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Saturday, December 31, 2005


PART 1
A young Adrian Webster stands with his riffle aimed at a fow of blindfolded Vietnamese men as his colenol speaks with his general. The colenol turns to Adrian and the rest of the soldiers who hold the Vietnamese men dead to right.
COLENOL-(muttering)We're going to
burn for this.(screams)
Fire!
Thirty-seven years later, Adrian Webster sits in his lounge chair watching a rerun of M.A.S.H. His wife throws Adrian's shoes on him as she walks up to him, carrying her keys.
MRS.WEBSTER-We're going out. Get
your shoes on.
At the grocery store Adrian and Mrs.Webster each carry a basket.
MRS.WEBSTER-Now,Adrian,I need YOU
to find two gallons of
low fat milk, low fat
butter, and 3dozen eggs.
We've got an army to
feed tomorrow.
Mrs.Webster then turns to a fow of cans and begins to examine them carefully. Adrian Webster walks over to the dairy isle.
ADRIAN-(talking to himself)An
army...
He picks up a bucket of low fat butter, and sees a figur in his parifial vision. He looks to his left and sees one of the blindfolded Vietnamese men with a blood drenched forehead.The Vietnamese man starts to speak in an illegible dialect. Adrian flashe back to the Vietnam War. He stands in front of a village covered in flames. Soldiers lead Vietnames women and children to a Hum Vee, and others leading Vietnames men in shackles. The colenol orders them to halt. He then calls to Adrian.
COLENOL-Webster! Get yer sorry be- hind over here!
Adrian runs over to the officer, and salutes.
ADRIAN-Yes sir!
COLENOL-Command wants us to line
these men up and put them
out of their missery. Get
to it!
ADRIAN-What missery,sir?
The General comes over to interupt.
GENERAL-Are you talking back to
your commanding officer?
These short squinty-eyed,
jibberish talkin little
bastards killed at least
ten good men each. Their
missery would be me
personaly torchering them
to death one at a time! But
I don't want to be cort-
marshaled, so get rid of
the timptation and kill
these Asian monsters!!
ADRIAN-Sir,what about their wives
and children?
COLENOL-They will be given a proper
funeral, afterwards.
GENERAL-(to colenol)The hell they
will!(to Adrian)Soldier,if
you ask one more question,
we'll blindfold YOU
instead!
Adrian comes back to the present,the Vietnamese man still there. He drops ther groceries he's holding and falls to the ground in terror. The Vietnames man puts his hand on Adrian's shoulder and repeats the same illegible words. Adrian quickly jerks away.
ADIRAN-What do you want? Why are
you here? Are you one of
the...that I...
The Vientames man starts to take off his blindfold as he fades away. A woman stands behind where the Vietnamese man was.
WOMAN-I'm sorry? Do I know you?
Adrian quickly gathers himself and returns to his wife.
MRS.WEBSTER-Honey? You didn't get
anything I asked you.
ADRIAN-I'm sorry. I-I just feel a
little light headed. I'll be
in the car if you need me.
MRS.WEBSTER-All right, Adrian.
As Adrian leaves the building the blindfolded Vietnamese man appears behind Adrian(his blindfold back on) and places his hand on Adrian's shoulder. Adrian turns to face the man and backs away.
ADRIAN-You...stay away from me!
He runs away from the Vietnamese man. As he runs through the parking lot,he is hit by a Semi-Truck. As Adrian's life escapes his body, he sees he Vietnamese man crack a smile. Adrian closes his eyes and the voices of a gathering crowd. Suddenly, he no longer feels pain or the blood ruch from his body. Instead he feels an astranged scence of joy and sadness at once. He feels as light as a feather,yet as weighed as a boulder. So, he opens his eyes. All he can see is a cloudy sky. He then sits up and realizes that he is floating. Below him,Adrian sees a group of paramedics rushing Adrian's body into an ambulance. His wife is crying a fiver, while another paramedic tries to comfort her.
ADRIAN-What on earth is going on?
DEATH-Your dead.
Adrian looks above him, and sees a white skined woman with golden hair, and blood red eyes. She gives him a big smile and floats down to his level.
DEATH-You're as dead as a tree
stump.^^



And that concludes part one. We hope you guys enjoyed it. Believe us when we say there's much more to come.

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