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Sunday, June 18, 2006


   AEGFF, Chapter 35!!!!
Well, here it is, after long last and alternations, it would seem! Well, yeah. Enjoi!

Chapter 35

Max was standing by the parking meter, clad in his valet uniform. He was worried that not only would Tera not cover for him, but that his dad might embarrass him. Although he wasn’t sure why, he always was afraid his dad might do something that would drive Roxanne away for good. However, Tera managed to arrive at the same time as Roxanne, dressed in a uniform identical to Max’s.

“Oh, thanks Tera. You are a lifesaver.” Max said, “I guess your first official duty could be parking my car?” He grinned, handing her his car keys. The way her face lit up made him feel happy, and she practically ran to the jalopy. Roxanne yelled something about a tip, then tossed Tera a quarter. She grinned and caught it, hopping into the car and driving it off to the parking lot. Max chuckled and walked into the club arm in arm with Roxanne.

After kindly asking the staff of the House of Mouse to make sure his dad didn’t embarrass him, he and Roxanne went into the seating area, looking for an available table. That was easily taken care of when Daisy forced a few of the guests to sit over at another table. Max thanked Daisy, albeit reluctantly and sat down with his date, praying that nothing else too embarrassing would happen. Unfortunately, it seemed like the staff members were on a roll.

Donald had managed to find some weird French guy and the rest of his family; the weird man began giving Max romantic advice. He just sunk lower and lower in his seat, thankful that his dad would never try anything like that. When he thought it wouldn’t get any worse, it seemed that Minnie had booked a reggae singer, who began singing a song –apparently titled ‘Kiss the Girl’-, and seemed to be singing right to the young lovers. Roxanne just giggled, while Max was mortified. Then, one of Max’s home videos of his dad in a bike tournament was scheduled to air, but they had to get a bit more embarrassment added in just beforehand.

“This is a video our valet Max has enjoyed since he was in diapers.” Mickey said, not able to feel the knot Max’s stomach was tying itself into, “speaking of which, here’s a photo of him in diapers.” Sure enough, a photo of Max as an infant on a tricycle showed up on screen. He felt like dying at that time, wishing he had a bike to ride off a cliff right at that moment. Roxanne just giggled, taking the disastrous night much better than her date. Just when it seemed the embarrassment would never cease, Goofy stepped in and got the other staff members to lay off on Max. He had never felt so glad to see his dad, aside from the time he’d used the Perfect Cast to save him from falling to his death down a waterfall near Los Angeles.

Eventually, it turned out that Roxanne had enjoyed the night, and she explained that she liked Goofy, and thought his absurdity was awesome. Max just grinned and headed to the exit with Roxanne, glad that the date was over.

Hope you enjoyed the "slightly" changed version of that House of Mouse episode. Anyways, I've got the next chapter started, so it'll be on time for sure next week. Anyways, read and review!

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