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Tuesday, April 17, 2007



He enters the house saying nothing to his parents. Then he exits to his bedroom. Duo and Hilde are not surprised by his attitude.
" Man, what is with him?" Duo says with frustration.
" It's always like this, Duo. What can we do?" Hilde asks.
" I have no idea, but maybe Lily can talk to him." Duo brainstorms.
" Will he even listen to her?" Hilde asks with concern.
" Let's hope so..." Duo says sitting on the couch. He turns on the television and flips through the channels. Hilde sighs and returns back to tidying up her house.

Lily and her three friends; Lena, Li-Mei, and Farrah, watch the circus troupe perform. Lily watches on, amazed, and Li-Mei eats cotton candy as though she was bored.
" Wow. Does the human being actually have the ability to tame a lion?" asks Lily.
" Well, apparently, so..." says Farrah.
" This is so boring..." says Lena.
" Oh come on.. lighten up Lena, at least you get to see on of your best friends perform." Says Lily. On that phrase, their fourth friend, Misha appears on stage.
" There she is!" Farrah says excitedly.
Mischa does a balancing trick on a tight rope her friends gasp with delight and fear on every sudden movement. She finally front flips off the tight rope, bounces off the safe net, and lands gracefully to a finishing pose. The crowd cheers as Misha exits.

After the show, her excited friends approach her.
“ Wow. Misha, you did great!” says lily.
“I could’ve done that without being at the circus,” says Li-mei. Misha suddenly frowns.
“ You look down. What’s the matter?” asks Farrah.
“ I don’t know.” Says Misha.
“ Why don’t we get some tea?” suggests Farrah.


The girls are sitting outside on some boxes drinking tea.
“ How’s your Dad and Your Aunt?” asked Li-Mei.
“ They’re the usual,” says Misha. “ My Dad is usually quiet.” Lily lets out a giggle.
“ You take up after him.” She says.
“ Whatever,” says Misha. The Girls laugh at her. Misha shrugs it off.
“ Well, Let’s talk about you, Lena.” Farrah suddenly suggests.
“ Let’s not…” says Lena.
“ Well,could we at least talk about your brother?” Farrah asks.
“ How’s he doing?” Lily asks with great curiosity.
“ Of course you of all people want to know, Lily. You’ve been pursuing him ever since last summer.” Says Li-Mei.
“ I have not!” Lily defends.
“ That’s not what it looked like yesterday.” Says Farrah.
“ C’mon, we’re not stupid Lily. We all know that you like him.” Says Misha.
“ Okay, maybe I do---but I have not been pursuing him!" says lily.
" Whatever." says Misha. At this comment Lily makes a guilty face.
" Okay. Maybe I have. Just a little." she says.

Maxwell comes from out of his room and sees his parents.
" Mom. Dad. Can we talk?" he asks.
" Sure we can," says Hilde.
" Okay. Here goes," says Max as if he were to make a monumental statement.
" Mom...Dad...I want you both to understand something...."

Irvine opens his window and climbs out of it. He pulls himself up onto the roof and looks at the stars. A female's voice suddenly appears in his head.
" I'm sorry but it just has to be this way," it says.
" Why Jetta? " Irvine's voice asks.
Suddenly, the images from his memories appears in his mind. They are both in the park.
" Jetta, what have I done to you?" he asks.
" Everything!" she says.
"I can't live like this!" she runs off and Irvine chases her.
He continues to look at the stars as his eyes well up with tears.


~end of Chapter one~


*********Author's Comments*********
I really appreciated all of the positive feedback yesterday! Thank you all so much! I got really great reviews. I don't want to post today, because you've probably read enough, already! *laughs*
So,What do you think of chapter one you guys? Later! ^_^v


~gwinggirl100


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