Thursday, June 30, 2005

   What to think…
Refi: Did you like my experiment (my last post)? Well, I got dif responses from it…people running around, screaming that it was the end of the world, a few compliments, thumbs up, and some strong reactions of disappointment, one even concerned about my well being. I think the weirdest thing is that only 20 hours (not even a full day) after posting I got more comments on that than I did on the previous post that had been up for 3 full days! Well geeze, if it takes a short post to hear from you, maybe I should do that more often.

Kurama Clone #2: You mean no more special guests?

Refi: Correct.

Kurama Clone #2: That will make it quiet around here. And no more slumber parties?

Refi: That’s right.

Kurama Clone #2: Byebye fangirls, what a relief. And no more feast/story time?

Refi: You got it!

Kurama Clone #2: Hmmm…well I will miss telling the rest of Hiei in RainbowLand, but I suppose I can deal with that…

Refi: You’re gonna have to! There won’t be any room for you to appear on the post either!

Kurama Clone #2: In that case, I’ll be able to visit Demon World again. Why didn’t you do this sooner?

Refi: Because I have ideas and wish to share them in hopes of inspiring the young readers out there! I want to make a difference in the world that has a positive impact! To leave the world a better place than I found it! *stands victoriously w/ on foot on a rock, opposite hand pointing to the air, and flashy beams coming out from behind* Even if it takes me ONE STARFISH AT A TIME!!!

Kurama Clone #2: >.> So why are you stopping now?

Refi: …Well…um…heh heh ^^;;;

Kurama Clone #2: Your one word posts are not going to make a difference.

Refi: Well ok, sorry to those of you who liked the short post, I’m going to continue to SPEAK FOR THE TREES! j/k, I mean continue to post like usual for those who enjoy it. What can I say? Its something different from most sites. And my fanfics will continue to have journeys of growth, learning, and character development. There will still be time for simply entertaining posts too. Although be warned that I have messages hidden even in those! HAHA BEWARE SUBLIMINAL MESSAGES!!! I will trick you all into all being mature law-abiding citizens of the World! Thank you Kurama for giving up your trip to Demon World to help me realize my potential. The sacrifice is truly manly of you! *hugs*

Kurama Clone #2: ^///^ That’s what love is about dear…

Refi: But on another note, I will be gone for a while. You see, I’m working on a top secret project right now!

Kurama Clone #2: I presume I will be here in your absence, correct?

Refi: Yep, until my family comes out here next weekend to visit me. You see peoples, they will only be out here a short time, so neither Kurama nor I will be on at all. Sorry for those looking forward to the possibly concluding episode of Hiei in RainbowLand. But I’ll try and get part13 done for my next post, if I can pry away from my secret project long enough to check Kurama’s scritp and make sure he’s not telling you things like Hiei crying when it was just one tear at a different time. So I’ll try to visit, and will keep an eye on my chatbox if you miss me (reminder to only use the top chatbox UNLESS you are requesting to speak w/ a cartoon character, thank you) and want to keep in touch.

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Tuesday, June 28, 2005

Imagine a short post on Tiggerola’s site
Yo!
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Saturday, June 25, 2005

   revisions ^^;
Thank you guys for your imput last week, and of course since I write the next part of Hiei in RainbowLand the day I post them things like this happen. ^///^ Its rather embarrassing because at times like this I break the beautiful curtain of imagination to let reality set in XP I know this makes me look SO unprofessional! Well, more people liked the extent of Hiei crying, but then I thought it would be more dramatic if he didn’t until he was by himself and then not even let it all out. And forget the Fire and Brimstone Tears that Kurama Clone #2 was telling you about, he was just pulling your leg. I think this new way I have the story goes better w/ the plot and hope you like it too:

Pt 10 now ends like this, (only a line was deleted from the original)

Lurky grabs her [Yukina] by the back of her kimono, Kurama and Touya try to make him let go, but their powers are unusable due to the overwhelming energy radiating from the Dragon right next to them

Lurky: Huha! ^^ I did it! Look! I did it Murky!

Murky: checheche! Excellent! Lets go!

Lurky: But I didn’t get to ride the horsey! >.<

Murky: Keep hold of this brat till we’re back to the cave and you can buy a horse to ride anytime you wish!

Lurky: Realy? ^_^

They fly off in the distance and those knocked out by the Dragon’s force start to come too, when Hiei gets up he is weakened but manages to stand, he faces the horizon that the Dragon flew towards, he falls to his knees, hits the ground with eyes closed

Hiei: NOOOOOOO!!!!
***
Then in Pt 11 they go to the castle, Hiei leaves and recalls him and Kurama at the site of Murky and Lurky's cave...

Kurama: I’m sure your Jagan would be able to find your sister immediately.

