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Friday, August 6, 2010

Raijin is out looking around Sierra one afternoon when he spots Becky leaving a grocery store. He pulls out a piece of paper with her picture on as well as Nara's and Kareen's.

"That's one of them." He says, "I bet she's a screamer." He adds and leaps into the trees.

Becky is walking home when she stops suddenly.

"Something isn't right." She says to herself.

She spins around and is nailed by a left hook.


"Where is Becky? She should of been home hours ago." Kareen says to herself as she looks around the house.

There is a knock at the door and Kareen answers it. Becky is laying on the door step covered in blood and small thin cuts.

"What happened?" Kareen asks holding her tightly.

Becky tries to speak but her vocal cords have been cut as well as her voice box.

Every part of her body has been sliced. All of the cuts are thin and precise. Suddenly Becky clutches Kareen before convulsing a couple times and then falling to thin ribbons.

"She was one of the best I have ever had. She screamed so much that I'm still turned on by it." Raijin says from the tree nearby.

Kareen looks up with tears in her eyes and a look of pure rage.

She grabs her bow and fires a single arrow into the tree. All of the leaves are blown off the branches and the trunk has a large hole in it. The trunk creaks and cracks before falling over.

Raijin lands about 50 yards away on his back. Splinters from the branches cover his body.

"You've got some fight in you. I like that." He says sitting up.

Kareen is right there and delivers a huge soccer style kick to Raijin's face. Which sends him rolling across the ground and into a parked car.

Before he even comes to a rest 2 arrows are sticking through both of his knees as well as his left shoulder.

"A master archer as well? My my making you scream will definitely get me off." Raijin says removing the arrows, "Just like your friend did. Her scream was better then sex."

Kareen fires again and Raijin throws something at the arrow. The arrow pierces Raijin's left forearm and sticking in the arrow tip is the scalpel he threw.

"You'll suffer for what you did to her." Kareen says stepping closer.

Raijin simply smiles and removes the arrows.


Across town Nara is investigating the scene of one of the portals with Koji.


Raijin has a deep cut across forehead and he's panting heavily.

"You have a lot of fight in you." He says, "I find that soooo....... sexy."

Kareen has a few slices on her arm and her bow has been tossed aside.

Raijin jams his hands into the ground and winks at her. She raises an eyebrow and takes a couple steps back. From the ground beneath her feet, hundreds of scalpels shoot out, cutting her arms, legs, stomach, breasts, back, and face. She holds her scream in and falls to her knees from the pain.

Raijin stands and walks over to her.

"Was it as good for you as it was for me?" He asks.

She looks up at him and glares. He throws his head back and laughs. She lunges up and drives her head into the bottom of his jaw. His already healing teeth break once more. He stumbles backwards and holds his mouth.

"You bitch!" He says through gritted teeth.

She picks up her bow and takes aim.

"This is over!" She says and pulls back on the bow string.

Suddenly, the scalpels rain down on her and slice the bow string. Kareen falls to the ground trying to contain the pain. She does fine till one scalpel hits her in the ankle.

She groans in pain and Raijin is loving every second of it.


"Do you feel that?" Nara asks.

"Yes. I sense your presence across town but that can't be right." Koji says.

"Kareen's in trouble." Nara says and sprints out of the building. He runs straight down the street and easily clears the bus coming at him.


Kareen is stipped down to her underwear and is tied to a post. She has blacked out as Raijin makes small incisions all over her arms and back. He stares at her chest and admires it.

"What a shame." He says and starts to make more incisions across the top of them.

He stops and looks up just in time to see a large geta sandal connect with his jaw.

Nara had ran full speed, jumped, and delivered a powerful spinning heel kick to Raijin's jaw.

Raijin gets up and spits out the rest of his teeth and a large amount of blood.

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?" Raijin says pissed off.

He looks around and doesn't see Nara anywhere. He looks around once more and then goes back to Kareen.

As he is making more incisions, Nara leaps down from the roof and sprints at Raijin again. Again he is late to sense Nara and is caught by a powerful spinning roundhouse kick. Raijin's jaw is dislocated and is nearly knocked off.

"WHO THE HELL IS THERE?" Raijin shouts after fixing his jaw.

Nara jumps down from the tree he was hiding in.

"You?" Raijin says surprised, "You're telling me that some old demon got the jump on me?"

Nara doesn't say a word and walks straight at him with a determined walk.

Raijin smiles and the scalpels shoot from the ground again. Nara is cut by them and still keeps going.

Raijin backs away but not far enough. Nara pulls his fist back and puts all his strength his false body can muster. Raijin's jaw goes flying across the yard and sticks into the window of Ashen's house. Raijin tumbles across the ground and Nara coughs up blood.

