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Wednesday, August 29, 2007


HOLA MY PCYSO FANS!!! O_O!!
well, okay you're not ALL crazy... but maybe you are? what do i know? XD Anyways.... i'm bored and i'm going to put part of one of my stories on here!! Why? i have no clue. i just feel like it. Gotta problem with it? if you do, read it and see if you still do! XD okay than... here it is!!

There was lightning in the distance. The world around me looked frightening but to my mind, everything seemed calm compared to it. There was rage burning inside my heart.

I realized I wanted to die.

I took off my uniform coat. It revealed a white button down shirt and a red neck tie. I pulled off my sneakers and my socks.

I want to drown myself. Maybe I’ll feel something… for once.

I stepped into the cold raging waters of the river.
Lightning cracked through the sky and the thunder roared. It made my brain feel at home.

Soon I was up to my waist in the water. I grabbed a very heavy rock, barely able to lift it, from the bottom. I tied it around my ankle with my tie.
I felt eyes on me but I didn’t care.

The rock was heavy; I could barely move it at all. I dragged myself out deeper into the water. The rock pulled me down; I didn’t even have enough time to take a breath. The water felt calm and cooling but soon my lungs began to feel pressured. I needed air, NEEDED AIR. I began thrashing, twisting back and forth. Air bubbles came out of my clenched teeth. The carbon dioxide in my body needed out. My lungs burned, needed air. I looked up to surface of the water, too far to reach. I reached out my hand in hopes of maybe, just maybe, making it to the top. No… I didn’t. The burning in my lungs ceased. The last parts and pieces of oxygen leaked out of me. I fell limp under the water; my brown hair, that looked black, floating up above me.

I couldn’t move, couldn’t think, couldn’t… breathe.

I felt strong arms around my waist, pulling me upward. I had blacked out but I could still feel. I felt the knotted tie around my ankle release and slip off. I felt myself being pulled upward, all the way to the surface of the water.

Soon I felt the air once more; it touched my skin and made me feel cold. But my lungs… they would no longer work. Something had filled them… water.

Suddenly I could breathe once again. I took a deep hysterical breath that sounded like wheezing and I began to cough. I coughed the water up and out of my lungs, forcing it out of me.

**Dark-San**

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