Hiei: Don’t you get it? Or are you blind? Did you not see how those two buffoons had COMPLETE control over the dragon? I have trained for countless years and still can only bribe the dragon with my very soul for it to do my will. No one has EVER mastered it. Then these runts pop up ride it like a circus pony! I am just as susceptible to it as you while it is under their control. I-I want to save Yukina, but I can’t, not like this.

Kurama: Hiei…

Hiei: Save your speeches. She’s gone and I only have myself to blame.

***

Back in the present, Hiei walks down the cave where Murky and Lurky showed him the color crystals

Hiei: It’s all my fault…why? *sits on the ruble of color-less crystals he destroyed earlier* How could they have mastered it so quickly? *stares at his palm that he summons the Dragon with* If I hadn’t been so eager to destroy the color…*closes fingers over into a fist*….they would never have even known about it. *raises fist to chest and takes out Yukina’s tear gem to look at* I couldn’t protect you… *covers gem up* …I’m sorry. *eyes close and a lonely tear escapes and rolls down his cheek, turning into a dark round ruby that falls to the floor unnoticed*

And then enters Shy Violet while he hides the tear gem from Yukina, not noticing his on the ground.
***

Okay, now we can return to the castle and have our feast and Part 12 of Hiei in RainbowLand! (and I appologize if you find it long and boring, but you have to admit Hiei needs lots of convincing to move on...at least I didn't turn it into dbz and have this part go on for weeks then have a part of flashbacks to recap before continuing the story!)

***

Refi: Welcome my faithful subjects to tonights feast and storytelling! Kurama Clone #2 has something to tell you all…

Kurama Clone #2: We are having hamburgers tonight! ^^;

Refi: Not that, dear, the other thing!

Kurama Clone #2: I’m sorry I lied about the story and Hiei’s tears. No matter how traumatic, he would never cry in public, and since his Dragon was able to destroy RainbowLand, then so would his tears if they were really fire and brimstone. But it did make a good cliff hanger and by your reactions, proved to Refi that you do actually read the post ^^

Refi: Ok ok, enough! On to DINNER!!!

***You go to the feast and construct your own SUPER BURGER and enjoy mingling w/ the cartoons while eating then you all migrate to the story telling room.***


Hiei: It wouldn’t make any difference if you did know about me.

Shy Violet: I bet it would. I only want to help you Black…

Hiei: *turns* WILL YOU STOP CALLING ME THAT! My name is Hiei, not Black Night!

Shy Violet: Hee-ay? Why didn’t tell us that sooner.

Hiei: Like you guys would listen. *turns away*

Shy Violet: I’m sorry V_V

Hiei: Whatever.

Shy Violet: I know I can’t make you tell me about yourself. To remain shut off from the world is your choice. I wish there was more that I can do, but if not…I’m glad I know your real name, Hiei. *turns to go and spots the ruby tear gem on the ground* What’s this?

Hiei: What’s what? *turns to see she’s picked up his tear and is examining it* Nothing.

Shy Violet: It feels strange. Like just holding it makes my whole body sad.

Hiei: Then drop it.

Shy Violet: Yet it’s beautiful…even in its own forlorn way.

Hiei: *snatches the gem from Shy Violet and throws it* Forget about it and return to the castle where you’re safe.

Shy Violet: o_o *recovers from shock* Why don’t you come back to the castle too?

Hiei: I don’t belong there.

Shy Violet: You shouldn’t be alone, I’ll stay here with you.

Hiei: I can take care of myself.

Shy Violet: v_v Very well… *walks to where Hiei threw the gem and picks it up then starts to leave*

Hiei: What do you think you’re doing?

Shy Violet: ^///^ I wanted to keep it, it is pretty.

Hiei: Even though it makes you sad?

Shy Violet: Yes, it makes me feel the loneliness that I imagine you must feel, the hurt, the sorrow, the pain…

Hiei: *stares at Shy Violet*

Shy Violet: If you don’t mind, I’d like to keep it to remember you, my friend.

Hiei: *startled* Perhaps…

Shy Violet: I should let you be though. *starts to walk out*

Hiei: Wait.

Shy Violet: Yes, Hiei?

Hiei: *avoiding eye contact* A-are you still interested?

Shy Violet: Pardon?

Hiei: In getting to know me, learning how I feel?

Shy Violet: Y-yes…do-do you want to share?

Hiei: I could try. But I’ve never done so before. I don’t know where to start.

Shy Violet: Its ok, maybe you don’t know how. I could tell you about myself first so you can see how, then it might not be so awkward for you. I know doing new things can be scary.

Hiei: -_- I’m not scared.

Shy Violet: Oh, of course not. ^^;

Hiei: Go ahead.

Shy Violet: Huh?

Hiei: Tell me about yourself! I don’t have all day.

