Wednesday, August 10, 2005

   YAY FIRST CHAPTER OF MY NEW STORY!!

WHOO I FINISHED THE FIRST CHAPTER OF MY NEWEST STORIES. Alright since I'm posting it up I'll you it's called "I'll Always Love You" and you may now read it. ENJOY!!

I'll Always Love You

Summary: Living in a town that forbids love between two people of the same gender can be hard especially if you're a noble prince. Hakkai's is noble prince, Sanzo's a jealous rival prince, Gojyo's a poor rogue, and Goku is Sanzo's loyal servant. When Hakkai is forced to marry he runs away to clear his mind and he meets Gojyo and instantly falls for him leaving Sanzo incredibly jealous. Now he has to deal with his arrange marriage and Sanzo who’s out to kill.

(Disclaimer: I don't own Saiyuki...unfortunately)

Chapter 1: The Announcement

Hakkai was staring out of the window in his room at the rain falling. He alway hated the rain it always brought terrible things.

His thoughts were interrupted when he hear knocking then the door slowly opened as footstep made their way in.

"My lord, your father wished to see you right now." the figure said in a serious tone.

Hakkai turned to see his advisor Houli, a 19 year old, fair skin with long dark hair girl with sapphire blue eyes dressed in her uniform.

(AN: Isn't Houli young to be Hakkai's advisor ah who cares it's a story anything could happen but she also plays other roles in this story like his servant, protector, and most importantly his friend.)

"What is it that he wants now?" he asked in a slightly irritated manner.

Houli's face soften a bit but still remained serious.

"I asked your father and all he told me was that it was personal family matters and that it was none of my concern."

"Typical of him to do that I apologies for my father's rude behavior yet again." Hakkai said as he sighed and walked over to Houli.

Houli looked at Hakkai and said in a reassuring tone, "Please my lord, you don't have to apologies for your father's actions." she then said in a quiet voice, "But what surprises me is that your father and yourself looks so much alike and yet unlike your father who is cold and heartless you're so caring heartwarming."

Hakkai smiled, "You know you shouldn't be so serious all the time smile once in a while."

"Yes, my lord." Houli said as she spoke.

"Another thing you are my advisor and also my servant but you're too formal with me so from now on you may address me by my first name you may only call me "my lord" around my father and other important people." Hakkai said with another smile.

Houli nodded as she led Hakkai to his father's office. She knew that if she every called Hakkai by his first name in front of his father she would be scolded on how she is below Hakkai(AN: Technically, she may be his advisor but she's still a servant so she must address Hakkai with the respect of a noble prince.) and must always address him with respect.

As they walked through the long hallway Houli spoke again, "Say Hakkai may I call you Hakkai-sama also?"

"Sure if you like." Hakkai said as Houli opened the door for him to his father's office.

"Sir I've brought Hakkai to you as you'd wish." Houli said in her serious tone as she bowed then turned to leave but was stopped when his father called her name.

"Houli I want you to make sure that nobody disturbs us and do not let anybody in do you understand?" he said sternly.

Houli nodded and left the room to stand guard outside in front of the door.

He looked over at Hakkai then sat down at his desk and motioned Hakkai to sit in front of him.

"Sit down."

Hakkai sat down in front of his father and watched him for a moment before speaking.

"What is it that you wanted to talk to me about?"

Hakkai and his father looked and acted almost alike their expression were the same and they almost looked the same except his father was taller, his hair was a little longer, and his eyes were a dark brown.

(AN: Hakkai's father is probably based on Kubota Makoto from Wild Adapter so he may be known as Lord or King Makoto and he's actually his stepfather but I just made Hakkai call him father since he doesn't know his real one)

His father took a deep breath before he spoke his reason for bringing him here.

"As you know Hakkai you're twenty-two years so I think it within my jurisdiction that you get married sp I have chosen a woman to become your wife."

(AN:Usuallya princeis probably around 18 when he has to marry well from what I think but I've decide to keep the main charactersoriginal ages.)

