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Saturday, December 23, 2006


Chapter7:Noahsa's decesion


Katema finally landed on the angelic base way in the sky within the clouds.

Angel:WHo is he Katema?You know humans are not permitted here.

Katema:Dont worry he is not a human but one of the five aura controllers and hes injured.

Angel:HE IS A AURA CONTROLLER!!!!

Katema:Yes now tend to his wounds i must go speak witht the queen herself there is a matter that must be attended to.

Angel:Yes madam!

Katema:Btw if a hair is harmed on his head then i will destroy whoever did it!

Angel:ye...ye...yes maam.

Katema:I have adopted him as my little brother and i take it very seriously!!!!!

Katema handed Noahsa over to the angel and walked to the center room in the castlew.

Katema:Your majesty i have something to tell you.

Queen:What is it Katema? Btw where have you been this whole time you know i get worried about you.

Katema:Excuse me for my lateness but i got caught in the middle of a task thats all but i have found a aura controller but hasnt quite learned how to control his power.Your majesty he is different from the others i have seen it with my own eyes.

Queen:Oh really? So you intend to use him as a weapon Katema?

Katema:absoloutely not! Excuse me for yelling your majesty but i would like him to stay withh us i have .....adopted him as my lil brother.

The queen smiled.

Queen:You adopted him you say?Hmmmmmm this is interesting. Is it because he reminds you of your brother?

Katema blushed:Well...you see...

Queen:Your are my strongest student and if you would like for him to stay then its fine.

Katema:thank you my........BOOM!!!!!!!

Noahsa voice was heard:What the hell have you done with my sister!!!

Queen:yes i can see why now.He reminds me of HIM.

Katema:hehe......

Noahsa came barging threw the doors as a big smile came across his face.

Noahsa:SISTER!!!!!!

He ran and tackeled her with a hug

Katema eyes widened:Noahsa!! ha ha ha ha im glad to see your feeling ok.

Noahsa:Yeah for some reason im ok.

Katema looked at his arm were Taiyun had destroyed it and starred as a white flame had been courseing around it.KLatema looked up at the doctor as her eyes flashed purple.She sat Noahsa to the side and starred at him.

Queen:NO.....you didnt!

Katema:you couldnt have done that to my little brother!

Doctor:I heard he will be staying among us right?So i thought we were gonna use him as a weapon so i.....im sorry!

Katema:I should kill you!!! he is a little boy!

Queen:Doctor this will not be tolerated.Get that thing outta him right now!!!!!!

Doctor:Even if i could i cannot!Its taking a liking to him and actually has made its own decesion ifi try to touch him again it will destroy anyone who it fears.

Katema starred at noahsa.

Katema:*he seems normal* Noahsa how is your arm?

Noahsa:Well sis it doesnt hurt at all. He looked down and his arm had been completely healed and a white tatto seal glowed around his whole arm.

Then Noahsa eyes widened as he held his arm.

Noahsa:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it hurts...it ahhhhhhhhhh

Katema:Noahsa!!!!!

Queen:So it begins! The heavens devil ....Kitosa has been awaken in the body of a young kid.God have mercy on us.

Katema:Noahsa now what you have to do is tryt to calm whatever you feel inside you down.

Noahsa:Sister what is this?What did they do to me!! Tears poured down his eyes.Ahhhhhhh i feel this thing inside my body!!!

Tsukiko eyes widened as she cou;ld feel Noahsa pain from a distance.

Taiyun looked up:WHAT THE HELL IS THAT POWER.........There is no way it could be coming from that idiot can it???

Tsukiko closed her eyes and focused.

Tsukiko:Noahsa.....whats wrong.

Kitosa:who are you?Are you trying to communicate with this boy?

Tsukiko:ye...ye...yes! Im Tsukiko

Kitosa:Are you in relation to him?

Tsukiko:well no not actually but...

Kitosa:then you are not permitted to talk to the young one.

Noahsa:Hey!!!! you dont order me around whatever the hell you are! This is my body so if you wanna live in it then shut up! Or i will kill us both.

Kitosa:You have alot of guts but are you willing too?

Noahsa:Hmph! i stake my life on everything i do!

Kitosa:hmph......your arrogant but i like that you have my power!

Kitosa calmed down and ceased his power inside Noahsa!

Noahsa:Princess are you still there?

Tsukiko:yes im here...are you ok?

Noahsa:Yes im fine and......im sorry i couldnt show you what i am capable of but dont worry right after i train i will come see you.

Tsukiko shocked:But noahsa didnt you here what my brother said?He will kill you if he sees you again.

Kitosa:No one shall kill this boy! I have choosen him to be the next hEAVENS DEVIL!

Tsukiko:Heavens devil?

Kitosa:DARK...ANGEL!

Tsukiko:but he isnt a angel he is a aura controller.

Kitosa:Well then the outcome might be different we will have to see.

Noahsa:.......so does this mean iw ill have more power?

Kitosa:Alot more!

Tsukiko:Get the letter from Katema i gave you and read it....Goodbye Noahsa.

Noahsa:Wait Tsu.....

Tsukiko voice could not be heard.

Taiyun:Tsukiko im finding it very hard to tolerate your disrespect towards our fathers wishes!!!!

Tsukiko:Im sorry Taiyun it wont....happen again i just wanted to say goodbye.

Taiyun:...FINE NOW LETS GO!

Katema:Noahsa are you ok?

Noahsa:yes im actually ok and Kitosa said he would help me.

Katema:WHAT?! YOU SPOKE TO HIM?

Noahsa:yes he said he would help me.

Quen:Well this is interesting?

Doctor:as i figured Kitosa ........ugh!

Katema punched the doctor in the stomach.

Katema:If you ever expirement on my lil brother again then i will kill you!

Doctor:cough, well you know what he is about to go threw so you should train him.

Queen:Yes Katema if he is to learn to control him then the training must start immediately!

Noahsa:Sister do i have a ltter from Tsukiko?