Shy Violet: Right! ^^

*****convo edited out so as not to bore readers*****
Shy Violet explains about her life in RainbowLand the good, the bad and even discloses some insecurities, then prompts Hiei to tell about himself, he says that he and the others are all demons, their real names, him being a forbidden child, Yukina is his sister, and about the dragon being of his own doing, this explains the tear gem that Shy Violet holds and its aura sends her the emotions concealed within
*****end convo summary*****

Shy Violet: O.O …I had no idea…I don’t know what to say…

Hiei: There’s nothing more to say.

Shy Violet: I’m sorry, I’m trying to understand, to feel as you feel. Does that make you feel better? That you don’t have to bare this burden alone?

Hiei: What?

Shy Violet: I’m here for you.

Hiei: *raises eyebrow* Even though I am the cause of all of your sufferings?

Shy Violet: Of course! You are still my friend. I will help you.

Hiei: There’s nothing you can do, even if I told you everything.

Shy Violet: Wanna bet? ^_~

Hiei: What in the name of Demon World are you referring to?

Shy Violet: Well, with enough color crystals, we can send out a rainbow and the light of it can overpower the Darkness so you can get your sister back safely!

Hiei: >.> You really think the Dragon of the Immortal Flame can be beaten by a silly little rainbow?

Shy Violet: If you are in a dark room and turn on a flashlight, can the darkness overpower its beam?

Hiei: Do you expect me to answer that?

Shy Violet: Trust me, I know we can win.

Hiei: We’ll need a plan, there are questions I want answered before taking out Murky, Lurky, and the Dragon. Still it looks like your rainbow is our best bet.

Shy Violet: I wish I could help you here, but every color needs a person to operate it for the rainbow to work.

Hiei: Would Kurama suffice?

Shy Violet: *thinks of Great Rose* He doesn’t know how.

Hiei: Can you direct him if he were talking to you telepathically?

Shy Violet: Perhaps, we could try that!

Hiei: Good. I’ll need you for my plan.

Shy Violet: *jumps* ^__^ What do you have in mind?

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Thursday, June 23, 2005

   *FLASHBACK*
Refi: Ok for those of you who wanted it or not…here’s a flashback from between the previous feast and story where Kurama Clone #2 was trying to bribe Inuyasha311 into not kidnapping him (yes I got that on video, ya gotta love security cameras!)

***

Kurama Clone #2: Oh hello 311, you want to hear the next part of the story, right?

Inuyasha311: Yep!

Kurama Clone #2: So if I tell the story, will you promise not to kidnap me?

Inuyasha311: hmmm…*thinks*…NO! bwahahaha!

Kurama Clone #2: Can’t you reason w/ her #5?

Kurama Clone #5: >.> Don’t think so, she has a mind of her own.

Kurama Clone #2: 105? Would you help me for a Scooby Snack?

Kurama Clone #105: I’d rather have cookies ^_^

Inuyasha311: I got plenty of those, here!

Kurama Clone #105: I like cheese ^_^

Inuyasha311: >.> Watch it…

Kurama Clone #2: Perhaps more hot anime men for your dojo will alter your decisions?

Inuyasha311: Who? Where? *drools*

Kurama Clone #2: *pulls out Kyo and Inuyasha from behind back*

Kyo: WHATS THE BIG IDEA? I WAS ABOUT TO BEAT THAT DANG RAT!

Inuyasha: Huh, forget about your rat, I was hot on the trail of that rat Naraku!

Kyo: Oh like YOU know anything about tracking down rats you mangy mutt!

Inuyasha: Oh looks who’s talking Mr. “I’m a stupid cat who lets my tail get kicked by an eensy weensy mouse!”

Kyo: YOU WANNA TAKE THIS OUT SIDE HALF-BREED?!?!?

Inuyasha: Huh, Bring it, you can’t be that tough if a rodent can beat you!

Kyo: What about you? You can be such a sissy w/ Kagome sometimes…

Inuyasa: You should talk, its not like YOU would ever get that way w/ Tohru…

Inuyasha&Kyo: -_- grrr *gives each other death glares*

Kurama Clone #2: Oh come now, why don’t you two just have a sit? *forcefully throws them on the floor, mimicking the effect on Inuyasha when Kagome cries SIT!* Ooops ^^; did Ido that? You know these two would be at it for hours if given the opportunity…

Inuyasha311: *grabs Inuyasha and Kyo* We’ll talk later fox-boy!

Kurama Clone #105: I like chocolate milk ^_^

***

After the story was told, here’s what happened, and I para-quote Inuyasha311 on this:

Inuyasha311: *evil grin* now the story is over 2 you better run!!
Kurama Clone #5:oh come on give him a break ^^ please
Inuyasha311: ok then its you or him which one?
Kurama Clone #5:sorry 2 I tryed!!!!!
Inuyasha311: lol ok before the chase starts lol good story oh someone wants hiei to open up will he? Hm wonder!!!!ponders!!
Kyo: Shut up!!!
Inuyasha311: Darn it kyo!!!!I was thinking!!!
Kyo: yeah right like you could do that
Inuyasha311: >.> ok #2 never mind you’re free I'm going to kill KYO!!!

