Friday, October 6, 2006

splee
ok......i'll post short comment and long story...k? i did get color walk and it is cool!! um....i'm running late so here is the story....


When they got to the island, they were surprised to find that it was mostly one large mountain. There was a large cave covered in ivy not too far inland. So the crew got their stuff together and headed in. Nami and Yumi held the torches. Michiyo and Usopp held the packs. Most of the crew was silent as they made their way through the tunnel. But as they went a little farther, the tunnel began to widen out. “What the?” Nami held the torch in front of him. There were two separate tunnels leading opposite ways deeper into the cave. “Now what?” Chopper asked. “We split up.” Nami said looking around. Michiyo wondered over to the side of the cave. There was writing on the walls. She was trying to read it when Luffy shouted. “Hey! Look what I found!” Michiyo’s eyes bulged as she whipped around. “No Luffy!!!” Luffy found a button on the wall and had pressed it.
The ground started shaking and rocks began to fall from the ceiling. They kept falling until there was a solid wall of Rock separating the crew. Once the dust cleared, Sanji yelled “everyone ok?” there were a few groans. “Now what?!” they heard Usopp yell. “I guess we have no choice but to go on!” Yumi shouted back. “Just try to get to the end of the tunnel; we’ll meet you guys at the end!” Nami instructed them. “Got it!” Sanji and Yumi yelled at the same time. “Where’s Meesh?” Yumi asked as she turned around. Her answer came in the form of a groan. Michiyo stood from a pile of rubble with a bloody gash in her head. Zoro stood up dusting himself off not 3 yards away from her. “Meesh! You ok!?” Michiyo felt her head. “Yea, ‘ill live.” She said forcing a smile. “Wait, weren’t you over there when the earthquake hit?” Sanji asked. Michiyo looked over at Zoro. “I guess I just panicked.” There was an awkward silence. “Well, let’s go.” Michiyo stood up and headed down the tunnel. Zoro just picked up her pack and followed. Yumi looked at Sanji who just shrugged.
As they walked, the path got curvy. They kept walking until they came to a large room. Michiyo cautiously walked to the far end. There was no way to go on. Just a solid wall with writing on it. “What’s it say?” Yumi asked. “It’s pretty faded.” Michiyo replied. “Nice going Michiyo! Right into a brick wall!!” Zoro shouted. “Hey you try finding a way outa here!” Michiyo yelled back. “Whoa guys cool it! Time out! Michiyo, you go over there and Zoro over there!!” Sanji stopped them. Michiyo let out an angry sigh and stormed off. Yumi followed. “What’s up with you guys!?” she whispered. “It’s nothing!” Michiyo shot back. “Michiyo….” “Don’t Michiyo me!” she turned around and rubbed her temples. “Ok. Don’t tell me what’s going on between you two. At least tell me what happened with the cave in. I know something happened.” Michiyo was quiet for awhile. Finally she spoke. “A piece of falling rock was about to hit Zoro so I pushed him out of the way…” she said looking down. “Well he sure has one heck of a way to show his appreciation!’ Yumi said annoyed. Michiyo looked for something to change the subject. Her eyes wondered until something caught her eye. “Hey, what’s this?” Michiyo looked to one side of the wall. Enlarged in a large crack was an old looking flute. Michiyo carefully pulled it out. All of a sudden, the walls began to close in around them. “Good job Michiyo!” Zoro yelled. “Of all the people to get stuck with.” Michiyo said under her breath. “What was that!?” Zoro shouted, turning around. “Ok! Now’s not the time to be fighting! We need to get out of here!” Yumi yelled at both of them. “Look!” Sanji pointed to something on the wall. There was what looked like a series of musical notes. “Maybe you need to play them on this.” Michiyo held up the flute. “Well hurry!” Zoro screamed as he tried to push one of the walls away. Michiyo studied the wall intently. She then raised the flute to her lips, as she began to play, all other noise ceased. As soon as she completed the few bars of music, the walls stopped moving. Then, the wall in front of them opened. It led into a long tunnel with a light at the end of it. Michiyo looked down at the flute. “Wow.” Yumi stepped forward she began to walk into the tunnel. “Head toward the light…” Sanji said in a creepy tone. He started laughing and Yumi hit him playfully. “Hey Yooms! What is that!?” Michiyo flicked what looked like a spider off Yumi’s arm. Yumi screamed and jumped back. On her arm was a purplish bump. “EW…” Michiyo said as she looked at it. “I think we have bigger problems!” Zoro said as he pointed ahead. A large dark crowd of red eyes was crawling towards them. “What are they!?” Sanji asked. “There…there…..too ADORABLE!!!!” Michiyo and Yumi squealed. The little creatures came into view. They looked like little cats. “Welcome!” said one of them. “Awwww!” said Yumi and Michiyo at the same time. “Yes, welcome to our paradise!” the four looked up to see a lean, shadowy figure approach. When he was close enough, they could see he had dark wavy hair, sharp clothing and spoke with a thick accent. When he caught sight of Michiyo, his heart jumped. He stared intently at the flute in Michiyo’s pocket. “Allow me to introduce my self; I am Jack- Pierre (sexy Frenchman) at your service!” He paused and took a step towards Michiyo. “And who might you be?” he took her hand and kissed it gently. Michiyo blushed and took a step back into Zoro. She glared at him and took a step forward again. “I’m Michiyo and this is Yumi and Sanji.” Zoro nudged her hard. “And Zoro.” She replied hastily. “Ah, well, now that introductions are out of the way, let me show you around.”
Jack hastily led them out of the tunnel into the blinding light. Once heir eyes got adjusted, they saw they were in the midst of a beautiful utopia. “Many years ago I stumbled into this beautiful place and discovered these creatures. Being the first human they ever saw, they made me their king!” Jack told them. “The king of cats. How manly.” Zoro said under his breath. Michiyo stepped on his foot to make him shut up. “Hey watch it mew!” Michiyo looked down to see one of the little cat creatures. “Oh I’m sorry!” Michiyo bent down and examined her tail. Michiyo took a little piece of ribbon she found and tied it around her tail like a bandage. “Is that better?” the little kitten swooshed her tail around and smiled. “Yessie! Thanks muchly mew!” the little critter then scurried off. Michiyo looked up to see jack staring at her. He blinked a few times then continued with the tour. “Ah! Madame Yumi! What happened here!?” he pointed to her bite. “Oh, just a pesky bug.” She replied casually. Jack looked a little weird but shook the feeling. “My, my, you all look so worn and tired! It is getting late. Why don’t you all retire at my palace for the night?” “Well we should be…” Zoro tried to say. But, Michiyo stopped him. “We’d be glad to.” She replied with a forced smile. Zoro sighed angrily and rolled his eyes. Sanji was about to say something, but Yumi stopped him. “You don’t wanna get involved.”

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