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Tuesday, February 27, 2007


   Mary-Sue Test for Naruto OCs
*Copy paste from a Naruto Mary-Sue Litmus Test*

Does the OC become a fourth team member?
Is the OC's love interest a member of the team they're on?
Is everyone else on the team either jealous or in love with the OC as well?

Does the OC claim to be too good to need a team?

Is the OC there primarily to be the love interest of a canon character?

Is any other, canon love interest of the canon character dealt away with or turned into a complete bitch/bastard in order to facilitate the canon character and OC forming a relationship?
If you insist that Sakura/Ino/Hinata/whoever was a complete raging bitch before, stop here.

Does the OC win every battle they're in?
Except when the time comes for them to be saved by their love interest?

Was the OC Gaara or Narutos 'only friend' when they were a child?

Bloodline Abilities:
Does the OC have a new bloodline limit or ability that has never shown up in canon before?
Is it a bloodline limit or ability to completely pwn all others--ability to copy other bloodline limits, ability to create an army out of thin air, ability to stop time, Kyukaku (the hybrid of Kyuubi and Shukaku), so on and so forth?

Is the OC a demon or a half-demon?

That thus needs Naruto or Gaara to understand them?
If the OC is a full demon, do they claim to be the mate of either Kyuubi or Shukaku?

Does the OC have cat/dog ears and/or a tail?
That don't detract from their beauty in any way?

Their Past:
Does the OC have a traumatic past?

Does the OC constantly bring attention back to their angsty past? (Ie: "I'd enjoy the sunset...BUT I CAN'T BECAUSE I'M IMMORTAL, OH NOES!")
Does the OC not react to their traumatic past in ways that a real person would? Do research on psychological scarring if youre not sure. No, psychological scarring isn't the same as wangsting.

Has the OC attained the rank of genin/chuunin/jounin at an extremely young/exceptional age?
Does the OC refer to A or S-class missions as 'easy'?

Give yourself one point per 'yes' answer unless otherwise indicated. Be honest--if you're not, you'll never improve. A few points doesn't necessarily make a Mary Sue. Remember that canon females can be turned into Sues as well

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