Katema:yes

The letter says this: Dear Noahsa it is i Tsukiko,Thank you for coming to my aid.It was really good to see you only if it was a brief moment. Im sorry i got you injured and maybe it would be best if we hadnt had any contact or you kept away from because i am certain that my brother will kill you.*tear drops* I really wanted to get to know you more,but in the process i dont want you to die for it so please STAY AWAY FROM ME....*CRIES* IM SORRY I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU!.......LOVE TSUKIKO!

Noahsa looked up at Katema with a grin.

NoahsA:What makes you think you can get rid of Me so easy. Im here to stay! Sis,lets begin our tarining i have to get stronger now.

Katema:I knew you were going back hehe. I will show exactly what you need to know but its up to you to control it.

Noahsa:ok BRING IT ON!!!!!!!!!

I hope oyu all like this chapter it seems like a lot is going on. ttyl



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Thursday, December 21, 2006


Chapter6:Noahsa vs.Taiyun


Taiyun:So kid you really wanna die!

Noahsa:If you think you can kill me come!

Taiyun:Then its decided! Tsukiko,Katema,you both know the rules.If you enter this fight it will be considered as treason! The penalty is Death!

Noahsa:Fine by me.

Taiyun looked at Noahsa and shook his head as he took one step to the right and disappeaered.He reappeareaed on the side of Noahsa and noahsa simply raised his hand as it blocked Taiyun's punch.

Noahsa:Noahsa grinned,you know you really shouldnt take me so lightly.......

Noahsa eyes widned as he felt Taiyuns second hit as he feel to his knees.

Taiyun:What were you saying!*grins*

Taiyun then turned his body swiftly kicking noahsa in the face as he flew backwards and his body brutally crashed threw a mountain.

Katema:Noahsa!!!!!

Tsukiko:Brother,Are you really trying to kill him?

Noahsa opened his eyes as Taiyun was right above him.Noahsa looked up and Taiyun swung down aiming at Noahsa's head and Noahsa rolled outta the way and flipped up into his fighting style.

Taiyun:So, you can still fight?

Noahsa thought to himself:This guy isnt really using any of his aura power so he is leaving me no choice but to use my secret power.

Taiyun:Ill give you one chance to quick this fight idiot then i wont hesitate to kill you.

Katema:Noahsa now is your chance! Dont do this.

Tsukiko stared at what was going and she feared for Noahsa's life.

Noahsa:Hmph,now way! Im not going anywhere! How can you expect me to just walk away after something like that! The guy hit me for trying to speak to the princess and no matter what he wont get away with it.

Noahsa looked up as his expression changed to complete anger.He stared at Taiyun. Taiyun begin grinning at Noahsa!

Taiyun:What is that suppose to do? Are you trying to scare me with a stupid looking face?

Noahsa:TRANCE!!!!!!!!

Noahsa's body rapidly spilled energy as he was shaking immensely yelling at the top of his lungs.This was a ability he called trance.There was a specific reason why Noahsa couldnt control his power,its not because he wasnt smart enogh,its because his power didnt wanna be controlled!

Taiyun:WHAT THE HELL!!!

Noahsa:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Katema eyes widened:Is this what he was talking about? His specail technique? His power is skyrocketing but why?Tsukiko's and Taiyuns dont do that at all.

Taiyun:Oh i get it! Its because me and Tsukiko trained completely different from him.We focus on balanceing our strengths out! This idiot didnt know how to use his power so he focused on only increasing it so it entered a new stage.I have never seen anything like this before.His power is like a rising current! But that really wont help him because it seems like its outta control! Fine if he wants to use real power then so.......

Noahsa jetted towards Taiyun as he got infront of him and thrusted both of his hands towards Taiyuns' chest!

Taiyun:uugh!

Taiyun was sen flying backwards as his body skidded multiple times on the ground.Noahsa held out his hands and screamed.

Noahsa:ahhhhhhhhh

a giant blue wave shot out as if it were thrusted from a sword and it was cutting everything in its path.

Tsukiko eyes widened:whoa!

Katema:he wasnt lying when he said he could take care of him self.

Taiyun looked up and jumped high into the air dodgeing the attack but Noahsa was there waiting for him.

Noahsa:graahhhhhh!

Noahsa struck Taiyun in the face as it sent him slamming into the ground.Noahsa then landed on the ground about 7 feet away as he held his hands to the side and begin screaming.

Noahsa:ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

Tsukiko:...... hes like an animal in that state?

Katema:Noahsa! calm down!

Taiyun wiped the blood from his mouth and he looked up.

Taiyun:kid i dont know how your able to control that beserk like power bt it just caused youuuuuuu YOUR DEATH!!!!

Noahsa:grrrrrrr

Taiyun stood up as he brushed his wait hair to the side and looked at Noahsa with a angry expression! Taiyun extended his hand as if it were a claw and his hand surged with aura around it.

Taiyun:Im gonna kill you kid!

Tsukiko eyes widened:No Taiyun dont do it please!

Katema:Do what!

Noahsa tilted his head to the side and stared at Taiyun.Tauyun ran towards him and Noahsa ran towards taiyun.

Noahsa:yahhhhhhh

Taiyun:fool!!!!!

They both collided with each other as one went right by another and what was saw was completely gruesome. Noahsa was missing a wide strand of skin from his arm.

Taiyun:Hmph! to stop his energy from flowing out like that is to cause immense pain.It might cause him to go into a beserk state when he uses it but he still is focus on constantly making it rise so with immense pain he will have no focus!

Noahsa eyes widened:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhh ahh ah ahhhhhhhhhhhh.

Noahsa held his arm in the air as his appearnce changed back.Taiyun came from behind and tore the rest of the skin completely off his arm.Now all that could be seen was blood .

Noahsa:AHHHHHHHHHHHH

Noahsa fell on the ground rolling and screaming out in pain.

Taiyun:Now im gonna tear your heart from your chest and you will die a painful death!

Katema:Taiyun! He is a little boy that is enough! Please!

katema grew angry as she was about to attack.Her angelic powers were rising.

Tsukiko:Brother that is enough! You have probly crippled him forever its enough! Now stop it! Please! Tears grew in her eyes.

