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Friday, September 23, 2005


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Neko: Hi people!

Yukina #8: -bows- Hello everbody.

Hiei #8: Hn.

Neko: Well, yesterday was alright I didn't really do anything. I didn't get my hwk done either ^^;. So I get to turn it in today but it will have 5 pts taken off for being late but it doesn't bother me any ^^.

Hiei #8: If you wouldn't of waited to do it till the last moment you could have had it done it time, so stop complaining.

Neko: Hehe your right.

Hiei #8: Of course I am.

Neko: -sarcasticly says- Cause your always right.

Hiei #8: Hn.

Neko: I'm pretty happy today. I get to take my road test so I might get my licence soon!! And today is Sirit Day at school. We get out of school early and we have a prep assembely which should be intertaining ^^.

Hiei #8: I don't see how watching the idiots in your school make fools of them selve is intertaining.

Neko: Maybe I should make you come with me so someone will sit with me and I wont be sitting alone.

Hiei #8: You couldn't get me to one of those if you tied me up and put one of those ridiculous collars on me again.

Neko: Hehe, anyways most of you wanted to read the fanfiction that I wrote so I shall post up the first chapter for you!! Please don't be intimadated by the size of my post because of it. Well here goes!

Chapter 1


Girl: Suku? Suku!
Boy: -snaps out of his thoughts and looks at the girl, smiles- Oh sorry, what did you want?
Girl: -blushes- Well Suku, I just wanted to know if maybe you wanted to come and hang out after school today?
Suku: -smiles kindly- I’m sorry, but I can’t.
Girl: What? Why not? Did your parents ground you? That’s probably it. Man, parents can be such a pain.
Suku: No, it’s nothing like that. I just have other plans.
Girl: Oh… Well maybe another time.
Suku: -smiles- That would be great.
Girl: Really?!
Suku: -nods- Perhaps next week sometime.
Girl: -grins- Okay!! See you then! –runs off-
Suku: -slightly frowns and sighs- If she only knew...
After School when he arrives at home
Suku: -sets his books down and goes outside, through the back- Mom! Dad! I’m home! –walks in the woods a bit and stops at two big rocks and prays. Gets up and walks back in the house and cleans up the house a little bit, then does his homework-
That night
Suku: -walks outside and looks up at the stars- I’m not sure I can do this... Mom, dad, why? Why did you have to...
~Flashback~
Mom: Suku! Go in the house and don’t come out!
Child Suku: But mom!
Mom: NOW!
Child Suku: -runs in the house-
Demon: I will kill the cursed one!
Dad: You’ll have to get through us first!
Child Suku: -watching from in the house and sees his parents defeat the demon and watched it disappear, then both his parents collapsed on the ground in a puddle of their own blood- Mom! Dad! –runs out to them, feels for a pulse, but there is none-
~End Flashback~
Suku: -puts his hand on his face- I should have saved them… Why was I so weak?... –starts crying- Why did I have to let them die?! I should have helped them. But I was too afraid.
Voice: You know, you should be over this by now.
Suku: Leave me alone Katsu. I don’t need a lecture right now.
Katsu: That’s usually when you need them the most. –comes next to him and puts his hand on his shoulder them smiles-
Suku: -sighs-
Katsu: Listen, it wasn’t your fault. You’re parents were protecting you. That’s just what parents do.
Suku: But, if they would have handed me over, they would still be here... alive. Probably happy.
Katsu: You’re an idiot!
Suku: -looks at him-
Katsu: They would never have done that because they love you! And they would be miserable if you were killed!
Suku: -looks down- You’re right. It’s just--
Katsu: -puts his hand on his shoulder- You don’t have to explain. Just cheer up and don’t think that way anymore. –smiles-
Suku: -smiles and nods- Thanks Katsu
Katsu: -thumbs up- Anytime!
Suku: So, what are you doing here anyways, Katsu?
Katsu: Hm? Oh! I decided to come to your place and heal up a little bit. It isn’t exactly safe to show that you’re weak in Demon World. With no one there to protect you from an attack.
Suku: How is it there right now anyways? I haven’t been there in a long time.
Katsu: It’s the same as it has always been. And Suku...
Suku: What?
Katsu: You’d better not ever go back to Demon World again.
Suku: Come on, Katsu! I’m sure everyone has forgotten about the curse by now.
Katsu: You shouldn’t assume things like that. That’s what gets you killed.
Suku: I’m probably right though.
Katsu: -grabs him by the collar of this shirt and picks him up off of the ground, eyes glowing red- I know that tone in your voice. Do NOT go to Demon World ever again!
Suku: -angrily says- Stop acting like this Katsu! You’re not my father!
Katsu: No, but I’m the closest thing that you’ve got –sets him down-
Suku: Just because you were too weak to help your brother doesn’t mean I’m gonna let you treat me like you did him!
Katsu: -eyes get wide then he puts his head down and shuts his eyes- If that’s how you truly feel, than fine. I didn’t mean to bother you. –disappears/ flitters off-
Suku: Wait Katsu! I didn’t mean it! –starts to run after him but slips on something on the floor- Ouch! –looks at what he slipped on and it’s a puddle of blood where Katsu had been standing- No... Katsu...!!!

Alright that is the first chapter of my fanfic... PLEASE tell me what you think!!!

P.S. Hiei, Yukina, and myself will be taking any questions that you want to ask ^^. So please ask away! And I hope you all have a great day!!


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