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Sunday, February 24, 2008


I need some help
Dear Friends and the various family members,



Okay *rubs hands together* Sooooooo, as you "might" know, I love to write. And currently I haven't written anything in about 6 monthes, and to be honest I miss it dearly. So over the last course of this month I've been attempting to build a world from the ground up, politics, customs, languages, cities, and ect; the wonderful advantage of doing something as such is that you have now created an entire world, a world in which there are many tales waiting to be told. It's much easier then sitting there and creating a new world from scratch everytime you write a new story.



Well, okay, so I'm not even entirely done with mapping out Absicse (the name I chose for the realm I'm creating) but last night I couldn't take it anymore and I began to write (best feeling in a LONG TIME -_-').



And that brings me to the reason for this email.



Like the subject says, I need help. I've resolved to not post this one online, not even after it's complete, so that's where I'm hopeing ya'll will come in.



Every writer needs someone that will help then and gives suggestions after reading what has been written. So I was wondering if anyone would like to do that for me.



If not, just don't reply to this email, and ignore it ^^



If so though, please reply saying whatever it is you want to say and I'll go ahead and send you the first thousand words to look over.





Respectfully,

K.



P.S.



As I'm thinking now, some of you might want to know what it's about before you agree to anything, well never fear, I shall tell you ~_O



Our tale start in the central city of Fides in the realm of Absicse. Fides is dangerously graced upon the out fringes of the dreaded Grimmagill Forest, and in the Year of the Sea and Ice (just their form of era's, they say year of so and so and that normally has something to do with the tangible conditions of life in Absicse, in this case, it is also the Time of secrets). our lead character is a roaming-becoming-of-age Male, named Alfric Cailean Cabhan (there's supposed to a little ' above the h in his last name because it's Irish, but I have seemed to not be permitted to do that on the computer), Alfric'c name holds consequence simply because his last name means Hollow.



And the hollow silence that inhabits the silence of life is stirring, something that hasn't happened in over 6 generations, and Alfric can hear it, he can hear the whispers of destiny in the silence when he steadies beating of his own heart.



So as you can imagine, he has to go on this huge adventure around the realm and earn himself the title Life Giver....... Did I forget to tell you all the name of the story?



okay well it's titled: Chronicled Days of the Life Giver in the Court OF Kings.



Live Giver becomes Alfric'c title, and the Court of Kings is not a court, but infact a rather large academy.



And on that note, I should include a little bit of Alfric's background.



He is a non-awakened physic vampire. Which means that he drains the energy of others unknowingly. Which also means he doesn't have many friends since whenever someone is around his long enough they become irritated and tired and very unhappy (poor Alfric -_-').



So you may be asking how it would be possibly for Alfric to gain the only title of Life Giver, when in reality he infact steals life, well you'll just have to read it won't cha? Ehehehehe.... Well thats it for now, this kind of ran longer then I wanted it to, but I hope to hear from some of you soon.

P.P.S._________________________________________

This has been copied and pasted, so if you would like to respond to this just simply message me, and if your myo won't let you send messages to me then you can contact me at spiker32@msn.com

Later,
Ak

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