he decided that he was going to bring his younger brother back to life. So, they went out to find Yahitzu’s body to bring him back to life(just so u no, he died on purpose, b cuz he wanted 2 die). Yahitzu “thanked” Yuzuwa & Rukuwa in his own way. Then Rukuwa left the brothers alone to get some food for them to eat. After Rukuwa left the cave (yes, they live in a cave. It may look small on da outside, but it’s pretty big, like a castle, in da inside), Yahitzu asked his brother why he had save Rukuwa’s life. Yuzuwa explained to him that Rukuwa was the source to they power & knowledge. If Yuzuwa could get Rukuwa to trust him completely, then Rukuwa would tell him everything about his secrets. So, in other word, they could use Rukuwa to get what they want. And after they get what they want, then they’d finish Rukuwa off. And right now, Yuzuwa wanted Rukuwa to tell him how to put on the wings that he had stolen from Kariko’s mom. Rukuwa overheard the last half of the conversation(from when Yuzuwa said that they’d finish him off after they get what they wanted), and he realized that he could not trust the half-demon brothers anymore. From that day on, he acted normal like he didn’t overheard the conversation so that they wouldn’t suspect him of overhearing the conversation. However, he tried/did not get involve with the half-demon brothers as much as before. Yuzuwa thought that it was awkward and after awhile he realized that Rukuwa must have overheard the conversation. Therefore, Yuzuwa tried to get Rukuwa to tell him how to put on the wings (as fast as possible) because he wanted to finish Rukuwa off so that he wouldn’t be any threat to him. However, Rukuwa refused, and so Yuzuwa had no choice but to use force on Rukuwa (just so u no, Rukuwa wasn’t fully recover, so he’s kinna weak) until Rukuwa agreed to teach him how to put on the wings. Rukuwa had a plan & so he agreed to teach Yuzuwa how to put on the wings. He told Yuzuwa the right stuff (things) of get, but gave him a false incarnation.

Later that day, Yuzuwa looked inside his crystal ball to see where the 5 angels were. With each day that goes by, the 5 angels were getting closer and closer to Yuzuwa’s hiding place without knowing it themselves. On that particular day, the 5 angels were getting real close to his hiding place. And so, he sent one of his “servants” named Hatsuya to slow down the 5 angels. When Hatsuya showed up in front of the 5 angels, they realized that Yuzuwa & Rukuwa must be near by. Miruko decided to take him on by herself and told the other 4 angels to go on. They hesitated at first, but then they decided to take her words and went on ahead. It was either they were unfortunate, or they were lucky to meet another one of Yuzuwa’s “servant” named Kuromori(unfortunate: dey ran into another of Yuzuwa’s “servant”; lucky: dey now no dat dey’r close 2 where Yuzuwa was). This time, Majica decided to take her on. The 3 angels insisted on staying with Majica at first, but they realized that there’d be other demons waiting in front of them. And they were right. After they had left Majica, they faced a half-demon, Yahitzu. They were surprised to see him because they thought that he was dead. Yahitzu explained to them that his brother, Yuzuwa, brought him back to life. His tone didn’t sound so happy that he was bought back to life, & he also didn’t have the eyes of a killer like before. So, Neraki decided to take him on (by herself, of course) and told the other 2 angels to go on without her. The 2 angels saw on point of arguing with her since they already know what the outcome would be.

So, they went on ahead and were stopped by Rukuwa. Rukuwa told Shiyoko that he didn’t want to hurt her (u no y), nor did he really wanted to hurt the other angels. He then suggested a compromise to the angels: he’d let the angels through & would tell them something that they would want to know, and it was about Kariko’s mom’s wings. The twisted side of this was that the angels would have to take him with them. The angels felt uneasy by it, but agreed to the compromise. Then, Rukuwa told them that Yuzuwa wanted to know how to put on Kariko’s mom’s wings, and that he told Yuzuwa what to get(the right things), but he gave Yuzuwa a false incarnation. He also told them that he was the only one who knows how to make the false incarnation effective (meaning making Yuzuwa gets hurt by it because Yuzuwa’d be under his spell). Just then, the other 3 angles showed up with Yahitzu (da 1st 2 angels finish off their opponents). Yahitzu told them that he also didn’t trust his brother and that he let the angels go & he would also accompanied them to where his brother was. The 5 angles had no choice but 2 trust him. And so they followed him to where Yuzuwa was.

When they got inside the cave, they met Yuzuwa. Kariko decided to take him on herself to get revenge for her mother. The 3 angles disagreed with her, but Majica stopped them and convinced them to let Kariko fight him alone. Sadly, Yuzuwa was stonger than her. Rukuwa wanted to help Kariko by using the spell of the false incarnation(i dunno a better way 2 xplain it) on Yuzuwa. Unfortunately, the spell didn’t work. Just then, Yuzuwa told them that he already knew the incarnation from his father when he was younger. This was definitely a surprised for everyone, but Kariko didn’t care because she was at the point where she didn’t really care much about what’s going to happen. At that moment, she just thought of a way to finish off Yuzuwa. She asked everyone to lend her most of their power. The 4 angels supported her all the way, but Yahitzu & Rukuwa wasn’t sure about it, so they lend her half of their powers. Kariko then used those powers into a blast & shot it at Yuzuwa. Yuzuwa decided to take it head on because he thought that he was strong enough to go straight through the blast & he would knock down Kariko. But that was a mistake for him because the blast was so stronger that it almost killed him. He didn’t die from the blast, which was a surprise to everyone, but he was badly injured that he could barely move(which was a relieved for everyone). Against Yuzuwa’s own will, he himself begged Yahitzu for help, & he kept on begging & begging. Everyone kept on telling Yahitzu not to listen to him, but it was no used because he had a little soft spot for his brother. Yahitzu thought that he would give his brother some of his power, and so he walked up to his brother. As he was walking toward his brother, he felt his power draining away. He then realized that his brother was stealing his power away from him. Yuzuwa stole enough power from Yahitzu (about ¼) to make an escape before Yahitzu & Kariko gave him a blast. Yahitzu was mad at his brother for stealing his power, but not as much as he was mad at himself for trusting his brother. Kariko tried to cheer him up by telling him that Yuzuwa would be weaker and they could kill him off easily, but it was no use…And so, the 5 angles, Yahitzu, and Rukuwa walked off the battlefield/cave(or watever) with a better feeling that they would finish off Yuzuwa the next time they meet him.

The End……………….or………To Be Continued………………….?

Sooo…..wat do u think?
& i’m sorry dat is was sooo looonge…..i tried 2 make it shorter dan the last 1, but it appears 2 b longer dan da last 1. may b i was too detailed. (so sorry TT.TT)
&, o, hey, do u want me 2 draw da angels with their new clothes. de’r in a new story so de need new clothes, right?
& if u want 2 c how da demons look, please tell me b cuz I dunno if u wanna no how de look or not
& lastly, thank u 4 taking yur time off 2 read dis long story. I really appreciated it. thx
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