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Sigh.... School was such a drag today. It felt as if time was going in slow paste. The stupid clock hanging in every room didnt help me either, I kept looking up at it, and every time I did It seemed to mock me by going even slower!!! I know that is not possible, but whatever. The fact that the dumb ticking every second didnt help my bordom, it only annoyed me!! T.T :sob: But lets not let that bring me down today, Right?! Gots to stay poseitive!! (Thats not who you spell it huh? Its ok, tell me the truth!) But there was one good thing about today! Oh yes! One very good thing indeed!!! Hee hee hee... Sorry, But I cant tell you, It's a sercert. X3 Anywho, I want to thank Sesshomaru22212 for doing exactly what I asked. Commenting on the NaruHina FF!!! So thak you very much!!! ^^ I will try by very best to update it every day, If that is possible. Again I am going to post the disclamiers. I don't want to get sued or anthing! Kay! Here they are!!

1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

Chap 2!!!!


The night was perfect, even though Hinata fainted in front of Naruto. She was embarrassed about passing out at first but Naruto didn’t even give it any further mention. After he woke her up, Hinata tried to quickly divert his attention by returning to the topic of discussion before he grabbed her hand, ramen. Naruto immediately forgot everything as she walked him down the street to a night time ramen shop on the other end of town.

Naruto was so distracted by the discovery of a new ramen shop that he didn’t even notice the constant shade of red that graced Hinata’s cheeks all night long. As they ate, Naruto mentioned a perverted teacher of his, and how he was going to become the next Hokage, but Hinata kept finding herself drifting off and staring into space. She stared at his cheek, where earlier tonight her lips had been, and she silently sighed in longing to kiss him again.

She was disappointed when the sun came up and she had to go home and sneak in before her father awoke wondering where she was, she wanted the night to last forever. So she stuttered a quick goodbye and ran off towards her home.

The entire remainder of the day was nothing special, just training with Kiba and Shino-kun until lunch, then her personal training with Kurenai sensei in the afternoon. Hinata could have sworn she saw some strange glances from her teacher, and maybe even a soft giggle, but other than that it was a very normal day. She went home, got as much sleep as she could after dinner, then got up silently to do her midnight training.

She went to a waterfall on the outskirts of town where she wouldn’t be bothered and stepped onto the water. She began moving with the flow of the water, letting her soul and her body connect into one being. She created stances, attacks, and blocks that flowed with the water, she spun when it spun, attacked when it splashed. With the help of the water, she had created a style that fit well with her body type, her families famed gentle fist style seemed to foreign to her body and this felt so…right.

But her training was cut short by a dull thud on the back of her neck, the last thing she saw before drifting into unconciousness were two fiery orange and red eyes on a face almost completely covered in black.

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Naruto was able to sleep well that night, he had dreams of the night time ramen shop. It was weird though, because in his dream he left the ramen shop accompanied by a fire bird. And after he paid his bill, he and the bird flew into the night. They were looking for something, but he didn’t know what it was. But the bird kept flying so all Naruto could do was fly and search right alongside him.

They stopped in a forest but when Naruto landed on the ground, the bird was no
where to be seen. It seemed like he stayed there forever, stuck in the forest;, until finally a girls voice called through the trees. “Naruto-kun!” He recognized the voice, was it Sakura-san…no…it was much softer.

At that moment, Naruto snapped himself awake. His heart was pounding as hard as when he fought Sasuke, but why. He looked around his room, there was a man standing in the shadows in the corner of his room. It was so dark that the man looked like a shadow too, except for his burning red and orange eyes. Naruto tried to move but he couldn’t, then he tried to yell for help but his voice wouldn’t make a noise. Those eyes were so frightening that Naruto’s entire body was petrified.

It was the first time in his life that Naruto had felt this much fear, those demon eyes were moving, glowing like fire itself. The eyes glared angrily and the stare bore into his soul, Naruto wanted to scream, but he couldn’t move. He felt so helpless. Then the man began to move slowly closer and closer. By the time he reached naruto, white teath in the shape of an evil grin appeared from the shadow’s face.

Naruto then passed out, it might have been fear, it might have been a strike from the shadow that was faster than Naruto’s eyes could follow, but it didn’t matter. He didn’t dream this time, it was just darkness, fear and darkness. He awoke in a forest, the same forest where the girl had called out to him.

No one was there, Naruto could move again but very clumsily. He stumbled to his feet, then fell over from a lightheaded rush. He felt like he had been drugged, his entire body moved in slow motion and his mind seemed to be in a similar state. So instead of trying to move, he assessed the situation.

He was in a forest he didn’t know, the trees had needles instead of leaves so he assumed he was in the northern mountains. Beyond that he had no idea what to think, all he could feel was fear. There was a small fire in the center of the clearing in which he laid, it was both a gift and a curse, because along with the little illumination it gave him, it also made it impossible to see very far into the shadows beyond the trees.

He remembered a lesson that Kakashi had taught him on one of his missions, it was about the circle of illumination. He had Sakura start a fire in the woods, then he and naruto stood in the shadows and watched her, they were not very far away but Sakura still didn’t seem to notice them. Kakashi explained that this was something called the circle of illumination. Since they were outside of the light looking in, they could see not only everything lit up by the fire, but also everything in the shadows around them because their eyes were adjusted to the dark. But since Sakura’s eyes were adjusted to the light, she could only see things directly lit up by the fire.

He knew that anything beyond the shadows of the trees could easily spy on his without him being any the wiser, and he assumed that was the plan of his attacker as well. He stared suspiciously into the night, trying to regain his body movement by twitching his mucles and bringing them slowly back to life. By the time he had the ability to walk over to the fire to put it out, it was already dying down to smoking embers and the suns rays were coloring the sky a light shade of blue.

Morning was here, and Naruto didn’t want to stick around to find out what the demon eyed ninja had in store for him. He jumped into the trees and was immediately shot back. He must have set up a barrier around this whole place, He looked down at his now scorched clothes, a fire barrier. After hitting the barrier, Naruto was paralyzed again, but this time from pure pain. He drifted into unconsciousness from the excruciating pain, his mind was shutting down automatically. Oh well, that fox will heal me by the time I wake up, he always does.

AND IF YOU HAPPENED TO MISS ANY OF THESE AWESOME WRITTEN CHAPTERS, DONT HESATE TO PM TO POST IT AGAIN, CAUSE I WILL!!!

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