Taiyun:Hmph fine! kid your lucky my sister likes you or you would just be another victim of Taiyuns DRAGON CLAW!

Taiyun turned towards Tsukiko and walked towards the east direction.Noahsa's right arm had been completly shedded of all his skin.

Taiyun:Kid! if i see you again i will kill you next time! heres som advice! Learn how to adapt to pain! Your signature technique would be great for your fighting style if you learned hoiww to tolerate pain. Idiot!

Noahsa looked at the princess and as he was about to speak a gash came across his chest as blodd squirted out.Noahsa eyes widened and he went unconcious.

Katema:Noahsa!!!!!!!!!

Taiyun:a gift that i leave with you to remeber me by! Stay away from the royal bloodline. If you wish to fight me again you can find me at the celestial castle!

Tsukiko:noahsa.....please be ok.

Katema gave Taiyun a look as if she were ready to kill.A look that wasnt that of a angel but something else.

Taiyun:ha ha ha..so the rumors are true! Katema your something eles but shouldnt you attend to his wounds.TSUKIKO,LETS GO!!!

Katema looked at noahsa.

Tsukiko:she handed a letter to Katema for Noahsa.Pleaes give this to him for me Katema.

Katema:Yes of course as soon as he wakes up.

Taiyun and Tsukiko left and when Katema looked back at Noahsa his chest was slowly healing but his arm wasnt.

Katema:Ok so i dont have to worry about that chest wound but your arm. You got yourself into trouble this time but dont worry because the next person who tries to harm you,*eyes flashed purple* THEN I WILL KILL THEM! i guess i have to take you back to my doctors and see what they can do for you.

Katema picked up Noahsa's body and put him on her back.her wings spread and she took for the sky.

Katema:Dont feel bad your the first person to his Taiyun that i know.Dont worry we will fix your arm up.

I hope you like this chapter and Noahsa had it going at first but Taiyun has his title and as you can see he greatly deserves it.

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Wednesday, December 20, 2006


Chapter5:The Royal Blood


Noahsa:How did we get here katema?

Katema:You teleported us i think when you felt that the princess was in trouble.

Tsukiko turned and stared at Noahsa abd then gave a faint smile but was kinda shaken up about all the blood she witnessed and she looked forward as Cian stood before her.

Taiyun:Hey TSUKIKO PAY ATTENTION! THERE IS NO REASON TO LISTEN OR EVEN NOTICE THOSE TWO!

Katema:How rude!

Noahsa:Hey! Princess its really you.

As noahsa was getting ready to walk over and greet her Taiyun appeared infront of him.

Noahsa smiled:Hi im Noah....

Taiyun:I dont care! You have no business even communicating with my sister.

Then Noahsa remembered his voice.It was the same jerk that he had spoken that said to stay away from the princess.Then Noahsa saw all the blood covered over tsukiko.

Noahsa.......Princess are you ok? What happened.

Cian:Well ill tell you whats about to happen! She is about to die.

Noahsa:Over my dead body!!!!!

Taiyun:Hey kid if you move i will kill you!

Noahsa:Isnt that your sister!? Are you stupid or something?

Taiyun:We,of royal blood are not allowed to enter anothers fight unless they are dead or unconcious!

Noahsa:Thats a load of crap!

Katema:Hey princess be on guard!

Tsukiko quikly turned around as she had lost a little focus concentrated on them and when she turn her head cian had gave her a sidekick to the stomach sending her flying back.

Tsukiko:ahhhhhhhhhhh

She landed on the ground and as she quickly looked up the demon was there above as he grabbed her by the hair.

Tsukiko:Let go of me!

Cian:Lets play ring around the rosey!

Cian begin to swing Tsukiko around by her hair and he launced her into a tree about 7 feet away.She crashed into the tree as her eyes widened.

Tsukiko:ahhhhhh!

Noahsa eyes widened.:Well you listen here whatever your name is! She needs help so i have a mission and thats to get her to her destination so.....

Katema:Noahsa calm down and focus.She isnt hurt as bad as you think.

Noahsa:huh?

Tsukiko stood and looked at Cian as a little bloodspilled from the side of her mouth and she grinned.

Cian shocked:Why is it that your smiling?Maybe because you know your death is forseen and you like it. Ha Ha Ha ha.

Tsukiko:Its not that its just with this next attack,Im gonna finish you off! I made a mistake giving you a chance to live but now i will kill you myself.

Taiyun:Ok then use that attack and end it so we can leave.

Noahsa:I know you can do it.

Cian:kill me?Im getting tired of your little arrogant mouth! Im gonna end it in this next attack as well!

Cian immediately chaneled his energy to his hands as he held them high in the air.

CIan:Let death rain down on her!!!!

Tsukiko looked up and grinned as she saw spears of energy rain down abopve her.It had to be atleast a thousande.

Cian:Lets see you dodge this.

Tsukiko grinned:Fool!

With the spears about to hit tsukiko begin to quickly dodge as with each step it looked as tho it was a flash step.She was dodging each spears.

Cian:impossible!

Taiyun:Your a fool Cian.Speed and physical fighting is Tsukiko's specialty! As you attacked then she slightly dodged all of your hits therefor lowering the impact greatly and when you cant see your opponent what will you do?

Cian was shocked as he looked around and saw nothing buta bunch of images.Tsukiko was moving at a fast pace towards him as she raisedout her fingers and hit them to stiffen them up.she appeared infront of Cian and thrusted her fingers into Cians heart.

Ciian:huuugh!!!!!!

Cian eyes widened as he dropped to his knees and when he was about to speak his last breath Tsukiko thrusted her other palm out and broke Cians facial frame completely.His body stopped moving and he fell to the ground.

Noahsa:alright!!!

Tsukiko blushed!

Taiyun:Come on lets go!

Noahsa was approaching Tsukiko

Noahsa:Princess i had no idea you were so...Ugh!

Noahsa eyes widened as Taiyun had punched Noahsa in the gut.Noahsa dropped to his knees and he looked up at Taiyun.

