Jump to User:

myOtaku.com: Roiben


Sunday, September 4, 2005


   Thanx and Story time! Weet Woo

Dear Friends,


Hey you guys!

Well I said that I would be doing this like every month when I first started and well I’m sorry
I haven’t kept my word!

I WOULD LIKE TO THAN ALL THE PEOPLE THAT HELPED ME WITH MY SITE FROM WHEN I FIRST STARTED TO NOW!

Kk well yeah

Well on Friday MoonOfDarkness slept over for the first time!
Lol
Yeah

It was fun tough we didn’t pull an all nighter we stayed up till 1 lol
Yeah it was fun!

Yesterday I went to the DQ and I got a blizzard then when I was walking home with MoonOfDarkness
We found this lost dog!
It was soo cute but the fricken little thing was hyper!
Lol
It was soo funny!
And well we read it’s tags and it’s name was Ruby the weird thing was that the dog was a Guy!
Yeah it was weird!
I was very confused!

Then after that we called the owner and there was no answer so we left a message then I went to the centennial Street Festival
It was soo Boring!!!
There was nothing there!
and I felt so bad for this little kid
He was a part of one of the street acts and he had pantyhose (Sp?) tied to his head!!!
It was soo funny but the kid is gonna be scared for life lol!!!!

Then I came home and I find out that the dog live right across the street from us!
I was like WTF!
Don’t the owners keep an eye on their pets!
But yeah I had a good laugh about it!

Then I come home and I have to go pee
And my Step dad started yelling at me
“What the hell are you doing in the bathroom!”
I was like
“ I have to go pee!”
Then he was like
“With the phone in the bathroom!?”
“WTF I don’t have the phone! It’s on the charger!”
Yeah it was funny
But I was pissed
Lol
So now I am sitting here typing this and well yeahz
I am listening to My Chemical Romance!
And I am writing some more to the story that I posted a little while ago
And I think that I am gonna put it up here lol

Well yeah someone dies!
YAYZ! Lol sorry it’s not a really gory death but heheh it’s funny
Yeah I find death to be funny when it is in stories and not in real life
Kk well
Here is the first part that I posted for all of you that haven’t read it yet and then under it will be the part that I wrote last night and a couple minutes ago for all of you that have read the first part that I wrote
^_~
See it is that simple!
Lol
(BTW I need a title for my story would anyone be willing to help think of one for me! and it is really really long i'm sorry but yeah..........)



Prologue
>>>>> Violet Taylor felt something cold on the back of her neck and spun around trying to grab whatever had touched her. She was shocked at the sound of whatever it was hitting the gravel ground of the park. To see the Ice cream sandwich still on it's wrapped on the gravel. Behind her stood Sarah arms flying around at the sight of the ice cream on the ground.
Sarah laughed. "Look what you have done to the poor Ice Cream! What the hell did it ever do to you to deserve such a horrible cruel fait?”
"Sorry” Violet mocked as she picked up the Ice Cream Sandwich and unwrapped it from it white wax paper jacket.” Five second rule.” she added as she took a bite.

Violet sat down on a plastic grey sing seat. Looking like a guy in her oversized baggy jeans and extra large T-shirt. Her short glossy black hair and eyes out lined with black and purple.
Sarah sat beside her. Arms wrapped with red ribbons that were tied at the tops of her arms. Her long pale legs covered by thin thigh (no clue how to spell it lol) high socks and black Chuck Taylor High Tops. Her long green hair put up in to Pigtails at the side of her head.
"So why the hell are you here. It's after 4 shouldn't you be off with Dan by now?" Violet commented as she gazed at Sarah, her watch, then Sarah again.
"That fucking Fag! Nope Not Anymore! He’s so fucked up right now that it's gotten to the point where I can't stand him!"
Violet rolled her eyes but then smiled at the fact that Sarah was saying such a thing. Violet and Sarah had been friends their entire lives and Violet knew that tomorrow Sarah's outlook on her boyfriend Dan would change completely.
Violet Grabbed the Metal Chains of the swing and leaned back so that her head was almost touching the Gravel. Sarah was leaned forward carefully avoiding the metal with her back hunched, hands on the ground and Neon green hair hiding her face.