Hakkai looked enraged as he stood up so fast that he knocked the chair over.

"HOW COULD YOU MAKE SUCH A DECISION WITHOUT MY KNOWLEDGE LET ALONE MY CONSENT?"

He then banged his hands on the desk and continued harshly, "I don't even know what this woman looks like or in fact even know her at all and you expect me to marry her."

"HAKKAI YOU WILL NOT SPEAK TO ME IN SUCH A WAY YOU ARE THE SON OF ROYALTY SO I EXPECT YOU TO ACT LIKE IT AND YOU WILL MARRY AND TAKE OVER AND THAT'S FINAL!"

'Then maybe I don't want to be apart of royalty.' Hakkai thought angrily.

Outside, Houli could hear Hakkai and his father arguing again as she stood in front of the two wooden doors but couldn't clearly make out what they're talking about since the doors were thick.

'I wonder what they're arguing about now?' she thought with concern.

Her thoughts were interrupted when she saw a woman with chocolate brown hair that was in a braid resting on the left side of her head, emerald green eyes, and was wearing a yellow dress walked up to her while carrying an umbrella.

(AN: I'll give you three guesses on who this woman looks like. If you're too dense to figure it out I'll tell you at the end)

"I'm sorry but I'm afraid that the king has asked not to let anybody in his office at the moment." Houli said with genuine sympathy.

The woman smiled then pulled out a note and said in a kind yet soft voice.

"I have a note from the King Makoto himself saying he wanted to see me at this time but I'm sure I can come back at a later time if I am disturbing something."

Houli took the note confused that the king didn't tell her about someone coming to visiting and read for a moment then looked at the woman and nodded as she said politely.

"One moment while I note the king of your arrival."

She slowly opened the door and walked in hesitantly, "Excuse me sire but you have a visitor with a..." but before she could finish he started to yell.

"Didn't I tell you not to let anybody disturb us including you?"

Houli looked shaken as she spoke in a shaking voice, "M...my apologies sire but she had a hand written note from you saying you wanted to see her."

She held the note out and flinched when he snatched it out of her hand then she backed away and stood next to Hakkai as he read it.

The king looked surprised by the note then turned to Houli.

"I'm sorry for my rude behavior earlier please send her in."

Houli said as she bowed, "Yes sire."

She then went back to the door, "You may come in."

The woman smiled as she walked in, "Thank you so kindly"

The king looked happy as if the angry words between him and Hakkai were never exchanged.

"It's so wonderful to see you again and you look especially lovely today as you always do." he said kindly as he bowed and kissed her hand.

The woman giggled as she did a curtsy for him, "Why thank you for the wonderful compliment," she then looked over at Hakkai and smiled, "It's especially nice to make your acquaintance Cho Hakkai-dono."

"Likewise and who may you be?" Hakkai said with a smile only Houli could tell wasn't real.

"Hakkai, meet Azora the woman you'll soon marry."

TO BE CONTINUED...

WHOO ANOTHER STORY! This is the third story I'm working on out of my twenty other story hahaha. Anywayz if you can't guess who the woman Hakkai's has to marry looks like I'll tell you. I've based her to look sorta of like Hakkai's sister Kannan. Anywayz as I write this story it sorta of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet in a way. Alright here's a preview of the next chapter. In the next chapter Hakkai talks with Houli about his arrange marriage and that his father is throwing a huge party to let everybody know about the wedding so he sends Houli out into the town to invite everybody. The she runs into a poor rogue Gojyo and she tells him that he could try and come but he won’t be able to get in. So he decides to crash it where Hakkai and himself have their first meeting and share their first kiss (Gojyo comes in a disguise so Hakkai wouldn’t know it's him until he meets him again in the third chapter). Don't miss out on the next chapter where you get to meet Sanzo, Goku, and Gojyo in "The Party: Hakkai and Gojyo's First Meeting"


Hakkai and Gojyo

Hakkai and Gojyo Sanzo and Goku
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