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Saturday, September 22, 2007





My weekend is not going really well.....gah...Im sick. I hate getting sick! oh well, now I can stay in bed all day and wacth tv. Ha Ha..

Just going to update the story. Sepical thanks to spreading wings, Homsar88, and akebaneamino for keeping it alive. With out commenters like them, this FF would be dead....yeah killed it, then buried it alive. Ha Ha..if that makes any sense...

disclamiers...

1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

part 10...

This chap is HOT!!!!!

“Don’t worry, this village will always be your home.” It was the First Hokage, the man revered not only for his abilities, but for his heart. He was talking to a young boy no more than twelve, the boy's tears sparkled in his fiery red and orange eyes. “Your destiny is with them, they can help you with your… special abilities more than we can.”

“But I don’t want to leave, my friends are here. I want to live here forever.” His tears began to fall down his face, his lower lip quivered but he fought back his torrent of emotions.

“It’s not goodbye my young friend, you can come back whenever you want. You have a Konoha soul so when you return you will be welcomed with open arms.”

“But…” A ninja dressed in blue patted him on the back. His blonde hair fell in front of his right eye, his left eye was the color of the sea and sparkled as if the sun danced off of the ocean’s waves. He had a genuine smile, one that calmed the young warrior and helped ease the tears.

“We’ll be back kid, and guess what.” He wiped a tear out from under Atohi’s eye, “The sooner we train you and the harder you work, the sooner you can come back to see your friends. So the faster we get going the sooner you get to come back here.” Atohi nodded, took one last look at his Hokage, then turned and walked with the man in blue into a thick fog.

“Hey kid, I want to show you something I’ve been working on, hold on tight.” With that, the blonde man jumped into the mist faster than the strike of a snake.

“He will get training from people like himself, this is all I can do for him. Good luck Atohi, you’ll always be my star pupil.” The Hokage turned and walked toward town, “I’ll see you again, someday.”

* * *

“Naruto, come quick!”

It was the loudest Naruto had ever heard Hinata speak, Naruto woke up and immediately ran towards the noise. She was deep into the castle, the part they hadn’t yet explored. A mix of excitement and fear filled his gut as he wondered what she found.

“Where are you? I can’t see through the mist.” In his excitement, he failed to notice how out of place the mist was, or how the smell was so familiar. Then, he saw the light at the end of the tunnel. It was faint, but he could make out the shape of a doorway and he immediately ran towards it.

Then the mist cleared and revealed a hot spring. There was Hinata, her face stuck in an overjoyed expression as she dipped her feet into the water. “The water is perfect, I’ve missed my bath so much.”
She turned and looked into Naruto’s eyes, but soon turned bright red and let her gaze fall to the floor. “Can we… can we… take a bath?”

Naruto sighed, he hadn’t thought about her statement earlier about being with him much. But he looked at her, she was so beautiful with her feet dangling playfully into the water, maybe she was the family he needed. “Yes, I’d love to.”

He took off his shirt, which made her turn a brighter shade of red and then began to walk towards the water. “Hinata, you might want to look away.” She nodded but didn’t move her head, he could tell she was still watching from the corner of her eye. Oh well, he thought, here goes nothing. He took off his pants, slowly at first but then shoved his embarrassment into the depths of his being and completely stepped out of his clothing.

He started walking into the water, little by little he let himself get deeper into the water, and little by little Hinata’s gaze crept over only to rest on Naruto’s form. When he was waist deep in the water he found a place to sit down, then turned to face her. “Sorry if I was too…”

“No, I don’t mind.” She smiled uncontrollably and stared off into the nothing in the corner of the room. “I guess, if I saw Naruto…”

She didn’t finish her statement before she began taking off her shirt. Naruto couldn’t help but stare in awe as she slowly showed more of her body. Her skin was perfect, even from a distance it looked soft and had a seducing creamy color, she looked like a goddess. As she revealed more, Naruto could see the curves of her body. She started looking remarkably feminine, the curves of her back and stomach and… chest.

Then she started pulling her pants off of her hips, the curves continued and Naruto’s heart began to flutter. When the clothes were fully off, Naruto could barely breathe as he watched her.

“I…I don’t know if I’m attractive. Thank you for not laughing.”

He shook his head, “You are far from unattractive.” He was in such awe that his awkwardness was completely forgotten, instead he had a feeling in the pit of his stomach that compelled him to get closer to her. He fought it though, trying to force himself back into reason.

She walked into the water, and cautiously made her way towards Naruto. She sat beside him and allowed her leg to touch his, then, her shoulder against his. Naruto let his instinct take over and turned to face her, wrapping his arms around her waist and pulled her towards him.

Her chest touched his, one of Hinata's arms began wrapping around his waist and the other drifted to the back of his head. She ran her fingers through his hair and looked deeply into his eyes as he stared back into hers. “Hinata, I think I…” But she made the first move. She pulled him into her. Their hearts were beating in their ears, their eyes closed, and finally their lips met.

Ha Ha....was that to much for you children??? Ha Ha

comment to keep this alive please

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