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Monday, July 17, 2006


My story Ch. 1
Well I'm currently writing a story and I have chapter 1 done ^_^ I'd like you to read it!

This story is about a young 15 year old girl and a vampire. This may sound weird now, but trust me it gets a whole lot weirder. This girl that I am going to tell you about has no friends and had no admirers because they all thought that she was weird or strange. This girl's name is Emily. Emily believed in vampires, faries, and any other mystical creature you could name! She wanted to meet all the creatures, but she wanted to meet a vampire the most! Who knew her little dream would come true while she was walking home from a dance? She was wearing a long red dress and her silky browm hair was tied in a red and white ribbon. She decided to take a shortcut, to get home faster, through an ally. While she was walking through the ally she saw someone she reconized. It was Billy, her brother's friend. Unlike Emily her brother, Adam, had friends. He was a very popular guy. No one believed he was related to Emily except by their looks. Well anyways enough about Adam. Let's get back to Emily. Okay so she was in the ally and she saw Billy. He started to walk towards her slowly. She didn't move of course she was too busy wondering why he was out so late. By the time she was done thinking he was right infront of her. He smiled a kind of fake smile...then he put one arm around Emily and began to pull her the opposite way she was supposed to go. Before Emily could pull away Billy asked "Why don't you take a walk with me..?" Emily nodded slowly and went along with him, but in her mind she was screaming'No what am I doing I'm supposed to go home!' Billy brought her into the darker part of the ally, pushing her against the wall, grinning evily down at her. She looked up frightened and helpless. He pulled out a knife, quickly, and slashed it at her. She almost dodged it, but it cut her in the side deeply. She whinced then ran as fast as she could, wounded, into the empty streets, Billy close behind her. She stopped when she spotted a dark figure not too far from her. She could just barely make out what he looked like. He had piercing yellow eyes and his raven black hair seemed to go past his shoulders. His clothes enhanced his dark figure...all his clothing was black. His trench coat had chains draiping from everywhere. Emily blinked then remembered that she was in danger. She turned around to see Billy, his knife high in the air. She stared at the knife for one long second and. . . . .

For more, see Chapter 2 ( In progress ).


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