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Thursday, August 30, 2007





Oh please dont be mad at me!! Please dont be!!! I know I said that I would update the story daily, but it was kinda hard this week with a project and 2 essays this week. And lets not forget all the testing going on right now. Forgive me? Please?

Well, if you fogived me, you are still reading on!!! Whoo hoo!!! For those still reading!!! I thanks you greatly!! Before i post the disclamiers, I posted new art!!! take a look at it please, and thanks for commenting and voting on it already Homsar-chan!! You're the best.

SUPERSAIYANJOUNIN!!! i CAN NOT PM YOU ANYMORE!! MAKE SOME ROOM PLEASE. Also, Hi. :) lol

kay...the disclamiers, oh wait, before that...
ZodiacNinja thanks for commenting this and keeping it alive!!!

Kay. NOW FOR REALS...

the disclamiers.

1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

Part 5
chapter... whatever:

There were no birds to signify morning’s arrival, and only dim, filtered light that crept through the small hole offered any solace to Hinata’s eyes. She was waking from a dream only to find herself in another, she was still sleeping with Naruto. His breathing was soft and almost nonexistent so that she had to stuggle to hear the soft, wordless whispers of his breath.

She crept silently out of the blanket and, in turn, from his loving embrace. She stared back at his peaceful form as he stirred in his sleep. He was so innocent with his mouth partly open and his body entangled in a maze of cloth.

After appreciating him for a moment longer, she continued her journey to his supplies and collected the proper wood for a small fire. Maybe he was wiser than she remembered, or maybe just lucky, but he had gotten the correct wood for the campfire. It was perfect for their situation, low smoke production and it burned slowly so it would last longer. She smiled, maybe underneath all of his childish behavior he really is a great ninja.

She began to roast some of the trout. Although the supplies were no where close to her normal mediums, she had a certain instinct when it came to cooking. It didn’t take long for a half conscious Naruto to rise from the blankets to join her by the fire. The ate in a comfortable silence, neither willing to break the perfect quiet of their temporary home.

Even after the meal, the sat by the fire until the embers began to glow and the cold of the cave once again became reality. And it was the notoriously loud ninja who finally began the conversation.

“I think we should be stuck here for a while. We’ll be alright with the food I collected but what about… um… privacy matters” Naruto blushed and turned his vision to the side, too embarrassed to make eye contact. After training for two years with Jiraiya, he had learned a lot (perhaps too much) about adult situations. He had been sneaking in to women’s baths for years, but now that he was rocketing into his adolescence, the sight of women had become a lot less nonchalant.

“If you’d like, I can separate the cave into two rooms and you can have the blanket…” He looked back at her, trying to smile and act the part of the gentleman, “I can live without a blanket, it’ll be nothing compared to being Hokage.”

“I…well… if it’s Naruto-kun… I really don’t mind.” Hinata was bright red, but she had already slept with him, and she was determined to use this opportunity to get closer to him, to kiss him, and to… she closed her eyes in embarassment. “Naruto can… I just…”

“Huh? Hinata, are you okay? You’re face is red, are you sick?” She looked at him, trying to gather her strength.

“No, I’m fine, I just… I want to be with Naruto-kun.” It took all of her nerve to summon those words. But she couldn’t live with herself if she hadn’t said it. He had a blank look on his face, and she began to feel the sting of rejection. But his reply eased her of her fear.

“But we are already together Hinata.” She smiled, maybe it was better to wait anyway.

“I guess you’re right. Sorry, I wasn’t thinking.” She sighed half of relief and half disappointment. She would have to explain to him soon, she would have to tell him how much she loved him. But rushing into things was never wise, this was for the best.

“Don’t worry Hinata, I’ll explore the cave and see if there are any more rooms, right after I nap off the delicious breckfast.” And with that, he lay down onto the floor and closed his eyes.

Naruto-kun, please love me back. Maybe not right away, but please.

She sat down next to him, pulled the blanket over the two of them, but this time she didn’t allow herself to touch him. She could be patient, she had already waited for him all of her life, what was another few days?

* * *
He knew what she meant. He was not as stupid as when he was a child, he knew exactly what “I want to be with you meant.” He had to think about it.

She was very pretty, he had always found her odd and quiet but she was always there for him in a pinch. Like the time she made medicine for him in the preliminary rounds of the chuunin exams. In fact, the whole idea of being her boyfriend seemed to fit, to be so right, so perfect. But after such a long obsession with his pink haired teammate, he just didn’t really feel like moving on.

It was strange, he knew he could never have Sakura, she was as set on having Sasuke as Naruto was on having her. But recently, his devotion to her had waned. She was someone he could never have, maybe he never even really wanted her.

He had always wanted to have friends, to be with people, to have a family. And he knew he loved Sakura, but was his craving for love turning his feelings into insanity. He loved her like a sister, someone to pick on, to joke with, but that was like the love of a sibling.

His feelings for Hinata were somehow different. For some reason his stomach was making knots whenever he thought of her changing or staying close to her for warmth. Was it awkwardness, or was it something he’d never felt before? I’ll give it time, maybe I can learn to love Hinata too.

And on that note he stood up, stretched his limbs, and went to explore the cave. He turned to the still form beside him and smiled, “I’m going to go explore the cave,” he was sure she was asleep but he whispered to her anyway, “I want to think about things, maybe I want to be with you too.” He tucked the blanket under her and walked off to the unexplored dark end of the cavern. Unbeknownst to him, Hinata’s heart was now pounding into her ears as an uncontrollable smile overtook her face.

“…be with me too.”

Miss Any of the other 4 chapters (?) or just want to reread them again? Then Pm me!! Ill send them to you or something. Yeah.

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