Katema:Noahsa!!!! She stared at Taiyun.

Taiyun:I know your a angel Katema! You should have warned him! He doesnt approach royalty unless given permission!

Tsukiko:Taiyun! Why!?

Katema:He didnt know that Taiyun!

Taiyun:Now he....

Taiyun was kicked in the face but only his head turned when he was kicked.Tsukiko and Kat6ema's eyes widened.

Noahsa:Now were even! I dont care if your royalty! You must have me mistaken i dont take orders from anyone,YOU GOT THAT!

Taiyun:Its been a long time since i had to fight!It will be fun killing an idiot.

Tsukiko:No,Taiyun he didnt know.

Taiyun:ENOUGH!!!!

Taiyun stared at Noahsa and Noahsa gave a faint grin.

Noahsa:Ill just embarass you infront of your siter.

Katema:Noahsa no! He will really kill you.

Noahsa:Its ok sis,from here on out remember,I stake my fights on my LIFE!

Taiyun:Then your life will be taken!

i HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS CHAPTER! TSUKIKO WON HER FIGHT AND NOW IT SEEMS LIKE TAIYUN HA A PROBLEM WITH NOAHSA.WHAT WILL HAPPEN AND WHAT DOES KATEMA KNOW? TTYL AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS I LOVE THEM!

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Friday, December 15, 2006


Chapter4:Tsukikos powers revealed


Hello everyone im getting ready to change my profile around but i will still post the story so you may read it lol ^^. Here it is and my girlfriend is bacvk so go ch3ck out her sight thank you ^^ Her name is links lil fairie^^


Chapter 4:The real power revealead
Cian:Fine then little girl but you asked for it!

Cian eyes begin to glow red as the ground begin to shake.He was powering up and the ground beneath him begin to crumble.Tsukiko eyes flinched a little as he was doig this but there were no signs of fear!

Cian:So little princess do you see now why i didnt want to use this power?Are you scared yet?

Taiyun:Hey,if thats al the power you have then i suggest you run quickly because shes will kill you!

Cian:Thats exactly why i have you trapped in there? Did you think i forgot about you in there?

Taiyun:huh?

Tsukiko:huh?

Taiyan begin learning the plan of the demon slowly.

Taiyun:Tsukiko!!! Go right now he is gonna try to use me as a decoy to kill you!
As Taiyun shouted out of the barrier a poisonous gas was released into the barier where Taiyun was kept.Taiyun begin coughing as he dropped to one knee and the gas had dispersed.

Tsukiko:Brother! Are you ok?

Cian:ahhhhhhhh ha ha ha ha ha ha haaaaa! Yes thats exactly what you get for thinking you were better than everyone! Now your gonna sit here as you watch your sister die! The gas has been released in you system and the oly way to stop it is by breathing in natural oxygen! Id say you have about 20 mins left! So now what are you gonna.....

Tsukiko:HAAAAAAAAAAA

Tsukiko hair went from blue directly to purple and her eyes turned a dark blue color! She stared at Taiyun and Taiyun gave her a grin giving her orders on what to do.

Cian:You mean to tell me your still gonna fight?!

Tsukiko:why of course! You said he has at the most 20 mins to live which means 40 for my brother since didnt count on the fact that he would use his power! He transformed inside the barrier a long time ago! Have a look now.

Cian turned and looked over to the barrier ass he couldnt see Taiyun but just a clear white!

Cian:what the hell!

Tsukiko:You clearly underestimated the two wrong people but shall we continue? Now that your plan has been altered completely do you still think you can beat me?

Cian:I dont need that to beat you im still stronger than you.

Tsukiko:hmph!

Tsukiko ran towards the demon as a shadow of elegant beauty followed behind her and she grinned. Cian completely planted his feet to the ground and awaited closing his eyes.Tsukiko moved with speed but he could hear her movements and as Tsukiko appeared on the side she kicked high aiming at Cian's ear.

Cian:Gotcha!

Cian raised his arm quick to catch Tsukikos foot then it looked as if her kick went right threw him as his eyes widened.

Cian:what the!

Tsukiko was really the shadow of beauty he saw the first time! The shadow was infront of him and she trusted her elbow into his throat.

Cian:Huuuugh!

Cian begin choking as he grabbed his throat.

Cian:But......why?

Tsukiko then grabbed the brutes shoulders and flipped backward kicking the demon and sending him flyiong back but his tracks were suddenly ceased as Tsukiko was grinning and her hair was extended.Her hair had grabbed Cian by his throat as it was tangling up as he was gasping for air.

Tsukiko:i thought you said you were gonna kill me! Now i will give you two options because i dont kill not unless i have too! The first is you let my brother go and i lety you free with just the brises you have now. Or two, I kill u and your power fades and he is released anyway.

Cian:ok,ok,ok, i will release him! Please dont kill me!

Cian pointed his finger as the barrier was let down and Taiyun was set free.

Tsukiko:Brother your ok!

Taiyun:Im fine and Tsukiko,kill him!

Tsukiko:But.....

Taiyun:He was going to kil you and me! You better not spare him now do it!

Tsukiko stared at Cian and Cain body shaked with fear!

Cian:I released him as you said please dont do this please.

Taiyun grew with anger as he appeared behind the demon and spoke in his ear and his eyes flashed and his body exploded right infront of Him and Tsukiko as the blodd from the demon splattered on them both.

Taiyun:ha ha ha ha ha haaa

Tsukiko:..............

Taiyun:Tsukiko....Whats...

Tsukiko:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Tsukiko was immediately trying to get the blood off of her it was the first time she had seen that much blood and her brother act so synical.

Taiyun:Tsukiko calm down.

She fell on the ground holding her head.

Noahsa:PRINCESS.....PRINCESS....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Katema:Noahsa whats wrong!?

Noahsa:The princess is in danger! ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Katema ran and grabbed Noahsa's arm and then his eyes glowed red and he teleported to where Tsukiko and Taiyun were.