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Tuesday, June 21, 2005

   FinalFan1015’s Party!
Refi: Well Welcome everyone, I know it’s a bit crowded today, I invited a few extra guest…

Kurama Clone #2: They shouldn’t stay long…we’re paying them by the minute…

Refi: ^^; And by word in addition, so we are discouraging invoking them to talk. I mean of course you can in the comments, we don’t mind paying them overtime…really ^^; [aside] *exasperated sigh* actors!

Kurama Clone #2: So without further ado, I present to you the Guest of Honor for this evening!

*Karen Kasumi, Yukito Tsukishiro, Kamui Shirou, & Sakura: Tsubasa enter carrying a fabric-covered cart on their shoulders, Refi draws the curtains*

Refi: WELCOME FINALFAN1015 and CONGRATS on succeeding at your EXTRA CREDIT PROJECT to not swear for an ENTIRE WEEK!

Vash: ALLRIGHT! DRINKS ALL AROUND! ^________^

Refi: *pssst* hey Vash, we don’t serve Vodka around here, now get the soda and punch passed out to everyone!

Vash: *stands erect and salutes* Aye-aye captian! *turns to Kurama Clones #33-95 and directs them to catering drinks*

Kurama Clone #23 (FinalFan1015’s clone): *helps FinalFan1015 down from cart* Here you go dear. Would you like some high-class, hard-to-find, expensive pocky?

FinalFan1015: Why thank you, YUM!

Millie: ^_^ Oh how exciting! What are you going to do next?

FinalFan1015: Um ^^; go to Disney World?

Refi: Lets start with the scavenger hunt rules! Number 2?

Kurama Clone #2: Very well, separate into teams of about 5, then find these the following:

+The Original Kurama impersonating Kenshin +Raven (from TT) on a Date +A Lynx Angel pic +When Tenchi actually met Tohru +The first mention of Vegetta in Care-A-Lot +Sally Sue’s partner in Crime when visiting YGO +Hiei in Make-up +The anime equivalent to Pink Elephants on Parade +Kuwabara dancing…you can even make him do the splits! +Trunks pulling a Clark Kent +Pic and Label for Refi’s group of friends at college +Joey’s relation to Shaggy +A campfire song *BONUS*3-fanfics crossed over in one scene, 2 from the same show

Each item is worth 1 point, you all have until the next post (Wed at midnight or shortly thereafter), and the team w/ the most points wins! [if someone actually wins, we’ll actually make a prize!]

Refi: Until then, everyone have fun! We got dancing, food, piñata, twister, hide&seek…

Yukito Tsukishiro: *To FinalFan1015* Nice song…would you care to dance?

FinalFan1015: ^////^ Sure

Yusuke: Huh. I always keep a clean mouth when I visit the castle and Refi never throws me a party.

Botan: Well maybe that’s because you have such a potty-mouth otherwise, and you only actually visited here one night!

Yusuke: *thinks back* Oh yeah, that was when Kuwabara did the splits…

Inuyasha311: Have a cookie?

Kurama Clone #105: ^_^ Thanks!

Kurama Clone #5: Hey I slaved all day in the kitchen making those for the party, I am NOT making anymore for a week!

Inuyasha311: You better! Or…*whacks #5 w/ newspaper* TOUGH LOVE!

Kurama Clone #105: HAHAHA! *runs off w/ all the cookies*

Beast Boy: This is great, FinalFan has TOFU at her party *sighs* I like her already!

Cyborg: Hey dude, I’m only here for the PIZZA!

Starfire: MMM I am liking this red soup that we dip the salty triangles in!

Robin: *cuts a piece of cake that is jelly-filled in the middle and shaped like Cardcaptor Sakura's Kero * Hey guys do you know where Raven is?

Beast Boy: I think she went to find the original Kurama in the rose garden.

Cyborg: WHERE’S THE SAUSAGE?!? There’s only cheese and vegetables XP

Beast Boy: *bites pizza out of Cyborgs hand* Yeah isn’t it great? ^_^

Cyborg: *shaking crushed hand* Oh yeah? I’ll show you ‘great’ *pick up tofu and blasts it on BBs face* A BooYA!

Beast Boy: Oh yeah? *grabs cake but misses Cyborg *

Yukito Tsukishiro: You know FinalFan1015, I’ve liked you since I met you and… *is hit by flying cake*

FinalFan1015: HEY WHATS THE BIG IDEA?!? >o< You can’t start the food fight w/o ME! *takes cake fallen from Yukito Tsukishiro’s face and throws it back, hitting Vash in the face* HAHA!

Kurama Clone #18: hmmm…Great Idea! *throws custard pie at Hiei’s face* “Leena you never looked better!” lol

Vash: *licks face* mmm, that’s good, ok *stands on top of the table and throws doughnuts everywhere* LOVE AND PEACE!!!

