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Wednesday, July 27, 2005


   my new story!!!
well kitties i am sorry it took so long to post this! but here it is! i no i could do more detail and all but i only had 30minutes to type it! so again here it is!!

"FATE IS CRUEL"

chapter 1. "I WILL BE HEARD"

Herru: (it’s a dark night, Herru has his guards hold torches just so u can barley see his face, he is on top of a building saying….) you all will obey me, like it or not!! You all no longer have a free will! You will do nothing with out my consent!!

Shin; (pushing his way to the front of the crowd, wearing a dark robe just covering a little more then his eyes) I will be heard! I have my own will and you can’t take that a way from me! No one can!!

Herru: * to his guards* Silence that fool before he starts an up rise!

Guards: But sir, he is just one man what can he do?

Crowd: *shouting* YEAH NO ONE CAN TELL US WHAT TO DO!!

Herru: Kill him!

Shin: *to crowd* YOU ALL NEED TO THINK FOR YOURSELFS!! YOU CAN’T LET HIM TELL YOU WHAT TO DO!!

Crowd: yeah, YEAH!!

Guards: (just getting to shin) you’re coming with us.

Shin: (pulling out his sword) Not with out a fight!

Guards: (drawing their weapons from their holsters, about 10 guards) THEN SO BE IT! IT WILL BE YOUR FUNRULE!

(((Battle scene)))

A rookie guard gets cocky and charges at Shin. Shin easily jumps over him, twisting in the air so his face will be facing the guards back. Shin just slits the guard throat, and kicks the man dead body and to the other guards. The crowd is going mad!!!! Cheering and screaming for this mysterious man who is trying to liberate them!
The guards realize Shin means business and pulls out their guns and the lead guard shouts. FIRE!!!! Shin knows there is no way in hell he can win. So he does what any other sane man would do… he RUNS!! The bullets are just missing him he can hear them in his ears, he need to do something and fast! A man hole! He opens it up and just jumps in without thinking.

chapter 1 end.


tell me how u like it!!!

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