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Sunday, March 25, 2007


   Part II
Okay, here's part 2 like i promised,i hope you like it,i wrote it during my first period when we were supose to be watching a movie, shows you how much i lik my english class.....well here you go,and incase you want to read Part 1 again it's right below part 2,so here's the epic PART II, Enjoy......

I looked down at what was grabbing me in complete horror. I tried to break free, but the hold was too great, I couldn’t get my hand away. It happened so fast that I could barley see what was holding on to me, but what I do remember is it was the nastiest color I ever saw. The bandages ripped off. His face was moving and changing, I couldn’t take the horrible sound, I screamed. It sounded kind of like a live pig and bones being crushed in a blender. Then his, or its, head slit open and these slimy green tentacles reached for me, right about that time his grip loosened just enough for me to break free. As I got up after falling, I saw his hand grow into this huge claw like thing. I scrambled to he door right as “it” was getting up; it seemed like forever trying to get the door open, as I turned the rusty handle and slamming the door right as he got to me. I reached for that overturned gurney and jammed it under the doorknob. As I did the monster started slamming on the door, it slammed so hard I thought the door would break down. Then right as it started beating on the door, it stopped. Maybe it died…or maybe it was changing again, changing into a more horrible, deadly, and bigger creature…I couldn’t be sure. I reached for my head and started thinking, “Would I turn into one of those things, what happened to…Ahhhhh, OUCH!!!!” I was too worried about the monster that I didn’t notice the sharp pain in my wrist. As I looked down at it I noticed it was already black and bruised. DAMN!!!!! He broke it, Bastard! Well, since this is a hospital, there’s bound to be some ibuprofen around here. Have you ever looked down a long hall and get dizzy? Probably not, I was probably just screwed up in the head. Oh well, I shook off the dizziness and walked down the hall. I don’t know what this place is, but it must be run down, everything is old and falling apart. Every door had a number on it, 612,613, 614, 61 (the 5 was missing), I’m guessing they were all room like mine, but wait, I saw a door with a red cross on it. I ran for the door and opened it. EUREKA! I found the medicine room; okay, now to find some ibuprofen and maybe some bandages. I saw a blue box that caught my eye (notice I said, “eye” and not “eyes”, remember, only one eye is exposed from the bandages on my head), but anyways I reached for it and looked it over, hmm, no label. Wait there was an expiation date on it, “Exp.1952”. WHAT THE HELL! 1952,1952…. why am I in a hospital that hasn’t been used since 1952…these are all questions I couldn’t even begin to answer. As I started to put it up, I stopped, then dropped the box some powder went everywhere, but now I could care less, I looked at my wrist. It was completely back to normal no bruise it didn’t even hurt. What’s happening to me? I turned around shaking m head, but I wasn’t so confused for long, as I walked out he door, I almost ran into a big tall man. He was bald he didn’t even have eyebrows. His head was kind of lumpy and had a look of disgust on his face, he was all sweaty, and was wearing all white, but that’s all white. That’s all I saw, because after that he lifted a wooden bat and hit me in the head, I was out before I hit the ground. END OF PART II

Hoped you liked it,don't worry this time it won't take me two months to write part 3...okay here are todays questions

1).Did you like part 2?

2).Was it what you were hoping for?

3).Did you like my little cliff hanger at the end there?

4).Any suggestions for Part III?

This is more like a comment then a question,and it's a wrestling question so you might not get it...but here it goes...

5).The man in White at the end,I based on Snitsky for ECW.....I hope he has a big part in this story....
-Lynn

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