*food fight ensues*

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Saturday, June 18, 2005

   Hiei in RainbowLand Part 11
Refi: Here ya go, fresh off the presses! Over the cliff-hanger we go! Well I didn’t get as far as I wanted too, what I wanted in it took more space then I intended! The story all together is already 20 pages long! ^^; My how time flies! So I searched for a good but natural cutoff, and some of what I wanted in this part you’ll have to wait for next week… *ducks from the faithful readers who wanted to maim me after the last cliff-hanger*

Kurama Clone #2: ^^; I suppose she won’t be joining us for the feast this week, and neither shall I unfortunately, Inuyasha311 is still after me so I have to run too! *walks calmly out back door*

Pharaoh: >.> I suppose that means we’re in charge now…

Trunks: Fine, but don’t make me spokesman, I already had to talk at 36 board meetings this week!

Captain Sagara: *snaps fingers* Bring a table! Everyone gather around! *lays out plans on how to ‘invade’ the dining hall for dinner*

***Migrate…er invade the dinning hall and get served dinner, sitting by whoever Sagara assigned to sit next to you.***

Trunks: I must say this is well done!

Captain Sagara: *approaches Pharaoh* There will be a slight conflict with telling the story without the story teller.

Pharaoh: OH NO! We must find Kurama Clone #2 to tell the story, but he’s in hiding from 311, but 311 wants to hear the story too, so she can’t hurt him during the story, but he will have no way to escape after he tells the story! I wish Refi was still here! TRUNKS! You find Kurama Clone #2 and get him here, SAGARA you manuver the guest to the story telling room without letting them know there is a problem!

Trunks: >.> And you?

Pharaoh: I WILL GATHER ALL THE DUEL MONSTERS TO PROTECT THE CLONES!!!

Trunks & Captain Sagara: ^^; *there must be an easier way*

***Kurama Clone #2 is forced out of hiding and has Inuyasha and Kyo to bribe Inuyasha311 from kidnapping him after the story…scene was recorded if people want to see how it went next week, just say so in the comments. #2 sits and tells the story.***


Rainbow Brite, Color Kids, and Sprites are gathered in the Rainbow Room, Hiei, Kurama, Touya, and Jin enter solemly

Rainbow Brite: Any luck?

Kurama: *shakes head* V_V Their cave has been destroyed, there’s no trace of where they went.

Red Butler: But we must find a clue! They have Ice Gem!

Buddy Blue: Yeah, and who knows what they’ll do to her.

Jin: Guessin buy de glimmer uv ‘er oiyes, ai’d say dey’d be…*oof*

Touya: *elbows Jins stomach and whispers* Not now, they don’t know!

Jin: ^^; Roite! Heheh, dey’d prubabley juust ‘old ‘er fo ransume.

Red Butler: Then we should split up and search for her everywhere! We HAVE to get her back!

Kurama: I’m afraid it isn’t safe for you outside the castle at this time. They may have the Dragon-Monster return.

Kris: So what can we do, Great Rose?

Kurama: I would suggest to focus your efforts on restoring color to Rainbow Land, while we search for Ice Gem.

Rainbow Brite: Good idea, we’ll have to all mine the color crystals to get the color back.

Kurama: Even the mine might not be safe at this time, however…

Hiei turns and walks away

Shy Violet: Black Night? Where are you going?

Canary Yellow: Wait!

Patty O’Green: Come back!

Hiei continues without pausing and exits the room

Outside it is dark and desolate, Hiei thinks back as he wanders about:

***

Kurama: Well this is where Murky and Lurky’s cave was.

Touya: Nothing much NOW is it?

Kurama: Apparently even though they can summon the Dragon, they were unable to stop it.

Jin: Dey muust ave, uderwoise we’d still be feelin da power frum dat ting!

Touya: And everything here looks as dismal as the pits of Demon World so their trail’s existence is next to none.

Kurama: Perhaps you two can search the rubble while Black Night and I scout around…

Hiei: You can cut it with those useless nick-name Kurama!

Kurama: ^^; Oh sorry.

Jin and Touya move around the rubble looking while Kurama scans the distant area

Kurama: I’m sure your Jagan would be able to find your sister immediately.

Hiei: Don’t you get it? Or are you blind? Did you not see how those two buffoons had COMPLETE control over the dragon? I have trained for countless years and still can only bribe the dragon with my very soul for it to do my will. No one has EVER mastered it. Then these runts pop up ride it like a circus pony! I am just as susceptible to it as you while it is under their control. I-I want to save Yukina, but I can’t, not like this.

Kurama: Hiei…

Hiei: Save your speeches. She’s gone and I only have myself to blame.

***

Back in the present, Hiei walks down the cave where Murky and Lurky showed him the color crystals

Hiei: It’s all my fault…why? *sits on the ruble of color-less crystals he destroyed earlier* How could they have mastered it so quickly? *stares at his palm that he summons the Dragon with* If I hadn’t been so eager to destroy the color…*closes fingers over into a fist*….they would never have even known about it. *raises fist to chest and takes out Yukina’s tear gem to look at* I couldn’t protect you… *covers gem up* …I’m sorry.