Taiyun looked up with an angry expression and when he did this Cian shadow appeared infront of Tsukiko.

Cian grins:DID YOU THINK THIS FIGHT WAS OVER! ITS JUST BEGUN!

I hope you like this chapter and i guess Cian has more power than we all thought and Tsukiko's gets to show what she can really do against a demon!

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CHAPTER 4:TSUKIKO'S POWER REVEALED






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Thursday, December 14, 2006


   More Story!


To answear the people who commeted im fine now but i had almost a asthma attack but im feeling alot better now and thank you everyone. now on with the story and you all are sweet.Dont worry my babe was there for me.*link lil fairie*

Chaper 3: Affections begin!
Tsukiko and Taiyun begin traveling toi there destination point.

Taiyun:How come you have been so quiet Tsukiko?

Tsukiko:HUH! oh its nothing i was just

Taiyun:Hey Tsukiko what is it about that boy that seems to interest you.

Tsukiko blush:Well i think hes cute and his funny.He seems outgoing.

Taiyun:Well let me tell you something! We know nothing about these commeners and we dont know what his true intentions are! So if he makes a move im gonna kill him just to let you know.You should remember your place! Your the princess and if our father new you would even be associationg with him he would punish you.

Tsukiko:Taiyun why does fatheer have to be like that! I should be able to talk to whoever i want! Im tired of a closed and incawsed life!

Taiyun:I dont know but there is something about us that he doesnt want to get out so therefor i honor his wishes!

Tsukiko:....ok Taiyun.

Taiyun didnt like for her to be closed in but he honored his father wishes and maintained his image as the kingdoms strongest knight.


Katema:Noahsa wake up!

Noahsa looked up,openmed his eyes and smiled.

Noahsa:Hey there sis!

Katema smiled:Hey there Noahsa how are you feeling?

Noahsa:Im completely fine sis.Thanks for taking care of me.HEY WHERE ARE THE OTHERS THEY FOLLOWED US DIDNT THEY?

Katema:.........well......

Noahsa:huh,.....YOU MEAN THERE DEAD! THEY ALL WERE SUCH STRONG WARRIORS!!!!! NO!!!!!!!! WHO?

Katema:Well the guy that you fought killed them all before they even got the chance to escape.

Noahsa:But sis! Didnt i finish him off with my attack!?

Katema:Well all that did was slow him down a little and being enraged because you actually stopped him for a minute so he took his anger out on our comrades.

Noahsa:So i got them killed?.............

Katema:No,noahsa i didnt mean it like that!

Noahsa:Sis i didnt know that iot was gonna happen like that.Ill make him pay for that! I SWEAR IT!

Noahsa clutched his fist tight as now it felt like as if he had got them killed.Katema then thought she could use this ambition that he had for himself and let it fuel his training but she wouldnt let it get outta hand.

Katema:Hey Noahsa lets go.We have to get to our destination.

Noahsa:Ok well im gonna just say hi to the princess.

Noahsa begin to focus his power and he reached her.

Noahsa:Hey Tsukiko!

Taiyun:This isnt Tsukiko!

Noahsa:Well then who the hell are you and where is my princess?

Taiyun:First to begin with it was never your princess,and secondally i have blocked all contact just from you! She is my little sister and you are of diffrent class! Dont try to talk to her again or you

Noahsa:Hey shut up!!!!!!! I hate people liek you who look down on others! She talk to whoever she want! If you dont like it do something about it!!!!!!

Taiyun:For a lowerclass idiot,you talk to much! For your sake you better pray we dont meet!

There connection was cut off!

Noahsa:what the hell is his problem he makes me so angry!

Katema:What,what happened?

Noahsa:Someone else was there her brother or something!

Katema:well forget it lets go.We shall meet up with them later.

Tsukiko:You didnt have to treat him like that Taiyun!

Taiyun:Hmph!

strange voice:Did you really think that you would escape me?

Tayun eyes widened as he turned and he was trapped inside of a gold ball

Taiyun:your a coward!!!!!!!! Let me ut!!!! why dont you fight me,not my sister Cian!

Cian:I want you to watch your sister be killed.......

Tsukiko immediately ran towards him and punched him in the face and when her fist impacted 3 more hits came behind it. One to he gut,second to the kidney,and the third a spin ick to the chest! Cian was sent flying backwards as his body skidded on the ground.Tsukiko then appeared above him coming down with force

Tsukiko:ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

Cian rolled outta the way just in time before her hand had smashed into his face.he then stared at her.Tsukiko stood up and brushed herself off completely and went into her fighting stance.

Cian:So the rumors are true! The princess has incredible power in that litle body!

Tsukiko:Who the hell are you!

Cian:Just a friend of your brothers! I was infatuated with you thats all.*synical look*

Taiyun:hehe.....ha ha ha..hahahahaha.

Cian:Whats so funny?

Taiyun:Its because you think your gonna win! Shes been trained by me and every way so your as good as dead!

Cian:What!!!!!!!! this little girl cannot beat me!

As Cian looked back over to tsukiko she wasnt there but appeared behind him in a blurr and quick movement! She kicked at his right side and cian raised his arm to block and when her kick collided with his ar it threw him a little off balance and as he stumbled to the side she spinned and backfisted him in the face causing him to spin in the air as his body twisted on the ground.

Cian:What the hell i can barely follow her movements!

Tsukiko:Why dont we stop playing and cut to the chase i have a important person to get too.

Taiyun thinking:Could she be talking about that idiot? I have never seen her fight like this! Its almost like she is rushing it or something!

Tsukiko:Whats it gonna be! Are you gonna fight seriously por do i have to keep pounding your face into a bloody pulp!

Cian stood up and brush he blood from his mouth!

Cian:I didnt think i would have to become a demon to do this but i guess the stories about your power were true!

Tsukiko put her hands on her hips:Ok im waiting!

Lets see what happoens in the next chapter and it looks like the real fight is about to begin.i hope you enjoyed it ^^.

