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Thursday, October 12, 2006


   helloo!!!!
well only 2 ppl commented on my last post and only 1 gave me an answer to my question (by the way thank you!) so i shall now post the first chapter to my story!!!

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CHAPTER 1 The Meeting:


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In 2006 in a small town in Louisiana begins the story of the legend of all legends: The guardian of the dimensions: The Strongest Of The Elements: Linda.

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"Linda wake up! It's time for school"

"Ugh coming...." Linda fell back asleep.

"LINDA!!" Her Mom yelled

"Ok!"

Linda slowly got up and got dressed in her uniform. Her uniform consisted of a maroon shirt with a small yellow gator on the right corner. Her skirt was a plaid green and red. She never liked the colors though. She walked over to her radio and turned it on to her favorite station. Which happened to have her favorite song playing.

“Daddy gave me a name. My daddy gave me a name and he walked away!” She sang and did a little dance to while straightening her hair.

When she was done she got her purse and her book sack and walked to the end of her driveway by herself. Which was weird because usually her mom and her little brother came with her. She began to feel nervous and started to look around.

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They both watched her carefully from the bushes.

“Linda? Why would he be after her? She’s nothing special,” said one.

“Neither are you and he hates your guts” said the other.

“But I can kick his butt! She doesn’t even know we or him exists!” the first one yelled.

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Linda turned around and stared at the bushes.

“Who are you?” she asked shakily.

“Good job Bobby!! Ummm...Sorry... We don’t mean to scare you… I am Spader and this is Bobby. To make a long story short some one is coming to kill you and we need to get you out of here.” Said Spader bluntly.

“What are you talking about?” Linda said cocking her head slightly.

She took a second to examine the two guys. Bobby had brown hair and looked about 14. He had brown eyes and he was muscular but not too much and was nicely tanned. Spader was a little bit taller with slanted brown eyes and was darker than Bobby. He also looked 14 and was ripped too! Linda let out a small girlish giggle. A little bit to girlish and it surprised her enough to cover her mouth and blush.

“She won’t last a day. No way.” thought Bobby.

“Ummm... I don't think I can go... Do I have to?" she asked.

"If you want to live.” said Spader.

"Than I think we should leave her.” said Bobby nastily.

He glared at Linda. Linda was 14. She had brown hair and it was about medium length. She was medium height and had brown eyes. She had a tan too. Her accent was mixed with some Louisiana and something else he couldn’t tell. She was a big boned girl too.

Linda realized he was glaring at her. She looked at her feet as she felt him sizing her up and it made her feel nervous.

"So are you coming or not?” Said Spader breaking the tension.

“First of all why would anyone come after me?” Linda asked.

“Who knows why ANYONE would come after YOU!” said Bobby glaring at her.

His words stung her and she looked down and her face turned red. He looked at her face and saw that his words hurt her feelings. He kind of enjoyed it.

"What do you want me to do?" she asked.

“Run.” said Bobby sarcastically.

“We don’t know his name but he’s dangerous. You have to come with us and we’ll take
You somewhere safe,” said Spader as he gave Bobby a look.

Linda looked back at her house. Than at them.

"I've always wanted to do something exciting like this... Than why am I hesitating? Go Linda go! I think I should! Yes, I should! Yup! Yup!" Linda thought.

“Ok when do we leave?” she asked.

“Tonight. We’ll meet at the barn behind your house.” said Spader.

The two strange boys ran behind the bushes right as Linda's mom and brother came out to meet the bus. The rest of the day was just like all other days. Ms. Tina the bus driver was yelling at everyone to shut-up. Which didn't have anything to do with Linda because she was listening to her iPod the whole way to school, like always.

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Ms. Sally, the English/Homeroom teacher, was happy as always. Coach Shelton, the Science teacher, made bad jokes as always. Coach Shamsie, the P.E. teacher, was mean as always. Ms. Dampier, the Algebra teacher, was as weird and drunk as always. Coach Howle, the Civics teacher, was as funny as always. And of course Ms. Candice, the French teacher, was cool as always.

Everything was just like it was supposed to be. Except Linda, she wasn’t hyper as always. She wasn’t as weird as always. She wasn’t as crazy as always. This worried everyone around her. They didn’t understand why she was so unlike herself. When the dismissal bell finally rang she gave long tight hugs to all her friends and told them she would miss them. She told them she would never be able to explain what was wrong. What was right?

Linda was too tired from worrying all day so she decided to take a little nap.

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A big silhouette came to the side of Linda ‘s bed.

“You’ll be a perfect bride but there is one thing left to do,” said the shadow.

He put his hand over her and Linda started glowing. After a few minutes he moved his hand to her room. Everything started to glow. When he was done he slowly reached over her and kissed her softly.

He smiled evilly and disappeared.

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Linda woke up. She felt strangely awake and rested. She went and packed up her stuff. She felt lighter and her clothes seemed to fit her better. She decided she was going to straighten her hair real quick before she left. She went to her mirror and screamed.

“I did NOT look like that when I fell asleep!” she said.

Only one thing came to her mind: Victoria secret model.

“OH MY GOD! I look like Beyonce except for the butt” Linda said while turning to see. Wide-eyed, she quickly jerked her head back and said, “Never mind!”

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