"Too much." He says and coughs up more blood. He falls to his knees as Lust comes through the gates of Ashen's property.

"NARA!" She screams.

Nara looks back at her and smiles weakly. He coughs up more blood and falls forward into the blood soaked ground beneath him.

Raijin gets up slowly and surveys the scene before him.

"I beat him. He couldn't withstand my power! I beat the great and feared Demon King!" Raijin says to himself. Forgetting all about his missing lower jaw for a moment he picks Nara's body up. He reaches for his phone and tries to make a call but realizes his jaw is gone. He retrieves it and leaves.

Lust jumps down out of the tree with Kareen's unconscious body.


In the Demon Realm, at Kogamaru's castle, a portal appears and Nara's lifeless body flies out making everyone duck for cover. Then Raijin steps out.

"Bow to your new Lord and Master!" He says.

"It can't be." Shear says looks Nara's body over.

"That's him alright." Roswell says as he enters.

Kogamaru nods in agreement.

"Not a trace of life." Kogamaru says.


That evening a large party is held in Raijin's honor for his mammoth victory against the strongest and most feared demon. Nara's body is hung from the castle gates of Roswell's castle's remains.

Shingi is standing on the gate staring at the body.

"Hey! Shingi! What are you doing?" Shear asks.

"Paying my respects to him." Shingi replies.

"Why? He is our enemy." Shear says slightly drunk.

"He was a good friend to me. Even when I attacked my best friend, he never changed." Shingi replies quietly.


Lust is sitting down on a chair next to Kareen's bed, where Kareen is sleeping peacefully.

Everyone arrives at home and Lust tells them the horrible news.

They all sit in their seats quietly for a long time.


Shingi is sitting next to Nara's body still staring at it.

"What happened to your jaw and teeth?" He asks.

Raijin stands behind him with a large dent on the left side of his face. His jaw has been shifted about 2 inches to the side.

"You know now that I am a hero, I can choose any woman I want." Raijin says.

"I appreciate your offer but I'm more man then you will ever be." Shingi replies.

"I was thinking more along the lines of your precious little sister." Raijin says with a smirk.

"You see there is a problem with that. She is protected by the two greatest swordsmen the Demon Realm has ever produced. If by some miracle you got passed me, then you have Shin to get through." Shingi says, "I know first hand and am able to admit it that he was a better swordsman then I. So you will never come close to her."

"You are forgetting that I just killed Nara." Raijin says.

"Bullshit. Nara simply ran out of energy and died. You were probably on your ass somewhere looking for your jaw." Shingi replies.

"You little piece of shit!" Raijin says raising his fist.

Shingi smiles as he looks back at Raijin over his shoulder and the gates creak open. Raijin looks at him confused then walks over to the gate doors.

His eyes widen and then fill with anger.

"You asshole!" He says angrily.

"You should of heard them beg for their lives. They screamed and pleaded. Your mother and sisters moaned like whores as I violated them with a stick. I even let your brother watch. At his young age I doubt he understood what was going on but enjoyed the show." Shingi explains as he closes the gates.

"How dare you drag them into this!" Raijin says.

"When I was finished they begged me for more. They pleaded and swore the aligence to me if I would screw them again. How could I refuse that offer. So I heated up a few metal bars and violated them with those." Shingi explains calmly.

Raijin flies into a rage and attacks Shingi who calmly smashes Raijin's hands with his sheathed sword. In the blink of an eye Shingi is standing behind Rajin and Raijin is standing perfectly still.

Large dents appear one by one as well as broken bones popping out through his skin all over.

Raijin falls to his knees and then to the side.

"Go on. Scream for me. Just like your family did." Shingi whispers just before Raijin lets out a blood curdling scream of agonizing pain.

Roswell, Shear, and Kogamaru all rush through the gates and stop instantly.

"What the hell happened here?" Kogamaru asks.

"What did he do to deserve this?" Roswell asks.

"I got tired of his untouchable attitude so I proved him wrong." Shingi says and pushes his way through the other Lords.

"AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" Raijin screams as his cheeks start tearing apart. They stop as it reaches the joint where his jaw connects to his skull.

"Why is the ground white?" Shear asks.

Kogamaru picks some of it up and examines it.

"It's salt." He says.

Raijin lays on the ground writhing in pain as more cuts appear all over his body. For nearly 3 hours cuts appear and he squirms on the ground. Finally a cut appears across his throat and he slowly bleeds to death.


Koji stands in the crowd and watches everything. He quietly leaves and goes back to the Human Realm.

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