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Tuesday, December 12, 2006


Chapter2


Sorry i have been gone so long i was in the hospital but i have returned ^^ here chapter 2

Noahsa was in the air as everyone was showing off there power/.Katema was a angel so she was using her angelic power and it probly showed why she was so good nature at heart.The other gaurdians were humans so they showed off there spirt power so noahsa decided to show off his. NOahsa landed on the ground and his white hair scattered with red streaks begin to fly up as energy was coming beneath him.His purple eyes turned red and he let out a loud yell as this was many first time seeing a aura controllers ability.They all stopped and looked and Katema looked at Noahsa.

Noahsa:AHHHHHHHHHHHH

Katema:so thats what the kid is? He is a aura controller!

Saiso looked in shock as so did the other guardian users.

Saiso:that kid isnt a human?What the hell is he?

Noahsa Looked up as if he were a different person and stood still.He had a completely different look on his face.aLMOST IF HE WERE EVIL OR SOMETHING.

Katema looked at him:NOAHSA are you still you?

NOahsa turned towards her and then the cool calm kid expression appeared before his face and he smiled.

Noahsa:of copurse sis now lets get to work and complete our mission!

Katema smiled.:Yo got it!

NOahsa was about to attack and then the vision he saw blurred out again and he heard the princesses voice

Princess Tsukiko:So you do know how to use your power.You just focus more on your fighting ability because as of now your potential is higher than mine but my psychic ability is much higher.

NOahsa:Princess are you safe?

Princess Tsukiko:I am fine but i just got word that they sent in reinforcements!

Noahsa:what!

Princess Tsukiko:Yes,from all sides so is there a way that you can clear a path to get to me.......WAIT AMINUTE THERE HERE!!!!!!

Tsukiko was using her power to focus but she was able to see when communicating with Noahsa while Noahsa couldnt. Noahsa couldnt here her anymore.......

Noahsa:Princess!....Princess!

Katema stopped and looked at Noahsa

Katema:Noahsa are you able to contact with the princess with those powers?Have you been in contact with her this whole time?

Noahsa:Yes but i cant reach her anymore!.....SHES IN DANGER

A scream of a young girl was heard as a explosion came threw boths sides of the castle.

Sosai:YOUR A STUPID KID! IF YOU KNEW THIS THAN WHY DIDNT YOU SAY ANYTHING!

Katema:He tried to tell you all dont blame him.

Katema then looked at Noahsa and saw what was standing behind him.

Noahsa turned and looked up

strange voice:well hello there! Whats a kid doing on the battlefield!

Katema:NOAHSA RUN!!!!!!!!!! HE IS THE GENERAL OF THE DEMONS ARMY!

Katema was being forced back as hundreads of demons attempted to attack her.

Noahsa heard Katema words and went to turn and run.

THe princess had her own things to deal with as she was backed against a wall defending herself from the demons as most of her people been killed from the reinforcments.

Toksi:I am general Toksi so what makes you think that you can escape what i am!

Noahsa:WHOEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT RUNNING!!!!!!

Noahsa ran to the wall of the castle and placed his back against it.

Tsukiko:Noahsa! can you here me?

Noahsa:Yes princess are you ok? Your not injured are you?

Tsukiko:Im fine thank you! Hey,i have a plan! Can you clear a path?

Noahsa:Yes but why?

Tsukiko:If we can make it to our reinforcements to the east and the south then we will be safe because they are overthrowing us!

Noahsa:OK i can do that!

Tsukiko:I will keep in contact with you.SO when you hear the explosion then you do it too.

Taiyun:Princess we must go!

nOAHSA:OK PRINCESS BE CAREFUL!

Tsukiko smiled:you too.

Noahsa vision cleared back up as now he just had to wait for the princess que.

Toksi was walking towards him.

Toksi:you will be the first person i kill brat!

Noahsa:Damn! i know i cant beat this guy but hey.......i said either io die or prove myself so here goes.

Noahsa charged towards Toksi as all the other soilders stopped and gathered in a circle.It was either one die or survive now.Katema struggled to get threw but they would not allow her.

Katema:Noahsa nooooooo! If you engage in combat you have to win! Or escape and he wont let you!

Noahsa:Dont worry sis i have a plan.*Princess i hope you do the que quick!*

Noahsa was planning to use his hidden ability if it really came down to it.He ran at a quick pace and spinned twice and kicked at Toksi's body.Toksi caught his foot and laughed.while gripping his foot tight he solung and slammed Noahsa into the ground with force as the ground shook.

BOOM!!!!!

Noahsa:ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Toksi:You have got to be kidding me kid! As that really it?If thats the case then i shall end this quickly.

Katema:NOAHSA!!!!!!

Noahsa layed flat on the ground as if he wasnt moving and the demon cocked his fist back aiming at Noahsa's head planning to crush his skull! A EXPLOSION WAS HEARD AS MANY SOILDERS COULD BE SEE FLYING IN THE AIR.

demon:Thats the power of the princess!!!!!!!!

Noahsa eyes widened as he moved his head in time just to dodge the punch and he grabbed Toksi's arm! He pulled Toksi towards him as Toksi had a suprised look on his face and Noahsa forced Toksi's face directly into his foot as he pushed up and kicked him in the face sending him flying back.

Noahsa:DONT YOU UNDERESTIMATE ME!!!!!!! EVERYONE BACK UP PLEASE LISTEN.

Noahsa had used that as a destraction to power up and store energy.

Katema eyes widened as now she since what he was doing.She was the only one left as all the other aura gaurdians had died.Noahsa's hair flew up and he aimed at the general.

Noahsa:Maybe next time you will learn your lesson if you survive THIS!!!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Noahsa had fired off giant blast that sent a wave of energy scorching threw many demons as it even hit the general.The power and the wide mass of his blast was immense.KIatema knew that had draind his strength.

Noahsa grabbed Katema's hand and ran quickly.

Noahsa breathing heavy:Hey sis we gotta go!!!!!!!! The princess said lets go east.

Katema:Ok,but Noahsa! EAST IS IN THE OPPOSITE DIRECTION!

Noahsa:Opps hehe.