Hiei sits in silence till he senses someone coming then returns the gem while standing up

Shy Violet: Oh Black Night! I didn’t expect to find you here.

Hiei: What are you doing outside the castle? It’s not safe for you here.

Shy Violet: I wasn’t planning on being out long, I snuck out to see if there was already a cart of crystals that we could use.

Hiei: For some reason I can’t see you just ‘sneaking out’ then again, none of you here could lie even if you wanted to.

Shy Violet: ^///^ Well, it is for the good of the world.

Hiei: Would it do the world any good if Murky and Lurky were hiding here? They would have captured you just like Yukina.

Shy Violet: Who?

Hiei: Oh what is it that you guys call her? Ice Gem.

Shy Violet: You’re still sad that she’s captured, don’t blame yourself.

Hiei: What do you know?

Shy Violet: *gasps at Hiei’s shapness* I-I…

Hiei: Just go back to the castle. *turns away*

Shy Violet: v_v She must be very close to you then?

Hiei: Huh? *looks back and then forward* Why would you care?

Shy Violet: It must hurt to keep it to yourself. Have you ever shared your feelings with anyone else?

Hiei: How pointlsess, I don’t need to.

Shy Violet: *timidly* If you need someone to talk to, I’ll listen.

Hiei: I told you I don’t need to.

Shy Violet: H-have you ever tried?

Hiei: If I were to ‘try’ why should I tell you?

Shy Violet: *shrugs* I don’t know…I suppose because I’m interested…and I care about you.

Hiei: *looks back over shoulder* You don’t even know me.

Shy Violet: Then I would l-like to.

Hiei: You couldn’t handle the truth. *looks forward*

Shy Violet: … *looks down, to the side* …Perhaps… *raises eyes* …but you don’t know unless you try.



I didn’t want to interrupt the story, otherwise I would have put the poll right before Shy Violet found Hiei to set the tone for the question.

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Thursday, June 16, 2005

   AUCTION!!!
[brief announcements:
~~Thank you all, I received my 2,500th visit at midnight last night
~~Next Tuesday I’m posting a party in honor of FinalFan1015’s accomplishment of not swearing for a whole week! Be sure to come and congratulate her
~~If you want to join a site contest by being a judge, there’s info in Ryiosay’s intro
~~And whether you remember The Otaku Fanfic Writer’s Group or not, Green Princess just created a forum for anyone to join in case you are interested
~~Also, I found it a bit funny how when I only had one comment on my last post, there were already 5 votes…just to see how the polls currently were…there is currently only 6 real votes…I think I’ll leave the poll up for a few days more]

Refi: As promised, we are now auctioning off Kurama Clone #13 so make your bids now with Yakko Warner from Animaniacs!

Kurama Clone #13: ;.; I don’t want to be auctioned ToT I’m too young to be a widow!

Kurama Clone #2: There, there, don’t cry in front of all the fangirls.

Yakko Warner: I’ll open the floor at 200 rubles!

*crickets chirp*

Refi: -_- Ok fine, we’ll use American dollars.

Inuyasha311: I’ll take him!

Yakko: 200Igot200doIhear3?

Dot: I’ll take him for $3, he’s so cute! *jumps into #13’s arms and kisses him*

Kurama Clone #13: O_O *blink* TOT

Kurama Clone #2: Dot? The bid is at 300, not $3.

Dot: So why didn’t he say so? *walks off nose in the air*

Wakko: Ta-booooooo! 8P

Yakko: 200goinOnce,twice

Fangirl1: *Waves hand furiously*

Inuyasha311: $301!!!

Fangirl1: $302!

*ensuses…*

Inuyasasha311: $311

KairiDono: Racoongirl will take him for $350!

Racoongirl: I will? >.> Fine but you’re paying for him!

KairiDono: eep!

Inuyasha311: $351!

*more auctioning up to $1,543,406 many fangirls enter and drop out of the bidding, Inuyasha311 always a dollar ahead*

Fangirl627: $1,543,407!

Kurama Clone #5: Stop 311, that’s a bit out of our price range.

Inuyasha311: $1,543,407 and ONE CENT!!!

Fangirl627: $1,543,407.02!

Inuyasha311: $1,543,407.03!

Fangirl627: $1,543,407.04!!

Inuyasha311: Hold on, Hey Kurama, got a nickel?

Kurama Clone #5: >.>

Kurama Clone #105: Here you go.

Inuyasha311: Good boy, Have a cookie!

Kurama Clone #105: ^_^

Kurama Clone #5: >.> Traitor

Inuyasha311: *smacks #5 w/ newspaper* What was that?

Green Princess: *runs in through doors* WAIT!!! I FOUND HER!!!