>>>>> “What colour should I dye it next?” Sarah pushed the hair out of her face as she let out a sigh.
“ Dye what? What colour?”
“My hair dumbass! I’ve already dyed it pink, black, orange, purple, blue and now green, so what is next?”
“Red…Blood Red!”
Sarah laughed “What is it with you and Blood Red these days?”
“ Fine if you don’t like that idea then…how about…Neon Red? Does that sound good?”
“Sounds good to me!” Sarah laughed as she dragged her feet along the gravel, creating puffs of grey dust to stir up and cloud the colour of her high tops.

Violet sat up and filled her mouth with what remained of the ice cream sandwich, then stood up, still holding on to the chains of the swing, starring out at the sunset, mumbling things to herself that Sarah couldn’t hear.
“Hey Vi I’m gonna head home now okay?” Sarah muttered as she stood up and dusted off her shoes.
“Yeah okay. Call me when you get to your house.” Violet yelled as Sarah took off through the gravel then the grass and finally the road.

The Car finally came to a stop. It’s front bumper dented in. The driver in shock as he stumbled out of the car door and onto the road. Smears of blood scattered beneath him. Sarah’s cold, lifeless body on the ground as if it were a rag doll. Violet ran out onto the street as fast as she could stumbling on the grass, then picking up the lifeless corpse, holding it close to her body. The bloody mess that was once Sarah’s hair, completely Blood red now. Totally transformed for the green that it use to be.

“Shit holy shit! What the hell did you do to her!?!” Violet screamed at the top of her lungs, while running her trembling fingers through Sarah’s hair. Filled with rage and setting the corpse down Violet ran towards the driver grabbing him by the shoulders. She could se that there were tears running down his face.
“Answer me damn it!” Violet shrieked.
The driver lifted up his head.
Shock ran through Violet’s mind and suddenly all the rage was gone and in it’s place was fear.
“Violet what have I done to her?! I’m sorry I…I-I didn’t mean to!” His voice cloaked in shock as he ran over to the body.
“Dan…” Tears starting to form from her eyes.
“I didn’t mean to…I didn’t…I’m sorry. I’m sorry”


Chapter One
>>>>> Those were the last moments that Violet and Dan Had spent with Sarah. It had been four days since then and everyone in the L.A. had read it in the papers or had been told about it by means of the grape vine. Eyes followed Violet everywhere she went. Whispers lingering behind her like a curse. Violet had now dyed her hair Green and wore high tops since that day. Then went on with her life like nothing had happened.

She saw the many glares given to her by the people that attended Sarah’s Funeral and she heard the things people had said. She didn’t cry when she had seen the casket from the back of the doors…only when she had saw Dan sitting silently in the front row, starring into the beyond. Walking up to the casket and saying her last words to Sarah before her body was carried off to the crematorium, Violet placed the ice cream wrapper in the casket, and then quickly ran outside.

“She looked peaceful…” Dan had said to her after the service. “ I’m really sorry Vi.”
“It’s okay I should be saying that to you after all she was your girlfriend.”

Walking home through the very park where the accident had happened Violet relived the event. Seeing her body hit then fall to the ground. Finding herself once again on the swing. Thinking of the last thing she had said to her.
“Goodbye..” Violet murdered and listened as the wind carried her voice of into the distance in the hopes that it would reach Sarah……………..

*************************************************

Okay well yeahz that is how far I have gotten I shall write more and then if you want I shall post it!
If you guys have any ideas on what I can add to the story to make it more interesting please tell me!
I would love to hear what you guys have to say!
Well yeah
I’m off to watch Family Guy so fare thee well!



~ROIBEN~



Comments (7)

« Home