Noahsa had fled and it seemed like the princess plan had worked.

Tsukiko:Noahsa how did it go?

Noahsa:You were great did you do that explosion! Wow you must be strong!!

Tsukiko blushed:Well i do what i can. Now keep east and you will reach our camp.Contact me when you get there.

Noahsa:Hey i havent met you yet but thank you for everything! You know when we meet maybe we could train with each other.

Tsukiko blushed:Um......um....okay sure. Hey by the way how old are?

Noahsa:Im 13 years old while my sister Katema....well my adopted sister is 18.She saved my life. You?

Tsukiko:Im 13 too and she sounds nice.

Taiyun:Princess lets move dont conversate with lowers!

Noahsa:HEY! IM NOT BELOW ANYONE! IM JUST.........

The vison blurred before he could finish.Taiyun was Tsukikos gaurdian and brother.He was pretty serious all the time and didnt associate with people under him.He was also like Noahsa and Tsukiko.

Noahsa:hey sis i think i used to much...po.wer.....back there....i need to....rest.

Noahsa collapsed and Katema caught him and dragged him under a tree where she set up camp.

Katema:Poor kid,It seemed like you have had a rough life and people treat you bad but dont worry im, your sister now so i will alays be here and from what i can understand you have become friends with the princess.Dont worry things will get better for you.

Toksi stood up and grinned:NOAHSA!!!!!!!!! YOUVE GOT SPUNK KID AND YOUR AN AURA CONTROLLER! WHEN I CATCH YOU IM GONNA BEAT YOU INTO A BLOODY PULP! YOU STOPPED THE WAR AND SAVE YOURSELF BUT THE NEXT TIME WE MEET YOU WILL NOT GET AWAY! IM GONNA KILL YOU GRAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Katema could hear what he was saying and now she knew Noahsa had enemies.First thing in the morning she was going toget to there destination and with his potential he could become powerful so she wopuld train him.

Taiyun:SISTER DONT YOU GET ATTACHED TO THAT IDIOT! HE MIGHT BE ONE OF US BUT HE ISNT ROYALTY!!!!!! LISTEN,JUST GET HIM TO SAFETY AND THATS IT! AFTER THAT DONT CONTACT HIM ANYMORE OR I WILL DEAL WITHT HE SITUATION!

Tsukiko:............Taiyun he isnt a bad person he is just trying to help us.Cant you

Taiyun:IM WARNING YOU TSUKIKO IF YOU DONT WANT TO SEE HIM GET HURT OR DIE THEN AFTER HE REACHES SAFTEY FORGET ABOUT HIM.

Tsukiko thinking to herself.:I wont forget you Noahsa.

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Saturday, December 2, 2006


   Here it is the whole chapter 1


Chapter 1(Ancient Trance)
Ok im about to start a new story which will most likely be my best and most concentrated one yet so here goes.

Welcome to a world where nothing is at all what it seems.People live there everyday lives as everything has a certain cycle but little do you know the cycle is about to be broken as all worlds collide and and there must be a winner but which world will win? "The demonic,the angelic,earth,or a world of a new breed of humans? These new humans would be almost powered up version of humans or what they call Aura controllers.The Aura controllers are little in number,there only like 5 left that i know of but they are only kids but we will soon see who has the advantage in this battle and dont cunt the humans out yet because with there advance technology they have been able to tap into there spirit power so they are also cocky and a forced to be reckoned with. The war among the races begins but who is the strongest?

Noahsa:Ok well another day of training for me just like always.I wish i would just get a real mission sometimes! Im good and im sure the government has realized it by now so why do the push aside my abilities. I know i have a temper problem but sheesh!!!!! I CANT TAKE THE BOREDOM!

strange voice:Well maybe if you had patience and concentraiton then you would achieve better standards such as i instead of complaining why dont you go and train. Your lowlevel of concentration makes me look bad.

Noahsa turned and looked at Rin.

Noahsa:Why is it that everytime i begin to think to myself then you come outta no where to give your ignorant input. What makes you think that my training cant compare to yours because your a hybrid! You know your really full of yourself and i would love to teach a person like you a lesson!

Rin: well whenever you achieve the power to do so then let me know. Ha ha ha ha ha. You might be a aura controller(new breed human) but you lack the intlligence to be one. There are only five of you left so i pity your race.

Noahsa gave Rin a angry look and charged at him.

Noahsa:dont you insult us like we are not suppose to be here because of what you are! We breath and live just like any other being!

Rin with ease begin to dodge Noahsa flurry of punches and sent a knee to his gut as Noahsa's eyes widened and he fell to the ground coughing up spit.

Rin:Never attack someone if you have no chance of winning. Or if you do,

Rin stared at noahsa with a cold look on his face.

Rin:BE PREPARED TO DIE!

Rin left the room and Noahsa layed there on the floor.

Noahsa:I read that movement just now but he was to fast for me to even react. I will beat you RIN!

"THIS JUST IN A ANNOUNCEMENT HAS BEEN MADE! ALL AURA GAURDIANS PREPARE TO LEAVE NOW! THERE IS A ARMY OF DEMONS MARCHING TOWARDS THE EAST TO THE PRINCESS LEAVE AT ONCE!"

Noahsa eyes widened brightly.He ran to the office yelling.

Noahsa:GENERAL PLEASE LET ME GO!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!

General:NO! your to reckless!

Noahsa:you have to let me go please! she is one of my kind! it will be my first time seeing another like myself please! I will be with the gaurdians and you know im capable of taking care of myself please!

General: I SAID NO NOAHSA!

Noahsa:this is a bunch of bullshit! I have been training here for a damn year and you have not given me not real assignment! Do you not trust my abilities! If not then just say so because ill leave and as far as i am concerned i have no problems with leaving and ill go help the princess myself!

General:OK NOAHSA IF YOUR THAT CONFIDENT ABOUT YOUR ABILITIES THEN GO WITH THEM TOMORROW BUT ANY SCREW UPS AND YOU WILL BE SENTENCED TO DEATH! GOT THAT!?