Kurama Clone #13: *looks hopeful*

*Enter LadyKagome309*

Kurama Clone #2: What do you know? It really is her! Thank You Green Princess!

Kurama Clone #13: Oh good, now I can be sophisticated again. *pulls rose out of hair and gives it to Lady Kagome309* I have missed you my dearest!

LadyKagome309: ^///^

Refi: They say 13 is an unlucky number, but it looks like it worked out. All the ordered clones have been delivered!!! ^___^

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Tuesday, June 14, 2005

   Now what was I going to say?
Refi: Hello everyone! Hm…well…I got some different responses from the last part of Hiei in RainbowLand…but I got reactions, that was good (please give specific reactions, the feed back really helps!)…it also made me wonder…Since Yukina’s tears turn into gems…what would happen if Hiei really did cry?

Kurama Clone #2: His tears would turn into fire and brimstone!

Refi: o.O; eee ^^; I suppose it’s a good thing that he keeps his emotions in…

Kurama Clone #2: But the physics in Rainbow Brite’s show wouldn’t allow that so there wasn’t any when Hiei was there.

Refi: >.> But Yukina still cried gems…

Kurama Clone #2: Of course. Those don’t harm the heroes or traumatize the kids who watch the show!

Refi: Yet The Immortal Dragon of the Darkness flame doesn’t???

Kurama Clone #2: You haven’t SEEN Hiei’s Fire and Brimstone tears! ^^; Plus Murky and Lurky were controlling it.

Refi: What about earlier in the cave?

Kurama Clone #2: Those were only color crystals involved, those can be repaired.

Refi: -_- This is why he is the brains of this operation and I just run the place. ^^ Oh well, now we know that Hiei won’t be crying his way out of this one *huge sweatdrop at extremely bad and not to mention unfunny joke* Still crying was a harsh reaction for Hiei, I wanted to tone it down and just have him extremely angry.

Kurama Clone #2: Your audience can handle the real story, Hiei did just loose his sister, but there is more to it than that…

Refi: Yes which will be revealed in the next part, I’ll put up a voting poll to see if you guys think it was really appropriate to display Hiei crying after you understand the whole story.

Kurama Clone #2: If that is all, I have an important announcement regarding the Clones.

Refi: First of all, if any of you have ordered, but not received your Kurama Clone like the ones in my intro, let me know so I can resend it to you!

Kurama Clone #2: Plus…LAST CALL for the owner of Kurama Clone #13 please come forward! If ANYONE knows the whereabouts of ladykagome309 please notify me immediately.

Refi: Otherwise we will have to auction off #13…

Kurama Clone #13: ToT I don’t want to be auctioned!!! Where is my owner? Oh Ladykagome309, where have you gone???

Kurama Clone #2: *shakes #13* Get a grip over yourself! Hehheh ^^; He’s just having owner withdrawals, nothing to worry about my friends.

Refi: and it may be complicated, but I’ve been thinking about a new feature for the clones…if you owners out there wish to have your names with the clones as well just vote below and I’ll decide if I can manage to do that and send them all out.



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Saturday, June 11, 2005

   Can you beleive this is Part 10?
Refi: Ok, tonight we're going to make this speedy-quick, so for the feast we're having tinfoil dinners in the Story Telling Room, Kurama Clone #2 is already there waiting to get started, so grab your dinner, grab a cartoon to snuggle with (and yes you even grab your fav) and head right in!

***Take tinfoil dinner: Everything in them first, w/o onions next, and vegetarian past that. Line past that and migrate to Story Telling room where Hiei in RainbowLand continues.***


Kris: No way! Only horses can run in this race!

Starlight: Why do you care? I can outrun your horse easily, Black Night will provide me a challenge.

Hiei: Don’t bother, I have no intention to run in your silly race.

Starlight: Are you scared Black Night?

Hiei: I have better things to do.

Kris: You heard him Starlight. Leave him alone.

Starlight: Well if that’s the way you’re going to be. *turns to Yukina* At least you’ll be able to see me Ice Gem *poses* after all I am the most Magnificent horse in all the universe! *winks*

Hiei: -_-+ Just for that I think I will race.

Jin: WooHoo! Ifn’s dat il be da case, Oid be joinin ya tuu!

Racers [Jin, Stormy on Skydancer, Kris on Onyx, Rainbow Bright on Starlight, and Hiei] line up and a sprite shoots a water pistol to get them started and they the horses take off

Jin: Weeel be given dem a rune for dere muney!

Hiei: hn.

Jin: Wot cha say tu a little wager if’n ya will. Over de fair Ice Gem…

Hiei: gr. Leave Yukina out of this!

Jin: Well Touya en I were asken her ta sit buy us on da float in de parade. She saad ta take et oop wit cha.

Hiei: Dream on its not going to happen.

