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Tuesday, February 8, 2005


So sleepy
Man I'm sleepy but I've still got an hour of tv to watch, Inuyasha and Big O. It's been rainy here all day and I got soaked going to class, and afterwards I didn't want to go to the gym so now I feel bad for not lifting weights. Anyway back to the point of this post. I need some opinions. I'm having trouble with my story, Its about one mans role in a war against demons. It has four arcs and I started at the beggining (which makes sense) but the beggining is just introduction and kinda slow no real fights happen until the end of it. Originally when I first came up with the idea for this it started at the third arc, but I have since added all of the back story which helps because otherwise some of the characters just show up out of nowhere, but its just so hard to flesh out with dialog. Anyway so does everybody think I should start with the 1st arc or the 3rd.
(ok I just watched inuyasha so this post took a while)

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