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Thursday, August 23, 2007


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Wow, It has been a while sence I updated, Hasnt it? well sorry about that, me starting school and all has kept me away for quit some time now. But I do visit your sites every chance that I get! So dont say that i never swing by to say Hi anymores, cause I do!! anyways, I started school this Monday, on the 20th to be exact. I couldn't belive summer vaction went by so fast! It was like one minute school work, the bell rings and now you are a free bird, then your alram clock goes off to let you know school starts. Eh...can't I just push the snooze botton? Well starting school isn't that bad I guess, it keeps me busy. In fact, I get so busy that I no longer have time to talk to anyone here on theO! :gasp!: OoO I hate you school....Can you belive that my best friend has no classes with me?!?! Thats so sad! I guess it is time for new friends! Again,....I got a little to much hyper about posting, that I didn't feed my Doggies...be right back...[insert entertaning music here]....ok, anywhow, I found this really great FF or NaruHina that i thought my fellow otakus might enjoy reading. Before i start posting this, I want to say alot of disclamiers....
1. I am not calling this FF of NaruHina mine.
2. I do not take credit of Naruto or Hinata, that belongs to the creator of this series.
3. This FF belongs to Brant Kogasu on Narutofan fourms.
4. the person who is posting this on their site (he got permission) is Sword Man on Narutofan fourms.
5. If you want to keep this alive comment!!!
6. It contains *NAH NAH* if you know what i mean, so look away children!
7. Hi. :)
8. Enjoy!!

This Fanfic is not my its a friends his name on the Narutofan fourm is Brant Kogasu.
Enjoy this is one of my favs FF



well, here's chapter 1:

The rain poured down on Naruto’s head, the icy cold water gave him a headache, but that didn’t matter. He was standing on the top of his apartment, he watched the town of Konoha through the thick blanket of rain. The lights of nightlife seemed blurry, it was probably the downpour, but it felt to Naruto more like the beginning of a dream. He watched until he began to notice his body shivering, then he went back inside.

His room was dark and cold, not as cold as outside, but enough to see his breath in front of his face. But the reason Naruto preferred the storm outside was because out there was the town of Konoha, with people everywhere, but in his room there was only loneliness. He couldn’t count how many times he’d dreamt of a cold, rainy night like this, except in his dreams, Sakura kept him warm. She would be in her sleeping clothes, as would Naruto, and they would huddle together under his blankets whispering in eachother’s ears about how warm it was when they were together.

Naruto smiled at the thought, but the smile soon faded as the reality of his silent room jumped back into his sight. He decided that this loneliness was too much to handle tonight, so he left to see if there was a late night ramen shop somewhere in the blur of lights downtown. He grabbed his bright orange clothes, his forehead protector, and his frog purse and ran from the apartment in a hurry.

As he ran down the street, mud splashed the bottom of his pants, dampening them and numbing the bottoms of his feet. He didn’t have to run, but running made him feel better about the night. Maybe it was the way everything went past him so fast and kept him alert, or maybe it made him feel like what he was doing had purpose and that he was needed, it didn’t matter either way.

He slowed down when he saw some ANBU members jump onto a rooftop nearby, he didn’t want to draw unneeded attention to himself. He was close to the lights now, he was in the bloodline district, at least that was Naruto’s title for the part of town where the clans congregated. They were only there because that was where the mansions were built, Naruto could never imagine the life-styles in the huge houses, he had spent his whole life in a tiny one-room apartment with one window.

Finally he reached the lights, he didn’t see any ramen shops open, the Ichiraku was closed as well, so he just found a spot beneath an awning that was free of rain and closed his eyes. He must have fallen asleep, but not for very long because he awoke to the warm touch of skin on his cheek and the sky was still dark and rainy. Naruto slowly regained his bearings, he rubbed the sleep from his eyes, yawned and stretched before gazing at whoever woke him up. To his great surprise, Hinata sat a few feet from him, her face bright red and her mouth quickly stumbling over the words “I’m sorry” over and over again.


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Hinata was staring out of her window, the rain was pouring, mirroring her mood. She wanted to sneak outside tonight to train in the waterfall. But if she was found drenched from head to toe and sneezing from a cold, her father would probably find out about her nightly wanderings and put an abrupt end to them. She sighed, looked at the muddy street, watched as the raindrops bounced off of the puddles, and rested her head on her hand.

I wonder what Naruto is doing, she thought to herself, she dared not speak her thoughts in fear of awaking a family member. It’s not that she would be in trouble, it was just that she wanted to be comforted in the dark quiet of her room. She must have stayed like that for hours, watching the streets until a blur of orange snapped her back from her trance.

What is Naruto doing up this late? She mused over the idea of him looking for her, that was nothing but a dream though. He was running, I wonder if he’s okay, maybe I should find out. She got up from her bed, silently dressed herself in her coat and pulled up the floorboards to reveal her normal nightly escape route.

She ran after him and watched him look around at the lights, he walked over to his favorite ramen shop, but it was closed, so he just sat next to a building and fell asleep. Hinata hoped her wasn’t getting hypothermia, she waited for a while but he never re-opened his eyes. Fueled by her worry for him, she ran from her hiding place to see if he was alright.

She tried talking to him, but he never woke up, so she finally built up the courage to touch him. She reached her hand out, she was going to grab his jacket but her heart was pounding at the sight of his cute rosy red cheeks with the whisker scars and she accidentally touched his cheek. Her heart was pounding in her ears as her hand remained on his cheek, he didn’t wake up. She was frozen, she was probably bright red with embarrassment, but it felt so good to feel Naruto’s skin on her fingertips.

Time slowed down and the rain disappeared from her mind, the world was filled with only her and her blonde-haired, blue eyed icon. She was so enveloped in the moment that she barely noticed the nudge on her back that moved her face nearer to Naruto’s. Before she noticed, her lips were touching where her hand was just a moment before.

Sitting up quickly and closing her eyes, she began repeating sorry over and over. “Sorry about what Hinata.” Naruto’s blue eyes stared at her half-open, he was blinking slowly, the last remnants of sleep’s soothing song disappearing to make way for the hush of the rain. “What are you doing here, it’s late.”

She blushed again, kissing you in your sleep, but she couldn’t tell naruto the truth. “Um…I…I was getting some…milk.” It was a terrible lie and she knew it, but somehow, he fell for it.

“That’s cool, I was going to get some ramen but everything’s closed,” He closed his eyes in a moment of thought, he smiled “Hey, you live around here right, do you know anywhere I could get ramen this late at night.” She nodded, she really did know a place but she wasn’t really replying to his question, she was brought back into a trance from the thought of her lips on his cheek.

“Alright let’s go!” He grabbed her hand to help her up and Hinata began to faint, he’s holding my hand, he’s holding my hand, he’s holding my hand!!!! And with that, she fell to the ground unconscious.

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