Wednesday, November 10, 2004

   Story
Todays post is gonna be kinda long. I'm at home and I wrote a story for my Sr. Projects class and I wanna know what you people think of it. Please dont take it, just tell me what you think in a comment.
~Kitty

Red Hot Tears
"My grandma used to always tell me 'If you cry red hot tears, kill yourself, before someone else dies in your place." She sat rocking her body back and forth fresh blood plastering her red-brown hair to her face and running down her cheeks. "I never understood what she meant.... Red hot tears... would you understand such nonsense?"
Her fingers ran repeaditly through the blood soaked hair of the only other in the room. "Your cold. Here, I'll cover you up," she pulled a blanket to her and wrapped it around his motionless body. "Did you know insanity runs in my family? G'ma said we're cursed. My G'ma's sister killed lotsa people, sad huh? She said that her G'ma did it too... guess it skips a generation."
Still her fingers ran through the hair, now too blood soaked to even know it's color. "I love you, we'll be together forever. You wont ever leave me, will you? If I go insane... You wont leave me, right?"
She pulled her hand up to run it through her own hair, a habbit she had when she was nervous. Blood dripped off her chin onto his pale face as she rested her hand back onto his chest.
"You remember yesterday? It was so sweet, you brought me brakefast in bed, and even a rose. I still have the rose in my hair... I even showered with it." She laughed nervously. "Then you said you had a suprise for me, but, that I had to wait for it. I was so excited, I couldnt wait to find out what it was."
Her body was rocking again, back and forth, back and forth, his emotionless head rested on her lap. "We spent the whole day together, you and me, watching tv, a walk through the park, shopping in the mall, even hot chocolate by a fire, snuggled up together like we were meant to be, just you... and me." Her body relaxed into a sigh. "But, no suprise... so naturally I decided to investigate...
"I stayed home from work today, decided I'd fallow you around see what I could dig up... You left the house and went out for coffee.
"When you left the coffee shop you went browsing around your usual areas... Then you came home... It was four o'clock by that time." She looked up at the grandfather clock her mother had given her as a house warming gift, it read fifteen till five.
"Not that long ago." She smiled back down at him dripping more blood down his face.
"about five minutes later she came, the girl with the platnum blonde hair and blue eyes. I hate her on sight, but, I trust you to get rid of her. 'Go on, send her away from my house' I told you from my place in the car, of corse, you didnt hear me.
"But, instead of sending her on her way, you wrapped your arm around her and lead her inside, you even locked the door behind you!" Her body started shaking as she glared down at him.
"I was furious, this whole time, you were cheating on me, with that blonde haired bimbo, a whore like her, over me!" Her hand moved swiftly, colliding into his face and leaving a stinging sensation up her arm.
"He wouldnt do that... I thought this as I walked to the door and unlocked it. I'd suprise you with an early day home from work, so I went in and fallowed your voice into the living room 'I cant wait until the wedding' you said as I walked in the door 'all i have to do is get rid of a few loose ends and our life together will be perfect, just us.' I couldnt belive my ears you were talking like that to another woman, who was sitting so close to you on the love seat, holding an engagement ring. You really were cheating on me. She poisoned you, I had to save your soul. You were tainted with lies and being pulled away from me. I had to get you back."
Tears flowed down her face in rivers watering down the red goo on her skin. "I didnt mean to go so hard on you, and she got away, the demon escaped, but, dont worry baby. I'll stay with you forever. Wait just a few more minutes, I promise. I wont let you fall into another demon trap."
Her hand fell to her side hitting cold metal, she wrapped her fingers around the object and pulled it infront of her face. "Slicked in red hot tears, this poor blade, I'll help it. The tears are alone, your tears... I'll give them company, I'll have yours with mine... forever."
Light gleamed a clean area on the blades surface as she stealthfully flipped it into both hands and buried it into her chest.
"With my list breath, I, Karyn Lyona Smoke, forgive your sins, and pledge my eternal devoted love to you." She kissed his cold lips then slid down ontop of him, breathless.
Two lovers, two bodies, one pool of blood, and a ring in the middle of the blood. Ingraved on the inside of this blood soaked ring reads 'Karyn and Shane, Love Eternally.'
~END!
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