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Friday, February 16, 2007


   Keeper of the Innocent...Pt. 5...
I had never been in this apartment. It was a nice, homely place. It was clean and orderly, as if Jacques had hired an interior decorator, and now had a personal maid. "Did you do this yourself?" I questioned. "Yes. I don't like messy apartments," he replied.
I looked over at the couch. Lying on it was the crumpled form of a dark-haired man. I walked over to the couch. Peering at his face, I recognized him. "Alphonse!" I exclaimed. "He was hurt pretty bad. His chest is torn up on the left side, and his left shoulder is dislocated. But the thing that concerns me the most is this mark on his leg." Jacques raised Alphonse's right pant leg. I stared at the mark. It seemed so familiar. Where had I seen this mark?
My crystalline blue eyes moved over Alphonse's body, towards his face. Tears welled up. Jacques began stroking my short, white-blonde hair. "He's not dead, poppet. Only resting." Jacques had a wonderfully soothing British accent. "I know, Jacques. But Alphonse is always so lively. I can't bear to see him like this." I turned into his chest. Even in heels, I only came up to Jacques' armpit. He was a little over six feet tall.
"I need to go back down and tend the bar, Love. You're welcome to stay and watch over him. He should be waking soon." I smiled up at the weathered face of the were. "Thanks, Jacques."

Okay, here I'm going to talk about the plot of my story. Noir knows who the killer is. She just doesn't REMEMBER. Alphonse, though he is the love of Noir's life, is not a main character. He won't be in here much longer. Someone is going to betray Noir. But you won't know who until the end. *evil grin* Someone you might least expect...I'm not sure if they have been introduced yet. I'm not even sure who it is at the moment. This is a murder mystery. I can't wait to find out what the mark is! (I have been writing this in my Pirates of the Caribbean notebook, and I've got 16 and a 1/2 pages. In the notebook, I still haven't gotten to the part where the creatures are revealed.)
Well, gotta go. Oh, the bg is Abarai Renji, Asst. Cpt., 6th Division of the Soul Society. He's from Bleach. He's got a wicked-awesome zanpaku-to. Cause it's like a monkey's tail. Sayonara! LOVE AND PEACE!!!
¤~Excel
¤~~When day turns to night, your mask slides off, and what you're left with is all you are~~¤


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