Noahsa:FINE BY ME!*GRINS* ITS EITHER PROVE MYSELF OR DIE! WHAT WARRIOR WOULD HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT!?

Noahsa walked outta the office and and into his room.He needed to get rest for his big debut tomorrow. He would be with the 5 guardians tomorrow so he had to be prepared.

Noahsa:Its finally my turn to show what i can do!

Later that night Noahsa dreamed.

*dream taking place*

Strange voice:Noahsa when you come tomorrow tell your people to stay outfront because thats where they will attack.Me and my people will take care of the front you just dont allow any demons to get in from the back.

Noahsa:Wait who are you? How do you know my name?

Princess Tsukiko:Its because i am the princess and i am like you but i take it you havent learn how to use the concentrated part of your powers tomorrow but you will be forced to tomorrow. Bye.

Noahsa woke up as he saw it was morning.

Noahsa:was that a dream or was it real?

He heard the hrons go off as the aura guardians were about to leave.

Noahsa:WAIT!!!!!! IM COMMING!

Noahsa got ready as quickly as possible and jumped out the window and ran after the carrage.The towns peoiple laughed as he chased it dwon and hopped on.

Noahsa:Thats ok, You all laugh now because
when i return im gonna be hero!!!!

Noahsa said that proudly with his eyes closed smiling.A apple was thrown as it hit him directly in his face and he fell back into the carrage.Everyone laughed and Noahsa heard a voice as someone with a napkin wiped his face off. Noahsa looked up and saw that it was one of the Aura Guardians,she was a female.

Katema:Hey little one you should be careful when you say things like that.Everyone might not take a liking to it.

Sosai:Hey Katema dont cater to that brat! He shouldnt even be here.

NOahsa smiled at Katema then heard Sosai's remark.

Noahsa:Thank you Katema! Hey jerk! I got here because of my skills so dont underestimate who or what i am! That will be your only warning.

The others grinned.

Sosai:You got a big mouth kid!

Katema smiled and chuckeled.

Katema:Hey from now Noahsa I will dubb you as my little brother. If you see me in trouble then i will help you and vice versa.How about it?

Noahsa:Its a deal sis!

Katema smiled.:Were here everyone lets go!

Noahsa:ALRIGHT!!!!!

Everyone:JUST STAY OUTTA OUR WAY KID!

Katema:Just follow me Noahsa.

Noahsa:ok.

They allwalked out as the demon army was approaching already.

Sosai:THERE HER NOW! GET READY! LETS GO INSIDE!

Noahsa:Just like the dream Noahsa whispered.EVERYONE PLEASE LISTEN TO ME! WE HAVE TO PROTECT THE FRONT BECAUSE THERE IS ANOTHER ARMY COMING FROM HTE BACK BUT THE PRINCESS CAN HANDLE HERSELF! SHE WAS NOIT ABLE TO BRIEF US ON THE

Sosai:SHUT UP!!!!!!! IM GIVING THE ORDERS!

Noahsa:sheesh! Ok ill protect the front i promise i will let no one get to the princess.

After Noahsa said this then the demons were visible.

Sosai:Kill thenm all!

Noahsa looked around waitinf or a opponent as a demon jumped from behind him and he turned quickly as he held out his hand yelled.

Noahsa:yahhhhhhhh

A crystalized sword appeared from his hand and he sliced the demon as the demons blood spilled on his face.He was in shock this was his first time killing anything and another demon approached.Katema looked up.

Katema:OH no!!!!!! Noahsa!!!! she threw her sword and it pirced the demon right before he attacked Noahsa.

Katema:Noahsa focus! Im here you have nothing to be worried about.

Noahsa:Ye....yes sis! Then everything before Noahsa eyes turned black

Princess Tsukiko:Noahsa its me why arent they listening to what you said.

Noahsa:There jerks!

Princess Tsukiko:Ok well dont let them approach us from the front.

Noahsa:How can i see you and how come i can here you? Your...your...beautiful!!!!

Princess Tsukiko:*blush* focus on the fight!

Noahsa:Right!!!!

Katema had been calling out at Noahsa for the last 5 min.

Katema:Noahsa look out!!!

NOahsa:Im on it sis!

Noahsa looked up as four demons approach from all sides.He flipped back also kicking one demon and before his hand hit the ground he made his sword appear again as he bounced himself off the ground away from the others.

Noahsa:COME AND GET ME!*GRINS*

Katema: *smiles* there you go! I knew you were good!

Noahsa and the others were protecting the front but what was happeneing in the back where the princess was.From what we understand it was another army in the back. Noahsa and Princess Tsukiko can communicate but he loses sight of whats hes doing.A new enemy was approaching.Lets see what happens next and what are the powers of the Noahsa and Princess Tsukiko?*Aura controllers* I hope you all like this chapter because the next one has alot of action.Tomorrow chapter 2 and character descriptions

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Friday, December 1, 2006


   Hers the introduction


Ok people sorry i will post the rest later but here is the introduction for you because work is swarming me with loads of paperwork. so here you go i hope you enjoy it.


Chapter 1(Ancient Trance)
Ok im about to start a new story which will most likely be my best and most concentrated one yet so here goes.

Welcome to a world where nothing is at all what it seems.People live there everyday lives as everything has a certain cycle but little do you know the cycle is about to be broken as all worlds collide and and there must be a winner but which world will win? "The demonic,the angelic,earth,or a world of a new breed of humans? These new humans would be almost powered up version of humans or what they call Aura controllers.The Aura controllers are little in number,there only like 5 left that i know of but they are only kids but we will soon see who has the advantage in this battle and dont cunt the humans out yet because with there advance technology they have been able to tap into there spirit power so they are also cocky and a forced to be reckoned with. The war among the races bvegins but who is the strongest?

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Sunday, November 26, 2006


Hello


well everyone monday i shall start the tories that i once used to write o here ,i dont mind comments and i would like evrtyones input on the stories. well i shall ttyl.I cant wait to talk to my gf!!!!!!!!!!!!(links lil faerie) Yup guys shes mine so stay away lol

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