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Tuesday, November 9, 2004


   Poem of the day....
HiYa
How is everyone’s day/night/?
Mine is/was the some more of the same old stuff, nothing really new or fun.
I was working on this poem and was wondering what else is might need.
Feel free to give me your feedback on this, I kind of need it. lol
It is kind of a sad one about a lost love.


Empty
Abandon me for dead
Bare and dry are the pools of love
Barren wastelands of the future
Cleared my mind of all happiness
Drained the colors of my shattered love
Empty dreams left in the winds of love
Evacuate my thoughts of your presence
Foolishly waiting for your appearance
Forsaken for another
Insipid words tossed around
Leave without a word to the vastness of time
Meaningless promises promised
Pointless to hope for more
Purposeless without the fantasy of love
Relinquish all privileges to my love
Sent away was I like an unwanted keepsake empty without love
Trifling thoughts of desire
Unfilled wishes never granted
Vacant void left in my heart
Withdraw me from love and leave me empty

Well I’m out for now!
SeeYa
*hugs*
p.s. Thanks for you comments and your votes!
It makes my day to see them.
Big *huggles*


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