Jin: She seemed loike she wanted tu tho…ifn’s oi win, she will, if ya can beat wind, den oi’ll lay uf.

Hiei: Fine.

They take off, Hiei and Jin quickly pass Skydancer and soon catch up w/ Onyx, Jin spurts ahead so Hiei exerts an extra leap ahead and passes Jin, They inch past Staright who then tries to run faster, keeping up

Rainbow Brite: SLOW DOWN STARLIGHT! You’re going to fast.

Starlight: Nonsense! I can’t let them beat me!

*rumble, rumble, BOOM*

The Dragon of the Darkness Flame shoots up from the ground in front of the racers

Yukina: Oh no! Hiei didn’t call that here.

Kurama: No he didn’t, something else summoned it, but what?

The Dragon looms over, revealing Murky and Lurky controlling it with reigns, it starts smashing through carnival attractions

Murky: Ooo hoo hoo! Comeoncomeoncomeon!

Rainbow Brite: Oh no! It’s ruining all the color! We must do something!

Starlight: Right! *charges towards it*

Hiei: There’s not much they can do against it. *darts towards it*

The Dragon heads straight for them and the force scatters them

Yukina: NO!!! Hiei!!! *crys gems*

Murky: *spots glimmer out of corner of eye and sees Yukina’s tears* $.$ I must have that color kid!

The Dragon heads straight for Yukina

Kurama: We must take cover.

Touya: Shouldn’t we fend it off?

Kurama: *shakes head* This is up to Hiei, unfortunately not even I would be able to stand a true blow from it.

Kurama and Touya lead Yukina from the bleachers but Murky cleverly maneuvers the Dragon to pass right next to them, allowing Lurky to grab Yukina

Murky: Get her dodo brain!

Lurky: Duh, you mean like this?

Lurky grabs her by the back of her kimono, Kurama and Touya try to make him let go, but their powers are unusable due to the overwhelming energy radiating from the Dragon right next to them

Lurky: Huha! ^^ I did it! Look! I did it Murky!

Murky: checheche! Excellent! Lets go!

Lurky: But I didn’t get to ride the horsey! >.<

Murky: Keep hold of this brat till we’re back to the cave and you can buy a horse to ride anytime you wish!

Lurky: Realy? ^_^

They fly off in the distance and those knocked out by the Dragon’s force start to come too, when Hiei gets up he is weakened but manages to stand, he faces the horizon that the Dragon flew towards, he falls to his knees, hits the ground with eyes closed and streams of tears down his face

Hiei: NOOOOOOO!!!!!
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Thursday, June 9, 2005

   wow…
Refi: A few were intimidated by my long post, but I was surprised on how many people wanted to know ‘the secret’ so I suppose we can work it in today.

Kurama Clone #2: If they returned after last time to find out you should!

Refi: ^^; Ok, ok, I’ll get right to it, but first, can you go fix those internet running people at AOL, they keep kicking me off.

Kurama Clone #2: Again? *sighs, leaves*

Refi: So what I wanted to tell you last time is very special. Which I shall now that my dear Kurama is no longer here to distract…

*space time continuum appears, we leave castle and enter the world of reality.*

Refi: Have any of you guys heard of The Duttons? They are a musical family who have toured all over the world and had a Holiday Special air on PBS last Christmas which was filmed and directed by the Touch by an Angel crew. Those are the people I work for. I wanted to tell you guys that if you ever get the chance to see them DO!!! They are really good! And some very uplifting parts are in there too. Not to mention their talent. They all started on violin, but play an average of 6 instruments each, plus they can play the instruments behind their back and over their heads! When I’m not babysitting the grandkids back stage, I usually run spotlight so I see the show a lot but don’t tire of it. They play different styles of music: bluegrass, country, oldies, pop, etc. Their original songs are awesome, my favorite is Supehero. Too bad they don’t have MP3’s of it so I can share it w/ you, but they have a ‘silent film’ they made that goes with it. It’s very funny and entertaining.

Now I must say how great it is to work here cause I can go to most of the shows in town for free since I’m a local employee! Last week I went to Yakov’s show. He’s from Russia but now an American and proud of it. He’s a comedian and the show had great special effects. A few jokes I didn’t care for, but for the most part, it was hilarious. There were inspiring parts in that show as well, about the goodness of people and to not despair when the world is literally crashing in around you. I could tell he is a good man at heart. His children are the most important to him, and he also has some good art that he’s worked on.

If you guys are interested, I can continue w/ the show reviews, or not. I just wish I could have you all here w/ me to watch and see what I see and feel what I feel. It’s not the same effect just to have me write it down, you know? Well its time to head back…

*space time continuum takes us back to the castle*

Refi:...Hope you enjoyed the trip and discovering the 'secret' and next time Kurama will tell us the CLIMAX of Hiei in Rainbowland...providing I get it typed up, I beleive the next part will hold the the emotion I've been dying to set up for and portray properly in this little endevor ^^;
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